Crow Immortal

This book is okay. It has the same feeling as when I first started reading fantasy novels more than ten years ago. But now I can't stand the novels I read before at all. The plot of this book is well connected and the writing is smooth. It is neither clichéd nor depressing or flamboyant. Although the level of improvement is slow, it is more comfortable to read than those immortality novels. The author's writing is really good, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, but after reading more than a hundred chapters, I'm still at the fourth or fifth level of Qi training. I feel so insecure, and I'm afraid that the protagonist will die all of a sudden.

It is indeed a masterpiece that I can read to the end in one breath. I can't find any faults even if I want to pick. The statues of the cultivators are of flesh and blood. Wanchungu is the most affectionate cultivator sect I have ever seen. The protagonist does not lick it. The beauties are just right. They can bring help to the protagonist instead of dragging them down. It uses a very realistic visual description of a cultivator. In the fairy world, especially the protagonist and the sect grow up together. Wanchun Valley develops from a sect that is uncontested and stubborn and fights against foreign aggression with the protagonist. The protagonist also has three views, fights evil (demon) cultivators, and helps the lower-level mortals to act chivalrously and righteously. Ye Guxing, Master Qi, Elder Lu, Miss Yan, Bai Qi, Bai Die, every character The colors are vividly written, as well as the descriptions of various spiritual beasts. The writing style is smooth and vivid, which is really rare. I hope it can be maintained forever. When this book is finished, I look forward to continuing to publish some similar realistic themes. Don't compare it with mortals. I don't want to get the author into trouble by saying something transcendent or divine. Anyway, this book is I like reading this book very much. It is non-toxic and the plot is reasonable. It adds a bright color to my life. During the period of reading, it puts me in a good mood every day and relieves stress. This book is friendly and has many kind-hearted plots. It does not have too much cunning, cruelty and viciousness in the fairy world. It is very rare. I will read the follow-up plot after a while.

The rhythm, plot, and characters are all very well grasped. Come on, you must carefully consider the direction before you start writing. You would rather be slow, but you must not collapse. The entire system and character relationships must not be unreasonable, otherwise it will make readers uncomfortable.

It is rare to find works on immortality that are not frivolous or cunning. The positive characters are basically pure and kind, which shows that the author himself is also generous and fair-minded. The writing is a bit dry, but there are many excellent character descriptions in the article. Looking forward to the follow-up.

Recommended, Xiancao, which is rare in the world of mortals cultivating immortals, is not too violent. The characters are drawn step by step and have flesh and blood. The Wanchun Valley that the protagonist joins can be said to be a breath of fresh air in the sect that I have seen recently. He is farming and refining medicine honestly, and the senior leaders of the sect are not fools. Master Lu is a great master, which makes me very happy~ I hope to give Wanchun Valley a good ending. Although there is a high probability that it will not be saved, I hope that people can stay. The protagonist's performance is okay, acceptable and recommended [laughs]

The author is very serious, rarely makes mistakes in details, and can basically fill in all the holes he dug. The sect is united within the sect, which is both loyal to the sect and humane [Like]

Chapter 98 The author's progress is really visible to the naked eye. It's beautiful and smooth. In just a few sentences, the characters are made flesh and blood. Chapter 417: As soon as the male protagonist has some ability, he hangs out with women every day. He can't be alone. Is this a common problem in male videos? It doesn't look good, so abandon it.

Strong, super good-looking, really, no matter from the plot, character plot, or even the writing style of Tomato Writer, I personally think it is very, very, very good from the perspective of cultivating immortality. The rhythm is very suitable and soothing, and it is not as eager as this one. It is a refreshing story, but a very reasonable and progressive rhythm that fits the process of cultivating immortality, and the protagonist's control over his own golden finger is also very logical. From the plot point of view, everyone in the sect is a rare person in the world of cultivating immortals who has a true temperament and is not a greedy person. I personally like it very much, but it only scored less than nine points. I really feel that there are no good works. It is really a pity.

I've been a bookworm for 20 years, and I haven't seen such a pure cultivation novel for a long time. Although it's a bit slow, the pace is pretty good. I don't know why it's not popular, but I feel like if I slowly increase the number of words I write, I'll be able to get thousands of bookings even if I lose my QD.

