Wuhun: Binding to God System at the Beginning

I've been chasing it for a few days, and I feel it's a very good setting for Dou Er. The protagonist travels through time and becomes a young master. The system + three-life martial arts are very interesting, and there is also the black technology of soul guidance. The interaction between the emotional lines is burning and warm, and the combination of technology and martial arts is novel and feels great.

It's very good-looking, and the characters are very well designed. I just hope that the protagonist can change it and add more twists and turns when telling the story. Although it may feel a bit deliberate, it's better than being brainless. I hope you won't be caught by copyright issues and keep writing. Xiao 0's real-name support! Love to watch and watch [Cool] [Cool]

Come on, author! When will it exceed 200,000 words?

It's a really good Douluo novel. The designs of martial arts and characters are very exquisite. However, the plot in the early stage may be a little bit rushed, but it should be to avoid the water content. The combination of quick travel and system feels very good. If there are academy and soul master competitions in the future, the plot will be more exciting. It might be better to slow down some of the plot later and add more emotional lines.

It's beautiful and beautiful, and I like it in many ways. Fortunately, the first time I read Douluo fan fiction, I encountered a big book [Blow a kiss] [Learned] [Learned]

Who is the other male protagonist?

It's very beautiful. Keep up the good work, author [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Not bad, but not enough

Beautiful 😍 clear logic