Star Iron: Envoy of Fertility? Who? Me?

Different paths lead to the same new plot, proper protection and not pushover, amazing words to develop the team, courageous and resourceful mother lineage. It looks great and I love watching it. I wait for updates every day [Cool]

The writing is good and the content is exciting, but it's a bit too lily-oriented to look at and makes me feel uncomfortable [face covering] There is a book review below that says it's a male video book. I don't know where to read this. But it's still Lei Baihe. Fortunately, the content is not much, and the flaws can't be concealed.

It's a rare novel that doesn't overwhelm the protagonist's combat power and ability. It's enjoyable throughout. I hope the author can keep it up.

It's awesome, and the protagonist's image is very charming. It neither weakens the historical level of combat power nor ruins the plot content because the protagonist's combat power is too strong. The protagonist is like a powerful and loving guide, a golden legend whose fate comes once every ten thousand years.

It's not bad, but there are too many plots at the beginning, which are basically the same as the game. It's a bit boring to watch. I suggest you get some different plots.

The grasp of the character is really good. So far, I have only seen the fairy boat, but I can still be amazed. His philosophy is different from ordinary villains. He is truly practicing his own destiny. Even when he finally dissipates, it corresponds to the death of a whale and the creation of all things. I really enjoyed reading it. I feel that the author's creation of villains is very similar to MiHoYo. They are not just villains who do evil for the sake of doing evil, but they are both practicing their own ideas. At that time, they also believed that their ideas were not wrong. I am Suihu and I am Eternal.

Four stars is too high for fear of being targeted. I don't know how many people are like me. When they come across a book they like, they don't dare to read it. They are afraid that they will support it to death again, and they will either be banned or discontinued, so they have to read it from the beginning [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Looking at the movement, Xianzhou should be the first to have fun. Most people come to read books for fun. The distribution of plot rhythms seems to be actually good. Yaliluo can write such a long story, so it makes no sense that Xianzhou would be short. However, this also causes the pace of this book to change relatively slowly. Because the update is relatively short compared to the length of the plot, it is difficult to watch and enjoy. Just keep it up. It would be better if there were more updates.

I give it four stars. Let me think about how to put it. It is overall very good, the plot is good, the characters are okay, and there are many advantages. It is considered to be a very good type of writing in Bengtie novels. However, some places are a bit too much, such as too much narration of psychological activities. There are too many psychological activities and they are written directly and directly. Many times it will make people feel that it cannot keep up with the rhythm or is weird. I can't explain why it is weird. Also, sometimes when writing, I suddenly switch to another topic. It is not the kind of changing the topic, but suddenly inserting something describing a point when describing a thing. This is the same as before, and it feels too wrong. If I were to make an analogy, it would be like I read a comment by Qin Shimingyue before. In the sixth season of Qin Shimingyue, it is clear that the peasant family can solve the problem in a few words, but the secret is to write out how the peasant family was born and the conflicts between the peasant family and so on. Well, I actually don't know how to describe it, but it's roughly like this. Overall it's good, but there are some places where I'm more sensitive and pay too much attention, maybe?

The setting is novel. It was the first time I saw the train in the history of the Fengfeng Order. And she is also the daughter of a pharmacist. It's also very beautiful ⸜(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝⋆*

The writing is very good. It has made up for some regrets. It is just that sometimes it is a little organized and not very clear. However, it is a harmless read. I still prefer to read this kind of content with small regrets and happy endings.

Doesn't the protagonist's world have a Star Dome Railway in this game? Or has she never played?

I feel that the author has a good grasp of the concept of destiny and the character's personality. I really like the sudden part, and the writing rhythm is also very comfortable!

Can you give the heroine a wife? [Learned]

In fact, the description of this character is very close to MiHoYo's planning. There is no absolute villain, which is the best thing about writing. I really beg you, please add a few more chapters. After raising it for so long, I have a total of nine chapters. Dude, you can't just memorize one chapter of a medical book. 666 You don't write it because you're afraid of being backstabbed in the plot, right? As long as I write slowly enough, the plot is always ahead of me.

