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I think it's okay. I hope it doesn't go too smoothly in the later stages. Now I feel like it's a little bit of a fun read. Let's add some suffering to the protagonist. Also, the writing style of fighting is still a little bit interesting. You can consider "The Battle of the Road" and "Swallowing the Starry Sky" to make readers have a sense of involvement. I feel like the progress could be slowed down a little bit. The emotions of the supporting characters are heightened, such as in "Fantasy Beasts", to make the characters come alive. Add some poems or famous quotes, such as those from "The Distant Savior". The two sides of cultivating immortals are like the peaceful game world in "Lan Ke Qi Yuan", and the villain in "The Great Road Fight" and "The Destined Villain Gu Changge" who fight for one word and use every possible means to fight.

This book is okay, the characters are intelligent and their words are not brainless. Although it has shortcomings, it is indeed a demon, but the description of the demon is relatively downplayed. Well, don't think about it, such as massacre. It is indeed immortal, the difference between immortality and mortal is naked. Five stars is appropriate! Worth a look.

It's rare to meet Shen Youchu in a hundred years, Xiao Rongyu is the most beautiful person in the world, Li Shiya has a look that lasts for ten thousand years, and Liu Ruyan is arbitrary for all eternity.

It's quite rare that the Demon Sect was not suppressed in the early stage, nor did any of his fellow sects frame him. It developed steadily and became like an upright sect. The people the protagonist met were also so nice, and the main focus was on a worldly person.

I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I did "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing Star" "Empty", "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most powerful thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me the "Peerless Magical Power" of "Unparalleled in the World", and then I went on to "Emperor's Supreme". On the way, not long after I trained the "Immortal" divine body, the "Chaos Sword God" and I had a good relationship, and gave me the "Twelve Zodiac Guardian God" as my protector, accompanying me in the "Nine Heavens of Proudness". I'm there Under "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used "Tian Zhu Tu" to defeat the world's best master "Against the Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power and the space was broken. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" era~~~ Alas! I am old, and now it is your young people's world, but You are a young man, you need to update!

This novel has been on the recommendation list for so long, and this novel made me feel like my eyes were shining brightly.

I read the novel after watching the shrimp anime first. It's pretty good. It's not completely brainless. There are some sentences in the plot that don't make sense, which makes people confused, but I can still guess the meaning. Come on.

I don't know why the rating is not high, but this is one of the few books that an old bookworm like me can read, and the author's writing style is also good!

Please support the author's new book. And I hope the author's last book is unblocked. I still want to see it.

If I had known that I would only update these two chapters today, I would not have come here. I read these two chapters in vain, and my mind flew away. When I saw the news here, I felt heavy again. After all, it was the younger sister who overstepped. If the elder sister didn't change, the younger sister would have nothing to say. My sister's Kavin today really hurt my sister's heart. My heart is as cold as ice shards. It's my sister's unlucky time. I should have been satisfied with the update of two chapters this day [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

First, the world view is grand, so the sense of enjoyment is superimposed. Secondly, the settings are rich and diverse, whether it is character settings, skills, sect background, etc., They are all unique and charming. Secondly, the protagonist setting is also very cool. I like the author's original creations of Gu and Corpse, which are very innovative and novel.

It's very beautiful, the world view is unique, the confusion between demonic cultivators and righteous people points out that good and evil lies in the individual

Two updates a day is not enough. At least 5 updates are the base. Author, if you look at other updates, at least there will be some welfare ducks. The author's writing is so wonderful that you can't put it down. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Must update Life is already very hard, so I read novels just to feel better. I need to feel better. I don't want to be miserable anymore. Life is really hard [crying][crying][crying] Enjoy reading novels

The early stages of this book were good, and the characters' personalities were established and could be rated five stars. However, in the later stages, when the protagonist became stronger, the characters gradually became more complex. Although this book is a fun novel, I think it is even more fun in the early stages, because the protagonist is weak in the early stages, and the conflicting plot of the story is mainly reflected in the fact that the enemy is strong and we are weak, and our destiny cannot be controlled independently. In the process of pursuing strength, our protagonist of light is like stepping on a tightrope at high altitude, which can be said to be exciting. But in the later period, the gap between the enemy and ourselves gradually narrowed, and the content of the article was like mowing grass while playing a game. The protagonist's harem became more and more pure tools, and the plot had no ups and downs. It doesn't look good in the later stage.

The plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the characters are vivid and three-dimensional. You can't stop reading it in one sitting! The writing style is excellent, and the foreshadowing is cleverly laid out. The more you look at it, the more you get into it. Highly recommended! It's not a loss if you enter the trap! The world view setting is novel, and there are no peeing spots in the whole process. It has been played for the second time. The story is delicate and touching, and every word is heart-warming. After reading it, I couldn't get out of the plot for a long time.

Ha... Haha... Nantianmen... Bai Yujing... I saw it all... I saw it... Oh... Mom, I can't tell... I really can't tell... Nana... I miss you so much...

It makes people excited to read it, and the article is not sluggish. [Cool] I feel very good now

I'm afraid this is not a cave in the Immortal Lord. . The more I look at it, the more similar it becomes.

I found that the determination of cultivating immortals and cultivating demons in novels is basically based on the skills and the perspective of ordinary people. The exploitation of long-lasting water is immortal, and the exploitation of people who exhaust the lake is demons.

It looks very good, but it would be better if the sword Gu is trained into a flying sword type, and then paired with a set of armor-type Gu that can change weapons. This combination is both sinister and handsome. It would be nice if the changed weapon could be a euphorbia and it could increase the protagonist's physical fitness. It would be nice if others besiege the protagonist and drag him down with other Gu, trying to kill the protagonist first.

A person who has just practiced qi has developed a zombie that is comparable to the golden elixir [laughing awkwardly] Maybe it's because I have read too many traditional immortal cultivation articles, and I always feel that the gap between realms should be very big [eating melon] Other aspects are okay

This is not like a demon sect, but more like a righteous sect. They help each other without any care. Aren't the demon sects all about profit exchanges? When you get the coffin, don't check it carefully (although your cultivation level may be too low to detect it, but you just put the dragon corpse in the small cave, aren't you afraid that this is a trap set by others?)

The protagonist written by the author is the true nature of the world of immortality. He acts casually, accepts when he needs to accept, and kills when he needs to kill. It is so comfortable to watch [OK]

It's okay, but there are some problems, some details are not handled well, the realm is a bit blurry, and this is not written well. The book is quite nice, but some details are not handled well. However, don't be too serious when reading a refreshing article. It is good to read as a refreshing article, but the score is still a bit low.

It's a masterpiece of Gu magic, the plot is very smooth, and the female characters are arranged in a unique way, at least they're not vases.

You can work on it, the writing is good, but there are too few specific plots and the upgrades are too fast.

It's pretty good. In this society of the fast food era, it's pretty good to have a novel with a fast pace and a plot that doesn't drag on.

The plot is coherent, which is rare in books about cultivating immortals. This is purely a personal opinion. So far, it is relatively watchable.

Let's evaluate it objectively. The poisonous point is that everyone has a different attitude towards things, so there will be different poisonous points, but there is no need to worry about it. Just skip the chapters you don't like. As for the system, it seems that it didn't appear much in the later period. After going upstream, the system basically didn't appear at all. If you don't like the story with multiple female protagonists, you can just skip it.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking This storyline is a bit like Bai Xiaochun, right?