Good-looking, very good-looking There are no surprises so far, the plot is smooth, and every character who appears is very realistic. I feel that the author is not a newbie, but a veteran, with good writing style, good story structure and plot logic. Recommend~

Very good, it is rare to have a protagonist who does not reborn or time travel. The plot is very smooth and enjoyable to watch. It's just too short and weak. . Why are all the short stories I'm following [smile][smile][smile][smile]

So far it's pretty good. It's a good work among traditional immortality novels. Don't go too far later and don't let the plot collapse. The story line is consistent and progressive. Personally, I think it will be popular. Tomato is considered to be the top traditional fairy tale. Compared with it, it is also a very good work! Recommended for book friends to read! After building the foundation, some of the follow-up was weak and a bit lackluster. He was made like a puppet by the prophecy of a magic star! A bunch of great monks and sects were timid, and a bunch of sons of destiny were born. The more I watch, the more bored I feel! The logic of the story is biased!

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years and have caught up with the latest chapters. The rating of this book is really not worthy of its true level. In my opinion, it should start at 9 points, or even higher. Although the protagonist's early upgrade is a bit slow, his growth is a typical exponential explosion - as the realm increases, the golden finger becomes stronger, which in turn accelerates the realm breakthrough, forming a virtuous cycle, which is particularly enjoyable to watch. The writing style is very traditional and authentic, with a clear main line. The protagonist is decisive in killing, thoughtful and affectionate, and never a virgin. He does things cleanly and neatly, leaving almost no trouble for himself. Every time I see him handling things without any sloppiness or making mistakes, I feel particularly happy - after all, I have long been tired of reading books in which the protagonist is indecisive and digs a big hole for himself. There are highlights in every major and minor event in the book, and the worldview is the kind that unfolds slowly and is neither impatient nor impatient. To be honest, there are not many traditional immortality writings in recent years that can make my eyes shine. This one is definitely one of the best in recent years.

I thought this was a book that I would fall asleep to, but unexpectedly, the plot was very good, the characters were three-dimensional, and it was full of intrigue. And there are no chapters with watery content. Every page is very rich in content, and I am very willing to read it! Come on, author! More updates

Yes, it is a relatively solid novel. It doesn't feel too impetuous when reading. The degree of reproduction is well controlled. It is not a mindless novel. The IQ of the protagonist and the people around him is also online. However, I think the shortcomings are that the types of spells are a bit single and most of them are too simple. It is recommended to add some more fancy ones later and not be too simple so that it looks weak. The combat is still a bit rough and not detailed enough. There is no sense of impact in the battle. It can be improved by adding some adjectives. Also, the update is too slow. Update soon [smile]

This book is quite good. First of all, the three views are relatively correct. It is not as extreme as some books nowadays. It does not praise selfishness, meanness, unkindness, and ruthlessness. It is quite good. The plot is not too sluggish, and the connection is relatively tight. However, it is only over one million words long, so it is not as enjoyable as the entire book.

It's very interesting. It has the characteristics of a classic novel about cultivating immortals, but also avoids cliche plots. The protagonist's character is pretty good, the Taoist master is pretty good, the golden finger is pretty easy to use, and the people in the sect are pretty nice too. It seems like the author is also a good person [Chigua]

In this novel, all living beings are depicted with sharp edges, and each character has its own characteristics. The writing is good. . The protagonist is also very unique. He knows how to think when things happen, and his thoughts are relatively comprehensive. Unfortunately, he is too rational and seems less humane. He does not look like a twelve-year-old child. On the contrary, it is closer to adults who like to weigh the pros and cons.

The novel is well written, and the various experiences of the protagonist seem normal. The only drawback is that the upgrade is too slow. It takes 90 cards to upgrade to the fourth level of Qi Lian, and 160 cards to the sixth level of Qi Lian. At this rate, it will take 300 cards for foundation building, 500 golden elixirs, and 1,000 Yuan Ying. According to the author's progress of two per day, it will still take two or three years to complete, which is too long.

The writing style is sophisticated and the logic is clear. It has a bit of a mortal feel, but is more humane than a mortal. Each character is designed to be full-bodied. Whether he is a cultivator of immortality or a demon cultivator, he has his own way and obsession. I hope that the Taoist Master will be able to achieve something in his life. The name and content of Crow Immortal are very good👍🏻

The plot is reasonable and the characters are well developed. It's worth watching.

It's a very good novel, and it's also top-notch on Tomato. Although there are some flaws, if the update speed is improved, it will be perfect. You know the author, update quickly [sneaky smile][sneaky smile][sneaky smile]

The pace is gentle, and the major event in the hundred or so chapters is the three sects joining forces with the Demon Sect to besiege Wanchun Valley. The protagonist has a good character, he is not greedy for money, lustful or paranoid, and the help given to him by plug-ins is not as powerful as other novels. I can't find fault with my worldly ways, and I'm a master of Taoism. I look forward to the follow-up. The protagonist is an aborigine

Listen to Chapter 146. Traditional fairy tales. At present, the division of realms is relatively traditional and easy to accept, and the story background is always familiar. The golden finger is the ability to copy. The exact origin of the golden finger has not been written yet. Not all people in the Immortal Cultivation Sect are bad people, nor are they all good people. Even the behavior of the same person in different situations may not necessarily be good or bad. It is very complicated and real. Just like Li Laodao is a very complicated person. The feelings, friendliness, and intimacy given to the male protagonist by the sect are also constantly changing. As the male protagonist grows up, his feelings will change. The development of this story is the process of the male protagonist's growth, experience, and transformation, and it is also the process of understanding the male protagonist's world of immortality step by step. Don't be a rogue when reading, just send a message and comment.

