Watching the deaths of many characters in Full Time left me with regrets. I came across these by chance recently and wanted to write about Quanfa to make up for my regrets. The protagonist Yang Bin possesses the remains of the Ten-Tails Heretic Golem, and gradually resurrects the Ten-Tails and reaches its peak.
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The pace is a bit fast. I think you want to get through the early stages quickly. It's understandable, but it's a bit sloppy and is particularly unfriendly to someone like me who listens to books. You didn't break it up into paragraphs, which makes the sentence very illogical. The subject matter is very novel. Why do you say it needs to be divided into paragraphs? Because normal people can't speak so many words in one sentence, it seems weirder the more you listen to it. The main reason is that the early stage is a bit sloppy, and the segmentation makes it difficult for me to listen. I remember that there should be some software that can help segment it, right? Like some AI or something like that
The pace feels a bit fast, but there are not many full-time mages on Tomato that are still being updated. I hope the author can keep updating [Like]
The pace is a bit fast. I think you want to get through the early stages quickly. It's understandable, but it's a bit sloppy and is particularly unfriendly to someone like me who listens to books. You didn't break it up into paragraphs, which makes the sentence very illogical. The subject matter is very novel. Why do you say it needs to be divided into paragraphs? Because normal people can't speak so many words in one sentence, it seems weirder the more you listen to it. The main reason is that the early stage is a bit sloppy, and the segmentation makes it difficult for me to listen. I remember that there should be some software that can help segment it, right? Like some AI or something like that
The pace feels a bit fast, but there are not many full-time mages on Tomato that are still being updated. I hope the author can keep updating [Like]
Very good
Women's novels slipped away
Writing style needs to be improved