Transformed into a Witch, Ms. Chishima's Second Personality

The setting is very attractive, and the writing is good enough. The only drawback is that the plot is slow to follow and makes it a bit uncomfortable to follow. It took 170,000 words to be pushed to the branch. It should have taken a long time to write, but it still does not affect the fact that it is a good work.

The story setting and writing are pretty good, but the wording is too gorgeous and seems a bit exhausted. Maybe a few years ago, it would have been very popular, but in today's fast-paced life, it is a failure. And to be honest, there is no work that is good enough to make people feel that everything is worth it. It is equivalent to an 80-point work, but you need to pay attention to see it, but you can easily and smoothly see 80-point works in other places. [Chigua] is more suitable for people who like this genre and have a slow mind. Or if you don't have any good novels, then this can be a waste of time. [Chigua] It feels like there's a bit too much emphasis on the heroine's cuteness, just like the protagonist in the first ten chapters of the early stage, who can only scream and howl, but can't do anything. Later, there are always some things that can be explained, but the heroine is stupid, and then the protagonist does not explain it, just calls him a fool, and then the heroine retorts, "I am not a fool, I am a fool." Just like coquettishness, too much is not enough. Can this kind of character really be used as a writer? The protagonist also has 3 million words of writing on the setting. He treats the heroine as a daughter, but does not explain anything, and only calls idiots. It really makes people feel uncomfortable after reading too much. Repeated routines, repeated stupidity, but no education. He will not tell the heroine that what he just did is stupid and why he can't do that. He will not tell her. He will only call her stupid [laughter]

It's all good-looking, feel free to read it [laughing evilly] [OK] I brushed it twice when I didn't grow up, and here's a summary: The writing style is very good, and it ranks high in today's Tomato books, but it seems a bit "scientific". Most of the content of the article is biased toward descriptions of appearance, environment, and actions. The exquisite vocabulary may be surprising when you first appreciate it, but too much description will lose the sense of surprise when you first appreciate it, making people feel boring, and it also leads to The slow progress of the plot makes people lose interest in reading. The current feeling is that dozens of chapters have passed but only two or three days have passed in the book. This may be one of the reasons why this book has so few readers (but it is full of sugar, very sweet 👍). The protagonist is also uneasy about his identity as a time traveler, which may also be a poisonous point for some readers. What I suggest to the author here is: appropriately reduce the description without making the book mediocre, speed up the advancement of the main plot while interspersing some daily life, correct the protagonist (don't be decadent and self-destructive because of such trivial things, you bastard!), And the most important point: increase the amount, increase the amount, increase the amount! It's not enough to watch! It's hard to find a good book, don't give up [crazy] The author is so great, can he keep books? [Laughs crookedly]

I haven't seen much tomatoes, so I don't know what the environment here is like. If there are comparison objects, I think I can make a more accurate evaluation. So I can only make an evaluation based on the average level of another website. There is no doubt that the author's writing skills are quite good, and he has put a lot of effort into describing the appearance of the girls. The narrative perspective is based on the protagonist, and it seems to be a setting of one body and two souls. This perspective is quite novel in the books I know. Moreover, the world view of the plot is also very innovative. Mahou Soju and other things have become very popular in recent years. The concentration of oranges is also very high, and the fat intestines are not punctured. It's simply spiritual food! Although I feel that the author's online writing experience is a bit immature, I tell you that often only this kind of author has the potential to become a big shot! Don't let me down, given time, you will definitely become a big boss! (Especially the boss of Orange Literature!)😎

Among the themes of many magical girls in Tomato, this book's one-body and two-spirits are eye-catching. The time traveler does not completely replace the protagonist, but as a character who usually does not interfere in her daily life, it feels like twins [blowing kisses]. Unlike the future generations of magical girls who are usually either fighting or on the road to battle, this book has not read any lines of suffering, hatred, darkness and cruelty. This kind of ode to friendship and daily life made my eyes shine. I hope the author can work hard! I like the daily routines with good writing and the occasional dramatic battles! Give you a five-star review and keep updating! [Crazy]

In a strange setting, the battle of the magical girl becomes a stage play. The better the performance, the more powerful the magical girl becomes. The magical girl is more like an actor. The witch is not a villain in the traditional sense, but another lineup. The characters who appear in the stage play will affect the established ending of the stage play. Therefore, if the magical girl wants to perform well, she must drive them out first. It's okay, there's nothing wrong with the writing, there's nothing serious about the plot, it's mainly about Lily Tie Tie (screening readers). This subject, if you say it sounds good, is called novel magical girls, if it sounds bad, it's called "forcibly rubbing against magical girls" (this sentence can also be reversed, it is relatively neutral). I can't comment on it, so I will give it 4 stars to save myself from arguing with others.

