(Single heroine + sweet story + no system + no rebirth + daily healing + love dog food story)
Chen Shu is a game anchor who has graduated from college for one year.
On another blind date, he met a beautiful girl three years older than him.
The other party has a superior family background, has an amazing appearance, and has a perfect figure.
Bai Yueguang is in the hearts of countless people in Jiangcheng.
Just such a person seemed to fall in love with Chen Shu at first sight.
And he said it bluntly.
Faced with this situation, Chen Shu didn't know what to do...
…
Later, in the process of getting along with Shen Qingyue, Chen Shu slowly understood what liking meant. In the process of getting along with her, the two of them changed each other subtly.
During this process, Chen Shu slowly discovered that this cold female CEO had many little hobbies, such as: she likes to hold her hand, interlocking her fingers and not letting go, and she likes to kiss herself.
Also while getting along, Chen Shu slowly got into her heart, got to know her, and became the first person to truly understand her.
When for the first time, the identities of the two people appeared in the public eye.
Set off a thousand waves.
It makes people envious.
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Reader comments
The front part is okay, quite smooth and natural. Then when it came to the confession, it was very formulaic, and the relationship developed naturally. It was good for both parties to confirm that their feelings continued to heat up. It was very awkward to have to do it like a task and keep getting stuck. It's not like we're going to get married right away. Putting it off for so long really kind of ruins the early character design. Once the sweet story is formulaic, readers will wonder if the subsequent plot will have to be stuck with a task every time and wait for enough chapters to continue?
Watching this makes me dream in broad daylight🤤
Overall, it's okay. The male and female protagonists are both pretty good. Can't the title be changed? Boss Shen's shouting is very funny. In addition, there are too many typos, punctuation and sentence breaks that affect reading. It's better to correct them.
Really, you are thinking about being a salted fish, and at the same time you are dreaming like this, not eating soft food, not going to work, and still thinking about so many things, then you can just write salted fish stories, and you will write about female CEOs after you are full.
It's beautiful, but it shouldn't be seen by so few people.
Sure enough, if you want to fall in love, you have to watch other people talk about it.
Except for some typos and omissions in some places, I personally think it is pretty good so far. I suggest the author pay more attention to it.
There are so many typos.
Very nice, I like watching it
Advantages: Sweet articles that I would never dare to think of in my wildest dreams [crying]
Disadvantages: There are a lot of typos [smile]
It looks good. I must recommend it. The author should be steady.
The plot is okay, but there are too many typos
The quality is okay, but I don't like bland and everyday products. I highly recommend it to those who like bland and everyday products. Bye bye.
Support! More in line with my aesthetics. [Like][Like][Admiration][Laughing]
It's okay [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
Looks very comfortable
Not bad, good [like]
It's good to take a sip of the old duck soup.
There are too many typos and it's too everyday. The male protagonist looks like a freshly minted college student and his dialogue is too plain.
Like writing a composition or a running account
It's too everyday. There should be two men, two women, two businessmen, and the male protagonist grows up.
The front part is okay, quite smooth and natural. Then when it came to the confession, it was very formulaic, and the relationship developed naturally. It was good for both parties to confirm that their feelings continued to heat up. It was very awkward to have to do it like a task and keep getting stuck. It's not like we're going to get married right away. Putting it off for so long really kind of ruins the early character design. Once the sweet story is formulaic, readers will wonder if the subsequent plot will have to be stuck with a task every time and wait for enough chapters to continue?
Watching this makes me dream in broad daylight🤤
Overall, it's okay. The male and female protagonists are both pretty good. Can't the title be changed? Boss Shen's shouting is very funny. In addition, there are too many typos, punctuation and sentence breaks that affect reading. It's better to correct them.
Really, you are thinking about being a salted fish, and at the same time you are dreaming like this, not eating soft food, not going to work, and still thinking about so many things, then you can just write salted fish stories, and you will write about female CEOs after you are full.
It's beautiful, but it shouldn't be seen by so few people.
Sure enough, if you want to fall in love, you have to watch other people talk about it.
Except for some typos and omissions in some places, I personally think it is pretty good so far. I suggest the author pay more attention to it.
There are so many typos.
Very nice, I like watching it
Advantages: Sweet articles that I would never dare to think of in my wildest dreams [crying] Disadvantages: There are a lot of typos [smile]
It looks good. I must recommend it. The author should be steady.
The plot is okay, but there are too many typos
The quality is okay, but I don't like bland and everyday products. I highly recommend it to those who like bland and everyday products. Bye bye.
Support! More in line with my aesthetics. [Like][Like][Admiration][Laughing]
It's okay [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
Looks very comfortable
Not bad, good [like]
It's good to take a sip of the old duck soup.
There are too many typos and it's too everyday. The male protagonist looks like a freshly minted college student and his dialogue is too plain.
Like writing a composition or a running account
It's too everyday. There should be two men, two women, two businessmen, and the male protagonist grows up.