Yesterday, I was reading another book. I accidentally clicked on it just to see the details of the book, but ended up reading it in one sitting. The logic is strict, the plot is compact, and the characters are flesh-and-blood and full of images. So far, a really good book. I hope to continue to work hard and maintain this level.

Shouldn't, shouldn't, shouldn't I definitely shouldn't have serialized it on Tomato. This is really a masterpiece that I've been watching on Tomato for so long and I can't fault it at all. The biggest flaw might be the slow pace. After all, if this is the starting point, the rhythm is normal, but this is Tomato, and it will be a hit if it doesn't make it to the God of Creation in three years. I guess many readers said onara after seeing the protagonist Ka practicing for a long time. The rhythm is similar to that of ordinary people, but it is much more enjoyable than ordinary people. After all, the protagonist is as careful as a needle (small-minded), and the people around him are certified by God as "good" (Qixing). Wanchun Valley is also the number one in honest farming. There is no overpowering force, there is no systematic dump truck, the protagonist and supporting characters have full personalities, and even the emotional scenes are well written (seriously, there are few emotional scenes in Tomato that are so good) (although it is not the highlight of the work) Really, I've watched all Qidian. Com subscriptions. I don't have the patience to keep up with updates, but I've been following this work for two months. The protagonist team finally has their own Avatar, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up development (the world has been suffering for a long time) Oh, by the way, so here we get "tamp"

It's really good-looking. It's top-notch among male videos, and the male protagonist has a good outlook on life. It's not comparable to those rubbish that describe female characters starting from the chest. The plot of this book is ups and downs, and the logic is strong. The protagonist's secrets are not brainless. The descriptions of other characters are also very distinctive. They belong to the group portrait style. The world view is not very big when I see 570+ chapters, but there seems to be a big world behind it. Now I have caught up, and it will be even more painful to follow it every day in the future.

It's not bad. I think the real score can reach 8.5, But compared with scores above 9, it's really far behind. But I can still watch it. There are no weird tricks, just take the path to cultivating immortals honestly. It is just like taking the highway. Even if the speed limit is restricted, it is still within a reasonable range. You are not asked to pay, but it is not as fast as taking the second-class road. Then, maybe the author usually has a calm personality, and there is no setting or plot structure that makes people feel eye-catching. If you really like the theme of cultivating immortals, then this book is OK as a meal replacement. But if you happen to be in a period of boredom right now, then put it away for now and read it again after a while, otherwise your sense of disappointment in the current book shortage period will be magnified.

The difference between this book and other books is that he makes some real and realistic things, such as intrigues and deceptions, and the writing looks so natural. Come on, it's beautiful. It looks great, please keep up the good work. Then I hope to make some new innovations on the crow. Personally, I have seen too much about the three-legged golden crow and illusion. So I hope the Crows can have new breakthroughs. If we use an analogy, it's like the ones in Pokémon, the Gunpowder Crow in Star Travels, etc.

It's a pretty good book. It's the best book I've read in the past year. I highly recommend it. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist's emotional line is basically non-existent. In addition, he is too upright and kills people regardless of whether they are good or bad. In other words, the author is not very good at writing characters who are both good and evil. The further back you look, the worse it becomes. There are too many loopholes. There had been no Nascent Soul in the Southern Territory for thousands of years, and Ye Guxing suddenly broke through the Nascent Soul simply. The loophole was too big. Who elected the city lords in the Central Region? Who is the boss? Each sect doesn't even have a single powerful disciple, how can it be a big sect? Mo Xing is even more confused. Why is Yan Sanhao Duan Duan being hunted down? Aoki Raimaru can be used unlimitedly. Everyone can guess that the protagonist can copy it, and all of them have golden elixirs. In the fight, the only one who fights is Aoki Raimaru. It is Aoki Raimaru, which is too overwhelming. When you meet a demon cultivator, you are a bad guy. A good character should always be both good and evil, and bad guys should also have a good side. Like Jin Yong's martial arts, Ouyang Feng still has a good side no matter how bad he is. This is excellent character description. The author doesn't know how to describe battles or depict characters with rich personalities, and the emotional scenes are zero.