This book is well written. The structure of the protagonist is generally good, and the character's combat power is not compromised. But there are mainly the following problems. The first one is about the plot. In the plots before Pirokanni, it can be said that the existence of the protagonist is not that important or has little impact, and a lot of the original plots are used. The plot related to the protagonist is also relatively sketchy. To cite a few obvious examples, the first one is the plot treatment of Clara, and the second one is in Fairy Boat and Luofu. The existence of the protagonist in the early plot is not very obvious. This is not to say that the protagonist is not described, but that even if the protagonist is there, the outcome may be good, but what should happen still happens. But the plot after Luofu obviously got better. The second one is about giving eyeballs to stars. There was some description of this in the early stage, but there was no description at all in the later stage. It also made some people feel that giving power to others for no reason was considered a poisonous point. How can I put it, in fact, it is fine not to describe this eyeball, and it has no impact on the plot at all. The third is that the protagonist is always worried, or has the protagonist's thoughts, but does not act. Maybe I didn't describe what I meant well. It's almost the same as the first point, that is, the protagonist sees the plot develop, has ideas, and then suddenly worries about something, but the plot remains unchanged. Although it fits the protagonist's character, the impression is not very good. If you want to deal with it here, you can ask the protagonist to do something that can change the plot, but will not affect anything, instead of just worrying about it. Overall, it's still a readable book. It's a little rough in the early stages, but it gets much better later on.

Actually, hunting and harvesting can go together at the same time. This is what Xianzhou does. It patrols for evil things on behalf of the sky (Lan) and provides all support including help to the foreigners in need (except for immortality)

I read the first few chapters and it was okay, but the book reviews said that the plot has not been significantly changed, so that probably doesn't mean much. It's more interesting to write something of your own, for example, have some fun every now and then, slowly step out from the framework of the original plot and write about how the protagonist changes the direction of the universe and her greatness, giving people a feeling that the greatness of the protagonist does not need to be explained. It is more powerful.

Asking, can you be more diligent? One card a day is too few [laughing and crying] I updated two chapters a few days ago and I thought the author was enlightened, but now I'm writing one chapter a day [face covering]

It's a pretty good fanfic. There's nothing magical about it. It's just that the pace is a bit slow. The author could speed up the pace appropriately [laughs]

It's rare to see a book about the orthodox Envoy of Abundance and forgetting about the plot.

Looking forward to the follow-up fairy boat chapter and Pinoconi chapter

Five stars OK. It's a decent Star Iron fanfic, and there's nothing bad about it.

Not bad, the logic is clear and the writing is also very good. It's worth reading.

I want to laugh when I think of Fengshou Lingshi appearing in Xianzhou

Overall, it's a very reasonable setting. I travel through time but don't know the plot. Elio doesn't care about the series. The narrative is smooth (although the writing is not great), and it can make up for the regret. Overall, it is quite suitable for reading, but you need to pay attention to whether the content will be seriously homogenized in the future. I have not read the Pinoconi part yet, so I will save it and review it later.

It looks good. Each villain has his own philosophy and walks firmly on the path of destiny that he understands. Just like Sui Su, would you say he is selfless and altruistic? Not really, but not necessarily. It acts according to its own ideas and fulfills its own destiny...

[Crying] Can you write more about Miss Candle and Mockingbird Mouth! This pair is tied to death

My personal senses are fine, and after reading this book, I realized that Xianzhou is not a force of a single faith. Although the general direction is faith hunting, and the generals are all Emperor Gongtian generals, in fact, it is everywhere. The Universal Wisdom Sect, the Heaven-Building Sect, the Hanquan Sect, and the political power are also Various, the Fangsheng Gang is still a believer of the Medicine Master... And the Secret Story of the Medicine King, which is far away from the main plot, seems to be a stain in the eyes of Nan Nan, who is also a follower of the Medicine Master. According to Miyoushe, the predecessor of the Hanquan Sect, which changed the Xianzhou medical system, is the Secret Story of the Old Medicine King.

It's okay. The best thing is that there are no other fics that include particularly nonsense plots or stuff [Chigua]