God's Short-Lived Warning, the Sick and Weak Master, She Is Super Strong!

A very enjoyable book. The heroine's design is particularly ideal and belongs to the rational side. The heroine is in control and I feel comfortable. Anyway, it's this pull that makes me happy. I like that the hero has a reserve and restrains himself but can't control himself and likes the heroine. Please go see it quickly. The heroine is so strong that it should be considered a double strength. The bosses deserve to be included. [Shy][shy][shy] Am I under the impression that the ending felt rushed and plot-lined? From the introduction, I thought it was because there were too many love lines, so let's go high and low. It's worth seeing ahead

After reading it, I was filled with emotions (the following are my humble opinions. If you want to know the content of the book, please move to the main text). The people, objects and scenes in the article all have a unique balance. Most of them are told eloquently, and the plot advancement is cleverly conceived. Here are a few key words I summarized Stele of cause and effect, revision of beginning and end, book of destiny, inscription of struggle, exploration of reality and reality, search for the truth Destiny is composed of countless lines. One end is connected to the cause and the other is the effect. They are parallel or intertwined. Everyone stands on the line of their own destiny. Once you try to jump on another line, you will inevitably bear any or countless other causes and effects besides the "original destiny". Retracing the cause and effect, calculating the beginning and the end, sinking soberly... The ending is a bit hasty, probably because the author dug a hole and didn't know where to fill it, making the story line incomplete. But if you think about it from another perspective, it leaves a lot of room for imagination, and the story is still unfinished.

The writing is very good. In order to increase the rating of this book, I wanted to write a long review so that everyone can see. The plot is not a clichéd master-disciple relationship. The apprentice hides it well, but the master just doesn't notice anything in this regard. My beautiful and powerful heroine discovered something was wrong with her apprentice. The heroine is wanton and unrestrained but also has her own gentleness. She is not simply cold or as exposed as the little sun. How can I put it? She is just like the master in my mind. She will be mature but also have her own thoughts and tempers. The author's character is really well created. I look forward to the introverted apprentice going crazy and stepping on the heroine's baby xp hh

From the current point of view, I think the emotional description is very delicate. The two plots of Shen Zhiyu and others and the family affection of the Song family are superbly written and very delicate. I couldn't help but shed tears when I saw it. These emotional descriptions are so vivid and vivid. Secondly, I feel that the book may be too focused on emotional delicacy, resulting in some deficiencies in the improvement of cultivation and world framework. It is said that cross-level combat is almost difficult, which makes the strength of the heroine feel unclear. The heroine is very strong but there is no description of this aspect. I think what the author wants to write is that the heroine hides her strength because of her illness, but it seems a bit messed up. All in all, I think this book is top-notch in terms of emotional description. It's a bit vague to see the upgrade levels of fighting monsters, but it's still quite passable, although it's not finished yet [Chigua]

There is no one with such a level in this kind of writing [Blowing a kiss]

When I read more than 80 chapters, what touched me most was not the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists, but the countless immortal cultivators who were willing to sacrifice everything for the same goal of saving the common people. I was really moved. The group portrait is really well written and very touching.

After reading it, I have an indescribable feeling. The feeling Sui Ge gave me was very similar to that of senior sister Ye Su and Xi Heng. They are both good people. They have a delicate concern for the people around them, and they also have the struggle and struggle for the immortal path. They have the wisdom to check and balance the situation set by heaven in the overall situation. A book is actually a game of chess, and the first chess piece is also the last one. The whole story can be said to be a cycle and destined. Every storyline and every parallel world is a chess piece that connects the entire chess game, eventually becoming a complete chess game and a circle with a beginning and an end. They can all break the restrictions set by heaven and break through the constraints to achieve a perfect ending. Every character plays its own role and has flesh and blood. As readers, we will feel sorry for the characters who sacrificed their lives for righteousness in the book. The evil path and the righteous path are essentially the same. The pull between Sui Ge and Yin, who are both enemies and friends, also touched my heart. After reading the whole book, I felt deeply touched. I just hope that every character in the book has a perfect ending, a happy ending, and a more happy ending.

Very good looking, with a strong heroine! There is no female competition, the heroine's classmates and the heroine's apprentices are all very good, the micro-groups are like each other, and the portrayals are all three-dimensional. The author greatly cheers for him [love] [love] [love] Among the stories about a female master and a male apprentice, it should be great. I have never seen a similar plot before. I recommend it! ! !

