Demon Slayer: I Became an Evil Spirit After Being Expelled by the Demon Slayer Corps

It's not as good as a straight man to have an idea when a copper man puts all his efforts into it Wonderful~ It couldn't be more wonderful~ It's so wonderful to bring Bulbasaur seeds and eat Marvelous Crisps to Mickey's Wonderful House. It's so wonderful~ Well, I just like to see this kind of ambiguous brotherhood.

Damn, your writing is very delicate, and your emotional portrayal of Yuanyi is very good, including why the protagonist turned into a ghost. , It's just the desperate loneliness in the process of turning into a ghost, I think it can be deeper. Well, there is. When the protagonist's brother dies, I think we can let him live a little longer, and then talk about his reliance on the protagonist after his death. , Should be able to make the feelings a little richer. The last point is that you update too little, update more.

It's so good. I've always loved reading villain stories. The protagonist and the miserable boss don't get along too well. I don't believe it when the author says he's straight. The Ubuyashiki Demon Slayer Squad was completely wiped out, and the protagonist showed no mercy. It can't be said that he didn't show mercy at all. Anyway, Mitsuri and Tanjiro's family were left in the end. In short, those who love reading villain stories must not miss it.

It's really good to read. It's not like some of the articles I've read before about becoming a ghost. The writing about encountering Mei and her brother is very sudden. But I think the author wrote about meeting Mei and her brother really well. I hope the author will keep at it. In addition, I hope this is a novel without a female protagonist, and the male protagonist is handsome alone. If the author cares about the flow and popularity of the book, I suggest that the author can hold a poll. The author can write down several endings he wants and let readers vote for the final ending. The extra chapter can be about two male protagonists. I really want to see it [shy] (I know the author can't get up, but I really want to read it, don't complain). Of course, if the author writes according to his own interests and ideas, I also support the author greatly. Write whatever you want, come on [Send Hearts]

A very good article, it looks like there is no cp, the protagonist is quite strong, the author said there is no female protagonist, some comments said that selling rotten food, I didn't see it, and there are no ambiguous sparks among those who have contact with the protagonist, basically they are colleagues with a little affection at most? (The question mark is something I can't describe) I am very curious about the direction of the story. When I read the title, I thought CP would be Mukai, but no, at least not now. I haven't studied the pillars before Demon Slayer in detail, so I don't know, but it's not important. I haven't seen those pillars in Demon Slayer anime yet (I haven't watched them for a long time, so don't blame me if they happen). The protagonist is very strong now. I can't imagine the next plot. I hope you don't abuse me. It's really fun to watch the protagonist's baby's revenge. It's really exciting when I lose my brother, the master. 😭

Looks good! I love this Demon Slayer fanfic the most! ! It's so beautiful that there's nothing to say! I just hope it's a story without a female protagonist! ! The male protagonist is handsome~ Of course, it would be better if he is with Wuhan [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

This book is good everywhere, the writing is good, the plot is reasonable, and the emotional rendering is okay, but it just doesn't read. Of course this is what I thought before. Before reading the back part, I always thought that although this book was good, it was just ugly. However, after chapter twenty-nine, it turned out to be okay. So you must think clearly before reading the book. Based on the current content, you have to endure at least 60% of the frustrating content. To put it nicely, it is foreshadowing, to suppress first and then to expand, but to put it ugly, it is history. However, although its content is a bit slack, the author's writing style makes up for it very well. So my opinion is that you can just skim the previous content and skip to read it. The really good content must be after the death of Guoyuan.

Let's clear it out first. Most of the pillars in the original game are dead. The later stages of the game are a little OOC but the impact is not particularly big. The protagonist starts from the beginning and ends up evil, killing a lot of people. The ending is very hasty and leaves many pitfalls unfilled. Overall, this book is good to read. The author's writing is good. I can feel the personality charm of the protagonist. He is also very strong and it is very refreshing. The protagonist also has a brain and has not done any brainless behavior. The protagonist has emotions, but he is still decisive and kills when he has to kill. Most of the ghosts in the Twelve Ghost Months were single-handedly promoted by the protagonist. The protagonist has a slight heartthrob attribute in the ghost camp. In the middle and later stages, the protagonist overcomes the sunshine and gets rid of Wuhan's control. His strength is stronger than Wuhan. It is really refreshing to read this book. Ah, I don't need to think about it at all, but I still feel heartbroken when I watch the pillars die in the original work. There is no particularly bad point except for the extremely rushed ending. I finished it in one breath without realizing it. I couldn't stop reading many of the stories and looked forward to finishing them someday. This one is just too short and not enough to read, and there are almost no major problems with the timeline of this book. Some places may not make sense logically, but it does not affect the overall reading (if it is not too outrageous, I can throw away my brain and spoil it)

