龙族：登临至尊！爆杀赫尔佐格！

It's very interesting. The heroines are currently known as Su Xiaoqiang, Nuonuo, Xiami, Huiliyi, and Laurent. I would like to ask if there will be a zero in the back? There is also a third one where I suggest you modify it and I sent it after it was reported.

It's very interesting [heartfelt], the logic is clear, and the plot is also very attractive. The protagonist is decisive in killing, has brains, shows no mercy to the enemy, and protects his own people. The other characters are all written with flesh and blood. It not only highlights the protagonist, but also makes up for the regrets in the original work. Especially Eri, the writing is really good, ranking first among the dragon fanfics I have read so far [laughing] I'm telling you what I'm saying, Jiangnan is just a bad fan writer, what does he know about the Dragon Clan [laughing evilly]

The content of this book is relatively good-looking and clear. Well, the pace is a little faster, and it should be more daily-oriented. Anyway, the part about improving combat power and fighting is passed quickly (compared to the process of improving combat power in other Dragon Clan fandoms). And the ideas are also relatively clear. Well, one link after another, there is no such thing as being in China today and returning to Kasar tomorrow. Then I went to the Japanese branch the day after tomorrow. Well, there was not so much confusion. They were all relatively interlocking. It was just one story. After it was clarified, and then move on to the next story, he would prepare the groundwork for you so that it would not be so difficult to understand when you read it. Overall, it is a relatively good-looking dragon fanfic. Finally, I wish there were more authors, let alone eunuch this book!

It's very good and well-rounded. There's no grievance at the moment. The old man from the Discipline Inspection Committee thinks it's a good thing. He finally doesn't let the Discipline Inspection Committee ridicule him.

Content: Wonderful Positioning: Shuangwen (It is recommended to read the original Dragon Clan before reading it) Writing style: (Personally) Not as good as Jiangnan. I can only say that the plot setting is more in line with popular HE literature than Jiangnan. (The above are all my own opinions. This book is not to my liking. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.)

Ouch, not bad. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑Anyway, this is the first book I have read in a long time and I think it is worth reading. I have collected it before, but I haven't seen it yet. How much and then I have no interest anymore. Although some people have read the latest chapter, but later updates are not interested in reading it, but this book still feels good anyway. After all, even if there is something wrong or bad, I can't understand it, and I don't know who the people in it are, I don't even know them. Because of the Dragon Clan novel, I read the first two, and they were both written more than ten years ago and I had forgotten all about them („ಡωಡ„)

Post a five-star review and watch the old thief and Herzog kiss each other [laughing]

It's good-looking, with a lot of settings added, but overall it's still good-looking. What's different from previous fanfics is that the protagonist has his own plot development (a lot of plot expansion), and it doesn't exactly follow the original plot. It's worth reading [Like]

The first Dragon Clan fanfic I read on Tomato happened to be finished at 00.13 On the 25th. Happy birthday! Hui Liyi❤️

It looks good. If you bend all the knives in Jiangnan, you will be the original one from now on.

It's pretty good and suits my taste. It successfully transformed the original version of "Dragon" into a fun novel with multiple female protagonists. It can be said that all the regretful female characters in the original version of "Dragon" have been taken away. Chu Zihang is also tied up with the little secretary, his father is also rescued, Lu Mingfei and Ling become good friends, and the nanny bar is not so nanny, and they all have their own development.

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, and being refined into steel a hundred times, worthy of readers and worthy of youth. Worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

It's not bad. The quality of the Dragon Clan fanfic is relatively good. Why is the rating so low?

I have read this book before, but I stopped reading it when I saw the Thunderbolt, because I am not interested in books with Naruto elements, but I have really run out of books to read recently. I even read some old books that I was interested in, and then I ran out of books. Today I read this book again, and I thought that I had no books to read anyway, so I would just read it to pass the time, and then I found out After reading Chapter 9, I found that there are actually very few elements about Naruto. I don't know what happens next, but it appeared once in the first few chapters. The book is actually good, but I feel that the author's writing style is not very good. Basically, it is reflected in the lack of smooth sentences and the lack of subjects in some places. There are also few words and typos, but the latter two problems are relatively small.

I have read no less than ten dragon fanfics and rarely commented on Tomato, but this one is definitely worth reading even if you are not a fan of dragons. The writing style is considered to be at a higher level on Tomato. The setting is not only in line with the original work, but also very reasonable with reference to Nordic mythology. The multi-zone description of the final battlefield is at least strong on Tomato. It is a cool article that does not collapse in combat power and is in line with the public.

Yes, from all aspects, it is considered a very good book among Tomatoes, and it is also outstanding among the second creations of Dragon Clan on the entire Internet.

Not bad, a rare masterpiece from Brother Tomatoes

It looks good, I hope the author is Xiao Nanliang [Love]

It's a very interesting Dragon Clan fanfic, why is the rating lower than other less interesting ones?

This is a rare masterpiece by a fan of the Dragon Clan. If you don't like it, it will be cut off [face covering]. It's really good in the front, but it starts to get a little rough when you go to Tokyo. The author has now cut it off.

It's quite beautiful and well written. 👍If you like watching it, don't give up. Press points [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Author, your writing is great, please update it as soon as possible. Hurry up and give our male protagonist more female protagonists.

Although I haven't read Dragons, this book by the author really piqued my interest [Cool] I will try to make up for it [Cool]

Except that the protagonist is a bit too strong, everything else is fine. It is more in line with the logic of the original work, but the plot is a bit fast.

Very good dragon fanfic

A very good book. The writing style is not inferior to the original work. There are really no pitfalls left. The story is complete and interesting.

Very beautiful, wonderful and refreshing article

I give four stars because I am afraid that the author will be proud [please read carefully]. This is the best book I have ever read on the subject of dragons.

As for the little goddess, she has been waiting for a long time and hasn't changed yet. After writing about Japan, let's stop and write about daily life and pretentiousness.

The advantage of fan fiction is to satisfy some fantasies, remove some regrets, and leave three thousand beauties in the harem [making faces] [making faces] [making faces] [making faces] @Not Schrödinger