Naruto: Only Fools Become Ninjas

I think back then, I accidentally obtained the "Nine-Star Tianchen Jue" in "Douluo Dalu" and reached the peak of "Dzi Bead Transformation". I thought I was "invincible". With the power of "Martial Arts", I single-handedly challenged "Mad God", "Son of Light", "God Lord", "Shura God of War" and "Immortal King". I wanted to create the feat of "Zhu Xian" single-handedly, but unfortunately I lost and lost all my martial arts. With the help of "The Kind God of Death", I came to the "World of Immortality". The "Alien Martial Star Lord" saw my "god-level talent" and accepted me as his disciple. He gave me an artifact "Cun Mang" and took me to "The Avenue of Heavenly Fire" to obtain the divine pet "Coiling Dragon". I met the "School Beauty's Personal Expert" by chance in "The Tomb of Gods", and with his help, I successfully broke through, gained the power of "Fights Break the Sphere", became the "Great Master" of "Covering the Sky", and embarked on the road of "Full-time God Cultivation", and saw the "very pure and warm" thing happened between "Shura God of War" and "King Han". After I returned, I personally issued the decree "No Evil" and wrote an autobiography called "Warcraft Creation of Saints and Miracles", in which there is a famous saying - My name is Lingtian, "I want to seal the sky". And left a legend for the world - "Legend of Liquid Sky". Then, I came to "Spirit Realm", but a "Star Wars Storm" blew up on the way, but fortunately I was not in danger. After arriving, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Piaomiao Journey" and entered the "All Heavens and All Realms". I met the "Killing God", also known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "God Seal Throne" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After I recovered from my injury, they said goodbye to me, and then recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I played the role of "Underworld Special Forces" in "Peerless Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. That's where I developed Final Intelligence and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix drinks. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unique World" "Peerless Magical Powers", and I embarked on the path of "Emperor Supreme". Soon after, I practiced the "Immortality" divine body. ", I used "Tian Zhu Tu" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power, and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the Yuan Dynasty of "The Wild Era"~~~ Alas | I am old and now it is the world of you young people, but young people, you have to update!

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It's over, give yourself a five-star review. At first I just wanted to try writing novels, but I didn't expect that this one would do well. In this novel, the protagonist travels to the world of Naruto, with the golden light spell and thunder method under one person, all in his hands. He traveled through time and became an Uchiha, led the fight for the position of clan leader, and led the clan to move out of Konoha and find a life on an overseas island. The protagonist Uchiha Li Yuan, as a behind-the-scenes figure, quietly watched the actions organized by Akatsuki Ninja. Finally, he came out to help Madara resurrect, break the seal of Kaguya, and rush into the vast starry sky, preparing to capture Otsutsuki to refine and speed up his practice to achieve immortality.

Why not ambush Yuan Fei and let the Shicun clan exterminate him? Tooth for tooth, eye for eye?

This Naruto fan fiction is a stunning work that breaks the dimensional wall! The author cleverly combines the anti-routine setting of "not wanting to be a ninja" with the grand narrative of the Naruto world to create sparks. After the protagonist awakens the eight magical skills of "double hands", he re-constructs the rules of the ninja world from an alien perspective. It not only retains the classic elements such as the disputes between the five great powers and the bonding beliefs, but also develops a new narrative dimension through the abilities of the non-ninjutsu system. In the context of intertwined interest games and passionate bonds, the protagonist does not follow the path of tolerance but is able to maneuver in the center of the whirlpool. This sense of contrast makes the story full of tension. The narrative naturally incorporates the characteristics of the original characters, such as Shikamaru's resourcefulness and Kai's passion. The details are exquisitely processed, which shows the author's deep understanding of the core of Naruto and his innovative control ability. It can be called a model of both emotion and ingenuity in fan creation!

Eight wonders under one person. These things all have serious loopholes and risks, and gods have appeared in Longhu Mountain. The skills they practice can make them become immortals. It's just that they can't take shortcuts like the Eight Wonders. But it is also a road to heaven. The Heavenly Master can defeat all eight miracles.

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, working hard unyieldingly, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, steel being refined a hundred times, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can work hard I am a keyboard in the darkness and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet writing. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

Settings in the book: The Land of Fire, Konoha Village, the Third Hokage Country of water, fog shadow village, fog shadow Kingdom of Wind, Sand Shadow Village, Sand Shadow The Country of Earth, Tsuchikage Village, Three Generations of Tsuchikage The Kingdom of Thunder, Cloud Shadow Village, Four Generations of Cloud Shadows

Sharingan! Sharingan! Not the blood chakra eye

This Naruto novel has a wonderful plot, cleverly integrates original elements and is innovative, and the characters are vividly drawn, as if it is recreating the Naruto world. The writing skills are solid and the reading is smooth and enjoyable. It is worth reading for Naruto fans.

It's okay, a little bit missing

The writing idea is very good, but it lacks a little passion! It would also be nice to have some branch plots. After all, dragon veins, witches, centipedes, people on the moon, and Otsutsuki in the wild can all be included.

Generally speaking, it's okay. I'm originally in a quagmire. If I don't get out of the quagmire quickly, I will sink deeper and deeper. This book is okay. I got out of the quagmire at the beginning, and got out of the big quagmire of Konoha.

There won't be too many emotional dramas between men and women, and they will focus on cultivating and developing their family. I hope it won't be a disaster in the future!

Everything that belongs to Uchiha must be taken away, and we must go into Konoha to get all the useful ninjutsu and other things back, and then go to the wood industry to cause destruction.

Although there are few typos and a bit too many words, it is still good overall.

Really good. I like. It just ended a little too hastily.

The name of the protagonist is a bit embarrassing, but the content is good

Popular Not strong enough. Why didn't we kill all the people? . Come on come on come on come on

Nice. , Just a little less

Very good, very happy

If I don't write about the heavens, it will be difficult to continue writing.

It's okay, it's over so quickly.

This book is pretty good so far.

I forgot to rate it, it's pretty good, just a little lacking.

It's pretty good compared to previous releases.

It ended very quickly, but overall it was pretty good.

If you say you want to leave Konoha, leave Konoha. You won't delay. It's good. Come on!

It's well written, it's not overwhelming and it doesn't lick Konoha. Shisui's crazy protagonist is holding back

The layout is large and okay. You can add more details, it's not enough to make it cool.