I think the author's preference for figurative art expression and the integration of operatic elements have perfectly created the characteristics of this work. The aria-like inner monologue, the duet-like dialogue structure, and the stage lighting-like environmental description together constitute a unique set of narrative grammar. This deliberate sense of form is not decorative, but forms a deep intertextuality with the theme. The long rhythm, detailed environment, and delicate emotions are all things that the author tried his best to express and work hard for. It perfectly serves as a stepping stone to assist the plot. It is not the poisonous point in some people's opinion. The slow pace, complicated environment expression, and complex characters' emotions, etc., Just negate the author's creative habits. Just as readers have different tastes, please don't deny the author's characteristics. Works that lack characteristics will ultimately be lackluster. Above

Y1s1, whether it is to show off skills or to shape the world view, the author's accumulation of writing is beyond doubt. (Compared to DS, not string) The entire stage world shows extremely outstanding features in the author's introduction of less than 200,000 words, which is highly recognizable compared to other online texts. (It's not a compliment, it's a fact) The characters of the girls are also quite appropriate. There are no bad character designs for the time being (maybe just because I haven't written much yet). The sugar content is very high. I followed [][][]

Shoujo opera-style magical girl, the description is very, very delicate, which is good news for those who like to play up the drama in their minds. But the price is that the amount of text information is extremely low. The plot of a normal novel can be written in 10,000 words, but this book requires 30,000 words. Underestimated, maybe 50,000 words It's tied. The update experience for this book is probably the worst, so I'll see you in a month and see if you've gained weight [plus one on bookshelf]

It feels like a self-help article, the kind of daily article that is a bit packed with words. Those who are interested in radio waves will probably like it. If it is not suitable, I will probably not be able to read it at all. It is a new book, and I will give it a 5⭐ Supplement: After reading the first two chapters, it is recommended to skip reading and briefly look at the relationship between the characters. It feels like the main text barely begins around chapter 20. The descriptions in the middle are a bit too protracted and it is easy to read (only a suggestion, it depends on the individual situation) Supplement 2: Basically, it's a little bit of daily life interspersed with various Lily script interpretations. The magical girls here are more inclined to idol actors. I don't know if the villain didn't appear. Basically, all the members are Lily-oriented. If you like it, you can check it out.

A very excellent work. The writing and plot setting are also uniquely excellent. After watching Tomato for 4 or 5 years, this is the first time I have seen such refreshing and extremely refreshing writing. It is no longer the repetitive template writing in the past.

I rarely write book reviews, but this book actually stood out to me. The main themes are lilies, narcissus and girl opera. It can be said to be a very new subject on the Internet (how can there be a book that perfectly contains my favorite tags for reading [crying]). The article is generally stream-of-consciousness but the writing style is surprisingly attractive to me. It has a strong opera flavor (I really like your description of drama [love]). It can be seen that the author has a good foundation in this aspect (but Unfortunately, in the current overall environment of online novels, there are not many audiences for stream of consciousness, and everyone tends to use cool and fast-paced themes.) The limitations of the subject matter mean that the audience for this book is destined to not be too large. The scores and ratings may not look too high, but the retention rate of readers should be very good (niche has the advantage of being niche [like]) and the author's update speed is honestly quite good (the writing speed of stream of consciousness is still difficult to compare with traditional novels). You can also see relatively new memes in some plots, and the author is still keeping up with the times (you don't have any manuscripts saved [I'm about to cry]) Let's talk about some things that I personally think are slightly flawed. The world view of the story is not very complete (for example, the author's own settings such as the definition of stage life can be described in more detail) This book is still flawless overall, and the score seems to be on the low side (I'm reading it now, it's about 8.3). Considering the content of the opera, I think the score can be around 9.0 (In my case it's 10.0 [Crying], I really like Lily Narcissus and this style of writing, it feels like I'm reading poetry) At present, I feel that this book will be a long one. Although the results may not be ideal, I still hope that the author can persevere and finish it. I have also followed the book from only a few dozen chapters to now, and I can see that the number of readers is still increasing, and the author's writing style and control of the plot are also improving. I hope the author can stick to writing the story of Yui-chan and Yui, and everyone can wait until the finale. Some digressions: Author, you work very hard, maybe I am too greedy, can't you really write faster? Please, I can do anything [crying] [crying] [crying] And do you really not plan to open a book group [almost crying]

The pace is a bit slow but it's super beautiful. The shortcoming may be that the author's writing is too literary? The style is not quite like a Tomato book. Anyway, come on, author, you must keep writing, I will do anything.