It's a good read, the only Demon Slayer fanfic I've finished reading. The protagonist is really powerful and has a lot of brains (I really love the crow setting!!!!) And the main thread of revenge runs through the whole story. The protagonist is really powerful! It was a pleasure to watch, there was basically no frustration at all, and it was strong all the way to the end. (Although there will be some knives that prick you from time to time, it doesn't hurt.) Wuhan and the protagonist are also very good at fighting (although the author refuses to admit it [laughing] [laughing], but in the end, a little dream came true, which is really good [admiration] [admiration]

It's very well written. This is how the protagonist of a villain novel should be born. However, the comment section in the early stage made me very uncomfortable, so I gave up on it. I also wish the author better and better writing, and send me five-star blessings.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Good luck to the author, I hope the protagonist will always remain evil as a villain and continue to be bad [heartfelt], don't whitewash, don't whitewash [crying]

It's considered a dark one, with a touch of sadness revealed in the text. God, I really like it so much. Lord Wanmi is so charismatic as a ghost. Everything that happens in "The Long Ghost Life" is so to my liking. The appearance of every important character will leave a mark in my heart. Although the protagonist's life is very long, in the end, he has someone to accompany him, and he has experienced so many unforgettable stories, so why can't it be considered a complete success [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Although the ending was really unexpected, I thought I would be killed, it was really dark, the Demon Slayer Squad was completely wiped out. But I like it very much for no reason. Please give me a sweet extra episode.

It's quite good-looking. It's a masterpiece in the fanfic. The names of some of the moves may be a bit awkward, but many places satisfy my chuuniso. If you recommend the protagonist group, don't read this book. It's just to fill the regrets of ghosts. The original protagonist group died very easily. I slept with him for three years in the purest love of the year. It would be better if the typos in some places could be corrected. Thanks to the author, the writing is very enjoyable and beautiful. I will definitely read it better in the future. It's hard to find a Demon Slayer doujin with this quality in Western Persimmon. If you have one, I recommend [Eating Melon]

I can really say that this book is the best one I have read among many fanfics. The author has a clear idea and develops it very well. Unlike some fanfics that always like to include some bad personal settings of their own and keep writing in a mess, the author's world view has a dark side. The line will develop slowly, and I really like the author's setting of the unwhitewashed protagonist Burial Crow. It's really good. I haven't watched Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba very much, so I only have a general understanding. Then the author will fill in the original characters according to his own development, making the whole book appear vivid and full. The rating of this book does not stop there, I hope it will be given more 🥰

In the revenge genre, it can be regarded as a very good novel. Unlike those revenge stories, the protagonist will be chased for a while if nothing happens. If nothing happens, he will be beaten and forced to fight, and then pretend to be slapped in the face. The protagonist is not a waste. The protagonist is very powerful and can be swept directly. At the same time, the protagonist is not the kind of mindless killer. This can make the plot more comfortable. It was fine in the early stage, but in the later stage I lost myself, so I can just think of it as a robot without misery.

I like it very much. I feel that the biggest feature of this book is that it completes a lot of the plot of the story. The development of the story is very reasonable and not too abrupt. I feel that everyone has the charm of their own character. From the perspective of the protagonist, some emotional refinements are also done well. For example, Yuanyi did not kill the protagonist at the time, and Wu Mei later apologized to the protagonist after he realized that he had misunderstood the protagonist. In terms of emotional processing and emotional transformation, I think it is very well written. Moreover, the content is also very substantial. It is not written like a running account like the original work. Overall, it is really very good to read. I hope the author will work hard. After reading it, I still feel a little bit reluctant to leave it. The plot and characterization are quite full, and I feel that the characters are really brought to life. After reading it, I still feel a little melancholy. The author's writing is really good, and I can't even get over it now.

Nice! ! This is the first Demon Slayer fanfic that I have finished reading. I feel that no ending is worthy of Manmi, but I am still very happy to see the ending! The protagonist's goal has never changed. In order to avenge his brother and master, he is very decisive in doing things, and he does not think about ruling the world just because he has gained great power... The plot is also very different from the original work! This can be regarded as a good ending for Twelve Demons in the Moon. When the plot of the original story begins, it changes so quickly [crying] Zenitsu and Inosuke seem to have never appeared. It's really unfinished! Looking forward to the extra episode! ! Finally, Wan Mi and Boss Dan really get along very well! Wish you 99 [send your heart] [send your heart] [send your heart]

The plot construction is particularly good, especially when Tamashi fights back against Mukai and Manya. I was very shocked when I saw it. The ending is very good except for being a bit rushed. However, many supporting characters have not been fully explained, such as the ending of Kanao. There are also some supporting characters that have not been written, such as Zenitsu Zenitsu, Ino, and the younger brother of Immortal River. These have not been mentioned. It may be caused by the butterfly effect of Manya, so the author has not described it. There is also the change of the world after the ghost wins. There is no explanation of what it will be like. Of course, readers all know what the world will be like without Demon Slayer. There is no explanation as to whether Muzan can overcome the sunshine in the end. It may be because the ending is hasty and there is less writing, but the plot is really interesting. The author has added many of his own original stories.