It looks good, the writing is very good, and the environment is vividly described. The emotional description is very delicate - the male protagonist's love is warm and dark, which is different from the description in many novels. It is delicate and natural here, and many places can always draw people in. It is very touching. Family friendship or a sense of mission between strangers are all very touching and touching. It depicts many noble human qualities and is full of positive energy. Each character has a distinct personality, and they are their own protagonists. Young people are always full of energy, love, or affection. They have their own way, and they also understand good and evil clearly. Huge disadvantage: currently being serialized Hope the following article...

See Chapter 202, It's because she's too obsessed, so she's stuck here During the more than ten years I slept, I did something that changed my destiny. Dream? If you really read this, you will faint, and you will think that the previous content is just a dream that the heroine cannot accept. Her two apprentices have embarked on a predetermined destiny. After countless attempts, their destiny did not change. I didn't faint, especially when I saw someone reminding me that the heroine's memory is disappearing here to allow her to stay here better. But when I was editing this book review, I was thinking that dreams will dissipate little by little after people wake up. I feel a bit conflicted This book is very good. This kind of novel with a closed loop seems very brain-burning. I am going to read a novel with a closed loop that I finished at the beginning of this year. I feel that if I watch it again, I will taste something different. I will also review this book if I have the chance in the future. Finally, I would like to praise the author. I feel that this book is really well written. It will make me think some things🤔.

As for reading books, I am the kind of person who only picks out the ones I like, so even if I didn't fully understand it in the end, it doesn't stop me from still liking him very much. The author's writing style is really good, at least in terms of details and character creation, I think it is successful. For this reason, I put it on the top of my bookshelf. (Also... I really like the heroine and Yan... They are not enough! The master-disciple relationship is indeed the most awesome.)

I have been reading the author's articles for a long time. Every character is flesh and blood and does not revolve around a single individual. The characters are very vivid and three-dimensional. The sense of competition and destiny is very strong. The writing style is not gorgeous, it feels a bit like "vernacular writing". But it makes people easily immersed in it and has a strong sense of immersion. The author is very top-notch in this category, and the writing is really good. But every time I read the author's articles, the ending always makes people feel rushed, except for Yinze's article, which is relatively satisfactory. Perhaps this is also the author's writing style. It may also be that its starting point is too high, and the ending will always make people feel a little disappointed. But there is no denying that she is a very good author, and this is also a very good article. The author's worldview, overall view, and sense of fate are all very impressive, and some of the detailed descriptions are also very good. If you are a reader who really wants to read a Dzogchen type of article, I suggest you not to read it, because you will be very disappointed and sad after reading it. Because I have read several of the author's articles, and I have now accepted her ending style. Her ending is not very satisfactory, except for the article about the divine fox. The writing style is also very good, and there are many golden sentences. Another book that is also recommended to readers is Bu Yu Yan. The author's articles always make me love and hate them. Every time I read them, I am disappointed and hate them. But there is no meal replacement. The writing is really good. I have read her articles twice or three times.

I feel that the best thing is that there is no villain in it. It is not the same old plot where the hero and heroine defeat the villain in the end of most articles. The latter part of the article always feels confusing when I read it. As I read it slowly, I realize that it is reversal and reversal. I feel that the author is very good at clarifying the order of the three transactions with Apocalypse, and being able to express that there is no confusion. The final ending of the article is directly sublimated. I particularly like the characters of the male and female protagonists. Who knew that my wrist was hooked by a little snake? I have been reading the novel for seven or eight years and am one of the few who has finished it. After reading more than 200 chapters, I am still a bit unfinished. I am looking forward to the author's next work.

When I watched it, I rated it 7.5, Which is too low. I've read Chapter 70 and can't wait to comment and rate it. The author's writing style is very delicate, which is rare in Tomato. Maybe I'm a ceremonial person, but I think the ceremonial is smooth but not greasy, very touching, and the imagery is simply beautiful. The rating is too low, and not many people read it. I rarely put the completed novels I have read on my bookshelf, but I put this one away. Worth.

