Heike*************

There are too many inner monologues. Furthermore, when opening a company, you are looking for like-minded people, not people who are blindly questioning. If the people in your company don't understand the development of your company, what is the use of keeping this person? Furthermore, you put Shen Haowen's pretense and slap-in-the-face plot and the protagonist's own taunting skills into the book. The look and feel is too bad. It continues, the timeline is blurred, I don't know when it was written, and what the background world is. You enter the plot at the beginning without any introduction. You make people read it in a fog. What's the use?

The inner monologue is unusual and very speechless.