Mortal*******

Can the author grasp the subsequent development of the plot? Is this too sudden? Human fire and so on. Technical terms are difficult to write. The poisonous point is that the protagonist is the beginning of the future. If this is the starting point of the future, then how does the protagonist succeed in seizing the body according to your setting? Because I don't know how many years have passed and everything has been cut off. Why does the protagonist suddenly wake up? In what way? But come on, if you really can't write well, just write a traditional fairy-cultivating family story. It's a new attempt. Come on, author!

Damn, at first I thought it was a simple article about cultivating immortals, but when I saw the human civilization fire plan later, I really admired it. It's beautiful and I like it. It's a development I couldn't have imagined.

Very beautiful and worth recommending! ! !

Personally, I think it suits my taste better.

It's well written, but a little short.

A science fiction novel about a fantasy world. It's good if you like this subject.

The subject matter is novel and the plot is good

Great book, please write it quickly.

Okay, I can watch it

It's still ok, I'll give you 5 stars.

Not bad, simple and clear evaluation

I saw some shadows of mortals

It's beautiful, keep it up, the author [sends my heart]

The writing is good, the writing style is good, the logic is self-consistent, and there is no nonsense. It is worth reading.

Don't do it, just smile

The update is too slow. 200,000 Words can be counted as 7 points, and 500,000 words can be counted as 9 points.

It's pretty good, but unfortunately not many people see it. Come on

Not bad, the plot is quite attractive