At first glance, the writing is good, the characterization is very delicate, but the beauty of the battle is missing. The author needs to describe the battle more. It's cool to crush some scenes at the beginning, but it will be very boring if there are too many scenes like this! Come on, author [like]

I love this ambiguous relationship between superiors and subordinates. It's so wonderful. It's as wonderful as Miao taking Bulbasaur to Mickey Mouse's house while eating Bulbasaur. Don't miss this if you love reading villain stories.

This is really awesome. My evaluation is that it is really awesome. I read it in two days in a row. I have not read the original work, but I feel that it is already perfect. Oh, the character portrayal is very good, especially when the protagonist's brother died. Oh, I felt so sad on the spot. It was so difficult. This kind of novel has no CP, but many people criticize the protagonist and Wuxian. Yes, there is a feeling of emptiness in my heart. Maybe in my heart, I am more suitable for the ending of he. I also want to know the life and death of other humans related to the protagonist... When I read this book, people often said that people who were hurt by ghosts went to the Demon Slayer Corps, and people who were hurt by people became ghosts... After reading it, I felt like I was dead, and my heart was empty.

It's delicious, delicious, delicious. It has a very unique perspective. The male protagonist is not soft-hearted. He completely uses his own position and the interaction with Wu Mei is sweet to death! ! ! ! The straight male author had an idea and I was hooked. It's a perfect article🤤Wanmi and Muzan (the relationship cannot be defined anyway, because they are the only ones who really trust each other and understand each other) can be regarded as existing to accompany each other in the world, very bold🥰 The interaction between the ghosts is also vivid, and the pillars have basically no OOC. After all, positions and personal beliefs are different! (So basically I'm dead, I'm dead, I'll post it and read the article rationally if I have a good impression of all members of the Demon Slayer Corps) Finally, I wish Wanmi and Wuhan a happy play! Your master is going to be pissed to death underground. Hahahaha. Your favorite apprentice was abducted by the enemy (no)

It's very interesting. I hope the protagonist will continue to be bad, and I hope you will forget about it and your memory will be restored. That would be even better. Very nice to look at.

Aoaoao, Master Wuhan and Master Burial Crow are so well matched! ! ! They must be ambiguously together inexplicably [laughs]

In fact, the middle part felt a bit confusing, ooc, but luckily the protagonist was determined to be evil and reconciled with Muzan. Originally, it felt weird and I didn't want to give it a high score. But because the author said he was a straight man (this was an excuse [laughing]) and was so good at selling, I decided to give it four stars. Anyway, the pairing of the protagonist and Muzan made me smile. I look forward to the continued performance of the "straight man" [laughing] btw, too high a score is not good. The book by Guifang next door was recently sanctioned by Tomato. I hope this book is good and does not contain eunuchs. After all, there are too few fans who are good at ghosts and are determined to be evil.

There are very few Demon Slayer fics that I particularly like, especially those with the original male protagonist, but this one gives me a different feeling. There is a real if line that Demon Slayer may exist, and it does have the feeling of Banya. The character is well-shaped, very plump, and there is no special Mary Sue. Although she is talented, she is growing step by step, and the original character is not OOC. He is also very friendly to Chef Wumei, looking forward to the extra chapter. Finally, I would like to say, Wan Mi miserable, you must live a good life. (Mistress wipes tears)

Zundu Zundu is super beautiful! Like it very much! The funny thing is that the author is a straight man, but the readers wrote him as gay. I can't do it anymore. The ending is quite tear-jerking but really sweet [shy][shy][shy]

In fact, it's okay. The timeline may not be so rigorous, but the main content and story logic are fine. So far, it seems pretty good. It's not as good as Fanzhu's book, but it's better than others. It focuses on emotional portrayal, while others are average.

It's a very novel Demon Slayer fanfic. I don't know much about it on other platforms, but it is considered to be of high quality here. The limitations are also obvious because the audience is not large. It is human nature that the rating is not high. The writing is quite delicate, but the three views are not correct. If you feel comfortable reading the novel, just go for it! Not too brainless.

The logic is clear, the senses are good, and there is nothing poisonous about it.