The interweaving of time and space in this book, with the future and the past forming a closed loop, makes people marvel at the wonder of fate. Suige is free-spirited but very protective of those around him, which also gives his young apprentice a chance. He was an ancient demonic snake, and the karma with her was planted in ancient times. She and he were destined to be entangled. She also indulged him and acquiesced to everything. The only shortcoming is that there are relatively few emotional lines and the ending is a bit too fast. I always feel like I haven't seen enough haha. The other supporting characters are also well portrayed and have flesh and blood. The ending is also very happy [note]

The story is really exciting, but I wish the author wasn't so cryptic in his narration. It may not be coherent when reading, which leads to a low rating for this book. Because I have seen a story before that was even more mysterious than this one, and people who watched it were so angry that they had no idea what it was about. So it was okay when I read this book

It's great! The new article about cultivating immortals is as great as ever [Like]

It's super, super good-looking, and the writing is also very good [Like][Like] I started watching it last night, but I felt emmm that the progress of the heroine's emotional line was a bit slow. Maybe I read too many quick articles, and the emotional line was a bit unexciting. It's very, very beautiful [like] [like], especially after everything was explained clearly in the finale, I was really shocked, every link is connected, I love the writing style so much, the male and female protagonists are kind of silent but their love is flowing silently, keep reading, The front may feel a bit foggy, but this is also a preparation for the final finale. Oh my god, it's really beautiful [like] [like] [like] There is a lot of suspense in the front, and the more you look at the back, the better it looks [like] [like] [like] [love] [love] [love]

This book not only hit my xp hard, but also allowed me to see the persistence and uniqueness of each character. I have a lot of staying power after reading it. It is really good to read [cry] [cry] I can say that this is my favorite book for a bookworm for 10 years.

Who knows? The plot is really well written [crying] I think this story revolves around the female protagonist. The male protagonist can avoid lightning on his own. In fact, the emotional line does not occupy much. This is the only flaw. It does not have very cliché plots, such as forced marriage and robbery, and the kind of locked up in a small dark room. Even if it is love, the male protagonist is restrained from beginning to end. And the character of the female protagonist is also very suitable to my liking, because I, the female protagonist, do not abuse her heart or body. I don't have a tragic life experience, I have talent and hard work, I have a good master, senior brothers and sisters, and I also have very good friends. This is Sui Ge who is surrounded by love. I think the main plot is how the heroine saves the world [laughs] (bushi) Although the author did not write much about the story behind the male and female protagonists, I think Sui Ge should pay off the love debt [Thinking]

Wow wow wow, it looks good. School is about to start.

Watch it, watch it, watch it, watch it, watch it, especially the part about Song Tang. I cried when I watched it. In order to save his brother, the brother went to the city lord alone and used his own golden elixir to exchange for his brother's survival. It was well written, and I burst into tears [crying][crying][crying][crying]

，，，[]！ Let's take a step back! Teacher, can you really not eat, drink, sleep, go to work, and just update books? ! ! Of course not! ! ! I'm just a big one! What to do if you faint from hunger! ! !

It's very interesting to read. The ideas, characters, images and psychological descriptions are very good. I also like the author's writing style very much. The male protagonist's restrained yet turbulent love in the early stage is well expressed. The pull between the protagonists is also described in detail. I like this article very much, please support the author [please update]

It's really super good-looking. Although there are some riddles in the process, after reading it slowly, you will find that a lot of foreshadowing has been laid. The more you read, the more you can understand the foreshadowing. The more you read, the better. I don't know why the score is so low, but I really think this article is very good, but the final emotional line ends a little too hastily.

The description is very delicate, the plot is very attractive, and it is not cliche. The ending is a bit hasty and sudden, but overall it is still an excellent book. I recommend it. I suggest that the author can write more about the follow-up. Like, like, like.

It's really good-looking, and the life-changing text written in big letters is really awesome, although it's a bit not so straightforward. The question is, how can we know the direction of destiny so clearly when we are in the fate, so I think the big letters are very good, it's really awesome, but I feel like I haven't reviewed the level 6 yet. It's the end of the term again and I really can't open any more novels [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

I really like the author's writing, ⛽️

I don't know why the rating of such a beautiful book is so low [I almost cried] I was so touched. I lay in bed and wiped my tears while reading orz. The foreshadowing I laid in the early stage has also come true. It is different from the kind of "brainless" novels where you can know the plot direction after reading it. This one makes you think involuntarily while reading. This is really commendable. The book is very beautiful. I look forward to the new book [Blow Kiss]

Sure enough, the big book satisfies my xp very much Another very nice book It would be nice if there were more extras about Yan Lan and Sui Ge [shy] @