Traveling Through Time to Cultivate Immortality: I Have the Spiritual Jade of Enlightenment

It looks good. I feel that daily life needs to be reduced by half, and the process of refining the formation flag should be written a little bit. For example, how to depict the formation pattern. The most important thing is that life scenes and irrelevant things should be greatly reduced. It is verbose. I feel that the description of the fighting scenes can be written more.

This book is very nice

Ingenious idea and worth collecting