Tianyuan Immortal Journey

There are some minor problems, nothing serious, they do not affect reading, and the expression is not mature enough [laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry]

The characters are very awkward, but the overall outline is still good. I hope you can improve it.

Although there are some minor flaws in the early stage, it is considered passable in the world of mortals cultivating immortals, and the plot setting is okay.

After reading the following chapters about hunting monsters in the Yanlan Mountains, I felt good overall and the plot design was reasonable.

The characteristics of this book are ordinary, and the advantages are still ordinary. There are some unreasonable places, and some magical powers are not very reasonable, but the overall situation is relatively smooth. I will give it an 8 points.

Why are my ratings not displayed? Does the author know?

I only read the first 10 chapters, and it gave me the impression that it was about a small family of monks, but the protagonist didn't have a golden finger.

I just started reading a few chapters, but I haven't seen anything yet. I'll save a few more chapters and read them. The content is too little, and it's not enough to read in one day.

The content of the story needs to be studied more, and the style of other top authors needs to be learned.

The plot and outline look okay, and some elements of alien invasion can be added.

I'll give you more encouragement and produce more good-looking works. Come on.

The first few pictures look good, but there is some struggle and warmth. I can feel that everyone in the family is working hard, and some elixirs and talismans have unified grading standards. . . More updates

I finally waited for a good-looking novel about cultivating immortals, which is more in line with my taste and style. I hope to update more chapters every day.