[Unlimited streaming], [Multiple types of copies], [Group portraits], [Talent abilities], [Slightly slow heat], [Not brainless/reversal], [No heroine]
When he woke up, Chen Mingsheng found himself in a high school he had never heard of.
Eight-person dormitory, mixed gender, and... Seven strangers.
"Newcomer, do you want to follow me, otherwise you may not survive tonight!"
In the weird high school, there are rules posted in every corner:
[Please turn off the lights before 22:30, violators will be responsible for the consequences]
Please finish your meal within 10 minutes, violators will be responsible for the consequences
[Please respect the teacher]
Under the seemingly ordinary rules, there is a deadly murderous intention hidden.
The dungeon NPC that was just like a normal person one second will show murderous intent towards you without any warning the next second.
The gratitude slogan during running exercises, the strange woman in the infirmary, the surprising past between the math teacher and the principal...
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Welcome to Zhuhuo High School
[Current destiny points: 0]
[Main mission: Survive for ten days]
[Please complete the task as soon as possible]!
Reader comments
Fortunately, it's not bad for a newbie, but there are still many areas that need improvement. It can be clearly seen that I want to sublimate the theme of the copy, so every time I encounter some "things", I will talk about some big principles, but it is a bit abrupt, lacks realism and feels like it is shoehorned in. You don't have to explain everything clearly, you can also feel it by looking at the changes in the characters and the plot (for example, if a person is withdrawn, you don't need to write that he is withdrawn, but that he always stays alone, speaks in a cold manner, and refuses to get along with others). This may be too difficult, but readers definitely don't want to be forced to read some big principles. I also saw that I wanted to be more cheerful and made some internet memes, but there was always a sense of dissonance. Secondly, I feel that the characters don't have much sense of crisis, especially Song. An ordinary person who traveled to a dungeon and knew the rules of the strange story must be able to do as little as possible and talk as little as possible. However, he took it too much as an ordinary world. For example, things like being killed while drinking water are at least a way to die after a day or two when you find that you have not violated the rules and relax a little. The part about surviving the physical education teacher is a bit too forceful. There are also some questions, such as asking a question about talent. Depending on the person you replied to, you should also know the question. Furthermore, it is understandable that the worldview structure is not discussed at the beginning, but at the end of the first copy, more needs to be discussed, such as situation, reasons, talent level, talent level, organization, props, etc. Maybe you don't have an outline, so you don't have it at all, but it's better to prepare early and be better. Although I think it will definitely be explained, I still want to remind you why they made the second copy so quickly. What was done well may be that it talked about the differences between the protagonist and Song in facing bullying and being bullied (it must be more than this, but unless it is particularly good or I just remembered it, I won't mention it if it makes sense). Personally, I still prefer the kind-hearted protagonist, so please keep it up. I forgot about the others. I may remember it next time when I have enough experience. But it looks like this one is going to be a hit.
I just finished reading the first story. I really like it. I have filled in all the pitfalls in the first story. I am very satisfied with it, haha. When Dr. Mumu said that he had a boyfriend, I realized at that time why this male doctor stayed in the medical office for so long, and I felt like "Wow, this is all clearly written, how good it is."
And the most important thing is that it doesn't have the diaosi flavor of other authors (not all of them). I really like reading this type of novels. As a result, many novels of this type have young women who are still charming. Let me describe some of them who are fragrant and beautiful, but also have physical discomfort. I wouldn't do this, I feel respected.
Come on, come on⛽
The first copy of Chapter 51 is over and contains many twists and turns. I hope that all readers will at least read the first copy before abandoning the book [Sending my heart]
The reversal in Chapter 51 is indeed unexpected, and the copy components of this book are a bit complicated [face covering] quite novel.
The first dungeon is quite interesting, with twists and plots. Although some characters were not very good at the beginning, they gradually got better later on. I hope you won't stop updating.
Come on, author, come on!
Five stars are encouragement, not the quality of the book. I can only say that the food is tasteless. The only thing is that the food is tasteless.
It's good to watch. I've seen too many cold-blooded and ruthless protagonists, so it would be nice to see this one with some humanity.
I just finished reading the first copy. It's well written and exciting. I just want to ask, is there a female protagonist? If there is a female protagonist, I will wait and see. If there is no female protagonist, I will continue to watch [Send Heart] @
Yes, I like it.
The first copy is quite nice.
