HP Hufflepuff's Record of Taming the Young Dark Lord

[Damp heart criticism + sunny Xi, 1V1, pure love, Tom is not very OOC at the moment, I hope there is no betrayal, deception or exploitation in the love line (bushi feels it is impossible), the heroine is very cute, everything is fine, give me He] Tom doesn't have a bad character, and he's not OOC, but he doesn't want it to turn into an egg in the later stage, ('-ωก̀). It's fine if the update is slow, and the details are controlled to taste. The current chapters of the book are not embarrassing, and there are no big surprises, as long as the heroine does not become a spoiled wife. The one I read before was about a spoiled wife + a love brain + easy to be PUA + ignore the efforts of relatives and want to get married + run with the ball, but that one made me sick. Hope this one doesn't. In this book, the heroine's character is well developed, and I hope she won't fall apart in the later stages, and will still stick to her heart, and the sun will shine brightly. Although it is difficult to make Tom give up the Horcrux just by relying on love, the details will depend on the author's practical outline. Alas, it's difficult. . .

Hello author! I really praise this book, I like it very much and it is well written. Even though I know it's impossible selfishly, I still want to say that I want the heroine and Malfoy to be together! Her gaze always follows his figure, and the way he looks at her is anything but innocent. The writing is so beautiful! The description of a two-way secret love really makes my heart move. I am grateful to have come across such a good book. It is good to read and well received. Hehehe [laughs]

I felt comfortable after reading a few chapters. It didn't feel awkward like other HP novels at the beginning, and the writing style was very mature and smooth. Tom is quite sweet, better than other Tom fans who are sweet just for the sake of being sweet. I don't know if it's be or he. I've read a lot of Tom Be's articles. Some people may be persuaded to leave the heroine academy (after all, some people like to watch Twin Snakes Academy), but I think the character of the heroine should be Badger Academy. Every college is very charming. Although Badger is always ignored, I still like this college very much. At least in the Tom fanfic, if you try to "influence" him, the real Little Sun is still happy to watch. It's so novel that I couldn't help but comment hh first.

Nice! ! ! ! Two small cakes, Cirilli and Tom 😭 It feels like Cirilli is a sweet cream cupcake, and Tom is a bitter black forest cake (it looks sweet, but actually hides a murderous intention, and is always ready to assassinate)

It looks good~ Before watching it, I was worried whether the heroine's character would be very flat, because characters like Little Sun are very popular and can be sketched out without much effort. After watching it, I felt that it was pretty good! The heroine has her own story, her own friends, and her relationship with the hero is very well described, but the story is told from the heroine's perspective, and it depicts more of the heroine's own life. She occasionally meets the hero to have a sweet moment, and the rhythm is very well controlled. It's great! The commentary is also very good. I believe some people came to read this book for Tom, but when he did bad things, the commentary did not favor him. The commentary was also very sweet when he was talking about the controversy about house elves. I really like the expression in the article. Even if they are used to being oppressed, and it is even considered to be their nature, oppression is oppression.

Super pretty! ! I'm really not exaggerating when I say that out of all the HP books I've read, this is the only one I'm still reading! Really like it! ! Cirelli is the little sun! ! The character design is really perfect! All the plots in the article are interesting and interesting, and everyone has their own characteristics! No matter who interacts with whom, it is always fun. After reading so many fan fiction authors, Abu is my favorite! I really love it! The author's emotional lines are so well written! ! I eat it very much! ! I don't think Riddle is OOC right now. The fact that Riddle invited others to the Christmas ball really showed Riddle's nature to the fullest! It just hurts Cirelli's heart so much [crying] (I'm curious whether Riddle fell in love with Cirelli first or Cirelli fell in love with Riddle first? [Thinking]) It makes me even more likely to sneer at Bush [eat melon] [smirk] Bush really smacks each other (although there is no chance for them at all. . [Crying]) Ahem, if possible, I hope the author will do more extras like accidentally eating love potions in the future [shy] [sending heart] The author will work harder [sending heart] (cough cough, is it possible that the author made a big fuss when I woke up? [Laughing]) It would be better not to stop~~ [sending heart]

It's so beautiful. I feel it's so satisfying to me. The author should write more quickly. I really can't wait. I originally wanted to save it, but in the end I couldn't help it. It's so beautiful. There are so few of them. Wow🥹 The author should write quickly [Blow kiss]

My sister is really good, kind, loyal, cheerful, and a real little sunshine! ! Damn Tom, if you don't cherish me anymore, why don't you give me your little sister, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo .........

