
The Heaven-Defying Journey from Good-for-Nothing Bastard Son to Emperor of All Spirits
从废柴庶子到万灵帝君的逆天征途
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 445k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Traditional Eastern Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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Let me give you a suggestion, don't use the first person in fantasy. It is difficult to express a lot of information about the world view, and it is difficult to create information gaps. Use the third person limited perspective and focus on the protagonist. It is similar to the first person and has a strong sense of substitution. Secondly, don't narrate too much, use demonstrations to describe. For example, at the beginning, you directly describe the loser and directly explain the information. Where is the emotion? What do readers see? Display uses an event or a conflict to display the information that the protagonist is a loser, making the protagonist depressed. He has to solve this problem, which resonates with the readers and creates a sense of excitement for the subsequent slap in the face of the protagonist. There is no emotional foreshadowing, and it is very flat and has no feeling. Look at the Battle of the Sphere, the beginning is useless, there is no direct narrative, the test event shows the facts, others ridicule, and suppresses emotions, the protagonist is unwilling to pave the way for the subsequent solution.
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