It's nice to read and well written. Except for some places where the writing is not very good, everything else is good. The teammates are united and don't hold back, but the reversal in the ending is a bit unprepared [Like]
After reading the first volume, the main character will not have a female protagonist and there will be no ambiguity. Moreover, the women who appear in the article are much better than other novels.
Don't be a eunuch, the author is so good-looking [Adoration]
A very good novel that reminded me of my high school life
The writing is quite good, and I really like this kind of subject matter. Kudos to the author!
It's pretty good, it has great potential, so go for it, author.
Fortunately, it's not bad for a newbie, but there are still many areas that need improvement. It can be clearly seen that I want to sublimate the theme of the copy, so every time I encounter some "things", I will talk about some big principles, but it is a bit abrupt, lacks realism and feels like it is shoehorned in. You don't have to explain everything clearly, you can also feel it by looking at the changes in the characters and the plot (for example, if a person is withdrawn, you don't need to write that he is withdrawn, but that he always stays alone, speaks in a cold manner, and refuses to get along with others). This may be too difficult, but readers definitely don't want to be forced to read some big principles. I also saw that I wanted to be more cheerful and made some internet memes, but there was always a sense of dissonance. Secondly, I feel that the characters don't have much sense of crisis, especially Song. An ordinary person who traveled to a dungeon and knew the rules of the strange story must be able to do as little as possible and talk as little as possible. However, he took it too much as an ordinary world. For example, things like being killed while drinking water are at least a way to die after a day or two when you find that you have not violated the rules and relax a little. The part about surviving the physical education teacher is a bit too forceful. There are also some questions, such as asking a question about talent. Depending on the person you replied to, you should also know the question. Furthermore, it is understandable that the worldview structure is not discussed at the beginning, but at the end of the first copy, more needs to be discussed, such as situation, reasons, talent level, talent level, organization, props, etc. Maybe you don't have an outline, so you don't have it at all, but it's better to prepare early and be better. Although I think it will definitely be explained, I still want to remind you why they made the second copy so quickly. What was done well may be that it talked about the differences between the protagonist and Song in facing bullying and being bullied (it must be more than this, but unless it is particularly good or I just remembered it, I won't mention it if it makes sense). Personally, I still prefer the kind-hearted protagonist, so please keep it up. I forgot about the others. I may remember it next time when I have enough experience. But it looks like this one is going to be a hit.
I just finished reading the first story. I really like it. I have filled in all the pitfalls in the first story. I am very satisfied with it, haha. When Dr. Mumu said that he had a boyfriend, I realized at that time why this male doctor stayed in the medical office for so long, and I felt like "Wow, this is all clearly written, how good it is." And the most important thing is that it doesn't have the diaosi flavor of other authors (not all of them). I really like reading this type of novels. As a result, many novels of this type have young women who are still charming. Let me describe some of them who are fragrant and beautiful, but also have physical discomfort. I wouldn't do this, I feel respected. Come on, come on⛽
The first copy of Chapter 51 is over and contains many twists and turns. I hope that all readers will at least read the first copy before abandoning the book [Sending my heart]
The reversal in Chapter 51 is indeed unexpected, and the copy components of this book are a bit complicated [face covering] quite novel.
The first dungeon is quite interesting, with twists and plots. Although some characters were not very good at the beginning, they gradually got better later on. I hope you won't stop updating.
Come on, author, come on!
Five stars are encouragement, not the quality of the book. I can only say that the food is tasteless. The only thing is that the food is tasteless.
It's good to watch. I've seen too many cold-blooded and ruthless protagonists, so it would be nice to see this one with some humanity.
I just finished reading the first copy. It's well written and exciting. I just want to ask, is there a female protagonist? If there is a female protagonist, I will wait and see. If there is no female protagonist, I will continue to watch [Send Heart] @
Yes, I like it.
The first copy is quite nice.
It's nice to read and well written. Except for some places where the writing is not very good, everything else is good. The teammates are united and don't hold back, but the reversal in the ending is a bit unprepared [Like]
After reading the first volume, the main character will not have a female protagonist and there will be no ambiguity. Moreover, the women who appear in the article are much better than other novels.
Don't be a eunuch, the author is so good-looking [Adoration]
A very good novel that reminded me of my high school life
The writing is quite good, and I really like this kind of subject matter. Kudos to the author!
It's pretty good, it has great potential, so go for it, author.