[A complete and real Teyvat] (no system) (Deputy Leader of Benny's Adventure Group)
Ryan: This world is not a beautiful place, I want to change it! If Teyvat cannot be reborn, then let me light it up!
A new storm is about to be born, no one can stay out of it, everyone's position will change, and changes have arrived.
This is a redemption for a better tomorrow.
Reader comments
The book is very good, but unfortunately, I don't really like reading this type of book. I feel like the protagonist can really escape his fate? He has shackles in the name of love, and there is black smoke floating in the place where he grew up. The protagonist is good, but there are too many shackles. Maybe the final fate of this book is to stop updating.
It's okay, but just don't show mercy to the protagonist. Gan Yu and Shen He were [grieved] and became the ones serving their sentences. Currently seeing 27. Just don't miss Shen He after kissing Gan Yu.
A very unique narrative and descriptive style, with a dreamy and hazy feel.
How should I put it? Ordinary text simply narrates one thing, but the text in this book arouses the reader's imagination and forms a vivid and exotic picture, giving it the feeling mentioned above.
But... One thing I have to say is that the description of this book is greater than the plot, which is not recommended when writing novels. Although the writing style is good, the focus of the novel should be on the story, rather than decorating the environment with the story. Is there a lot of description in the book that is necessary? Therefore, this book may dissuade some book lovers, and it is understandable if they cannot stand it.
This book feels good, it has a lot of foreshadowing at the beginning, and the title doesn't give too much away. It feels more like a book, like the style of around 2020. Reading it so far gives me a calming feeling, but the link is very smooth. Give it five stars to support it. I hope the author can maintain this style.
I feel that this book is suitable for people who have never played Genshin Impact or people who are crazy about the plot to supplement the plot. It has most of the stories and some sobering thoughts.
The writing is very detailed, the content is good, and the imagination is very rich.
Dear author, your writing is good. I will reward you with another 100 chapters. No need to thank me (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡
It's well written, but the ending is hard to say. I hope this one survives!
No surprises, no surprises, no relationships.
Overall, it's pretty good. I wonder if it has a single female protagonist?
The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that few people read it.
This is such an awesome author. It's the first time I've seen such an awesome Genshin Impact fan. Come on!
The ideas are clear, the writing and plot are excellent, the characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and there is not too much OOC. I look forward to the future stories. Five stars! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]
It looks good, but some places, the place where you sign the milk tea contract and the place where you communicate with Abedo are a bit obscure. The plot is top notch. [Praise]
It's well written, but I feel like no one is reading it. [Think]
Both the story and the plot are good, but I just want to ask if this is a boy or girl?
The book is very good, but unfortunately, I don't really like reading this type of book. I feel like the protagonist can really escape his fate? He has shackles in the name of love, and there is black smoke floating in the place where he grew up. The protagonist is good, but there are too many shackles. Maybe the final fate of this book is to stop updating.
It's okay, but just don't show mercy to the protagonist. Gan Yu and Shen He were [grieved] and became the ones serving their sentences. Currently seeing 27. Just don't miss Shen He after kissing Gan Yu.
A very unique narrative and descriptive style, with a dreamy and hazy feel. How should I put it? Ordinary text simply narrates one thing, but the text in this book arouses the reader's imagination and forms a vivid and exotic picture, giving it the feeling mentioned above. But... One thing I have to say is that the description of this book is greater than the plot, which is not recommended when writing novels. Although the writing style is good, the focus of the novel should be on the story, rather than decorating the environment with the story. Is there a lot of description in the book that is necessary? Therefore, this book may dissuade some book lovers, and it is understandable if they cannot stand it.
This book feels good, it has a lot of foreshadowing at the beginning, and the title doesn't give too much away. It feels more like a book, like the style of around 2020. Reading it so far gives me a calming feeling, but the link is very smooth. Give it five stars to support it. I hope the author can maintain this style. I feel that this book is suitable for people who have never played Genshin Impact or people who are crazy about the plot to supplement the plot. It has most of the stories and some sobering thoughts.
The writing is very detailed, the content is good, and the imagination is very rich.
Dear author, your writing is good. I will reward you with another 100 chapters. No need to thank me (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡
It's well written, but the ending is hard to say. I hope this one survives!
No surprises, no surprises, no relationships.
Overall, it's pretty good. I wonder if it has a single female protagonist?
The writing is quite good, but it's a pity that few people read it.
This is such an awesome author. It's the first time I've seen such an awesome Genshin Impact fan. Come on!
The ideas are clear, the writing and plot are excellent, the characters are three-dimensional and vivid, and there is not too much OOC. I look forward to the future stories. Five stars! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]
It looks good, but some places, the place where you sign the milk tea contract and the place where you communicate with Abedo are a bit obscure. The plot is top notch. [Praise]
It's well written, but I feel like no one is reading it. [Think]
Both the story and the plot are good, but I just want to ask if this is a boy or girl?