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I would like to make a small comment, Narcissa and Luke would call their son Xiaolong or Draco, wouldn't it be too foreign to call them Malfoy? It seems that outsiders call people by their surnames, and people who are recognized usually call people by their Christian names. Also, it's Draco, not Decorah, and the rat's name is Scabbers, not Squeak. As a teacher, Snape should ride in a night carriage, not a boat [face covering]

The author's fan story is quite good, and there is no problem at all. If the writing is better, not to mention 90%, it can still surpass 70 or 80% of the current Harry fandoms. Of course, I don't have any big requirements for the writing, as long as the plot is good, so this author's book is quite to my liking. It's only 4 words and I love reading it. The output is very good every time. It can be regarded as a good fan book that has not been discovered by anyone.

The concept is quite good, I hope the author will not stop updating it, or write the finale as an accident. I like it after reading it, so I give you a five-star review to encourage you. However, many small details are not handled properly. If the author wants to get a higher score, it is best to copy the relevant content in the book, modify the copy, then withdraw the book and send the modified content.