Suddenly I thought about what if Tom didn't realize his feelings at the beginning, and then followed the same path as the original work, and betrothed the heroine to Abu Malfoy as a reward for Abu. As a result, he later understood his feelings, so Abu also died young like the original work. Who knew that the heroine fell in love with Abu in the process. This be is also very good.

It's really super invincible and explosive! The descriptions are particularly delicate, the heroine's image is very plump, and Tom doesn't feel OOC at all. In short, everything is perfect, all emotions are traceable, and the long and flowing daily life is the most beautiful, except for one thing! Boss updates too slowly, please don't update constantly! This is the best Tom fanfic I have ever seen [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It looks so good, it makes me want to eat a three-person cp [laughs]

The description of emotional details is very delicate, but not cloying, and it reads very naturally and refreshingly. The multi-party interactions and the growth of emotional lines are very beautiful. It's hard not to fall in love with quq after watching it. Through simple descriptions of actions, expressions, environments, etc., It can outline a lifelike interactive plot. Riddler often startled me with one sentence, and the emotional confrontation between the male and female protagonists made me feel bold, hahaha. In addition, the daily plot is also very rich and smooth. There are clues, foreshadowing and final interpretation of major events so you won't feel bored. It has been tied in two days. I look forward to more updates!

I can accept all OOC points, and the writing is very good, like a sweet mint. The characters in the book are very interesting, and the author simply gives them souls. When you see the name, you can immediately think of who they are. And the heroine is not a virgin, she just experiences the world with an innocent and romantic heart. The author doesn't have to worry at all. This writing style alone is enough for me! ! (I'd like to apologize first. When I first read the introduction, I almost gave up the article when I saw "The Holy Mother", but fortunately my curiosity burst out.) Although I haven't seen the author's latest update, my friend said that the plot behind it is also very exciting, which instantly gave me the courage to follow it! ! I hope it won't be unfinished (I didn't say the author would be unfinished, so I'm sorry if it offended me). It's just that the update is too slow (I've heard my friend's complaints countless times). I hope the author can speed up the update speed. I also wish my fanfic is as good as the author's! ! Keep up the good work, author, and look forward to better works from you! !

It's really good to watch. I always love reading all the stories of Ancestors. Abu and the heroine are really super cute. It's kind of relaxing, but with a little sour feeling. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the author's future extras🥰

The writing is delicate, but the emotional line is getting more and more desperate the more I read it, the more I read it the more it looks like BE [crying] [petrified], I hope I can find a suitable ending for he Come on [blow a kiss][blow a kiss]

The author's writing style is really good, and it is very emotional. At this stage, the little girl's unexplained sourness has been expressed in words. It's great. I hope you can stick to it and finish it. Come on (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑

Super beautiful, original heroine, very natural character, unlike other novels that are too tough, the writing style is very delicate and healing, I hope the author will update it soon [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

Is it normal to fall in love with Abu after watching it? [Exploration] After watching Abu, I felt that it was the kind of little thing a teenager has a crush on.

It really feels good. Tom has no OOC. The heroine's character is also very cute. The interaction with Malfoy is just adorable. The heroine is also well portrayed. She is not too romantic or too idealistic. She is relatively good. It is easy to sympathize with the heroine. The author can write more about things with Abu. It is really interesting.

It's really super good-looking, and the heroine and the hero are very compatible with each other. And the author must not stop updating [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Already tied. I'm shocked if the author dares to finish writing it in one day.

I think it's so good-looking. I hope there will be a side story like Malfoy's if line. This pair is also very cute!

I'm really into HP books recently. This book is really good. It feels so good to see the bad male protagonist being controlled by the little sun heroine. The author's writing style is very good. I really recommend reading it.

It's pretty flat in front, but it's okay when you get to Hogwarts, it's quite interesting (hey, save your life) Fire Tongs Liu Ming

Nice! I feel like Tom has no OOC at all

The writing style is not bad, and I think the sentence structure is very good, but the heroine is not written as a spoiled wife. The heroine also has her own thoughts and persistence. She is the kind of heroine who has her own independent personality that I like.

No more writing? Baby[cry][cry]

It's so cute, the heroine is really cute, the little angel [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... It's so cute. The female lead and the female lead are so cute.

It's delicious, I love it, and the rice is delicious [blowing kiss]

Baby sister is so cute!