I have fallen in love with the first 19 chapters. This book is so suitable for me. Just at this time, he jumped out and asked me to rate it. I'll add it in lowercase letters later. As a fan of magical girls, Giraffe🦒, and someone who has been in the audience for many years, the author's description of the stage, the dialogue of the opera, and the emotional climax all caught my attention. It's like watching a girl's opera back then, singing, fighting, and flirting on stage (crossed out). The elf power is a stage device, and the form of expression is the difference in strength. I think the gap between Yui and Yayoi is really well written. This is a key to my confidence in this book. Different interpretations of the same plot have to be distinguished, which fully reflects the author's control over the work. The protagonist's love for Yui is also very close to my heart. It is also crucial that the protagonist combines the situation with the stage. This will definitely happen more often in the future. I believe it will get better and better in the future. Looking forward to it... Now we can see the weakness of this book, which is the sluggish plot advancement. The matter of sorting appears too early, but more than a hundred chapters have not yet reached that point. The author buried the foreshadowing very early, but the highlight of the book does not lie in the development of the plot, which gives readers an anxious reading experience. I want to see why the branch plot has not arrived yet. This idea amplifies the reader's eagerness, which leads to negative experiences such as skipping reading. The positioning of this book is not meant to lead to boredom. The setting of the stage where a song can be played at any time allows for stories to be told at any time. Therefore, my point of view is to abandon the strong guiding nature of the main line and not give readers a too conspicuous main line goal. After all, it is enough to watch various operas as unit plays. Of course, regarding various stages, I don't want all stories to be sung about love. The author is indeed very good at writing this aspect. Love is too fiery, twisted and loopy. The stage and daily life should be intersecting lines, but this is still too difficult to design. The stage and the daily life of the protagonist are almost parallel and have no intersection. There is a sense of separation. Of course, I can understand it. I will be very surprised if the author can write other styles of stages in the future, and I will continue to look forward to it... When did the stage of self-analysis, piercing the fragility of the heart, and the stage that was supposed to shine and fight become a stage for trash talk... A war of words?

The quality is super high. The full text is stage-oriented, telling the love and hatred between stage creatures. The full text is guided by a slow pace. The author likes to use stage operas to portray characters, which makes the full text have a Japanese comic flavor. It is considered a high-quality Narcissus novel.

The writing style is excellent and the plot is also good. The only shortcoming now is probably the update speed. It's hard to imagine that this kind of book with extremely gorgeous writing and rich knowledge reserve was written by a boy [Thoughts]

A very unique magical girl daily life, I just want to see this! [Laughing out loud]

First of all, I must give it five stars. Although the first part of the book is a bit boring, after that point, the rest becomes quite interesting. When I read online novels, I just read interesting stories. What I read is the story itself. Reading this novel made me feel very interesting. Anyway, I felt a little bored when I first started reading it. But as I read it, I realized how interesting this novel is. Especially the addition of stage life setting? Interesting little stories one after another. This book just attracted my attention the more I read it. Unlike the previous book I read, which was basically astringent, boring and unedited, it was included in some novel groups or something unedited. In fact, I don't really like reading that kind of book either. In fact, I think that for an online novel to be eye-catching, the important thing is whether its content is interesting enough and interesting enough for the audience. This book is a very typical example of what I personally like. I hope the author can stick to it

The writing style is more romantic, but unfortunately I should be considered an extreme female protagonist? I cannot accept this setting of "the heroine's CP is a heartthrob", and in the first 200 chapters, the heroine and Yui always have a sense of powerlessness as a sleeping husband and his wife. Yui is always being teased and seduced by other characters, and there is even a Shura field between Yui and her four suitors (without the heroine), and then the heroine is incompetent and furious (?); Because I should be considered an extreme female protagonist? Every time I see Yui being teased by others, I always feel aggrieved. If you ignore this aspect, then this book is really the best book I have read recently.

Author, I will probably always remember your book [face covering] The overall evaluation is that the flaws are not concealed. Fortunately, the insights into the human heart, gorgeous vocabulary, silky rhythm, vivid language, and the setting of the world are really beyond the imagination of ordinary people: 1: Magical girls, as stage beings, must not only use the power of the stage to infect the audience, but also use the power of the stage to defeat the enemy. 2: Similar to "Jockey Girl", you are in a "game" world, where there are version iterations and two opposing camps. The protagonist begins to study in the academy. The author focuses on the element of stage drama, which can be said to be the pioneer of a new track. The disadvantage is that the rhythm lacks variety, and it may be possible to write several chapters in a day, which may be a bit watery in a sense. There is also the characterization of the battle. I guess the author did not fully conceive it. When there is an enemy, you can put the enemy first. The OOC setting in the interpretation is a bit contrary to the tone of the setting. Except, the author's hobby is a bit niche. There are basically no men in the whole world, they are all lilies and the like. It's so outrageous that if there are more people in the future, it will be blocked (if you want to write like this, you'd better learn from "The House Witch" and directly change it into a completely fictional background). And it's too niche to write like this. Let's put it this way, add some men who can fight, and reduce the outrageous plot. This book will be a hit, and I look forward to the author's next book [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]

The novel is quite good. The author's vocabulary is gorgeous, and the language and the psychological description of the characters are very delicate. However, it is not suitable for the medium of online novels. The plot lacks a bit of twists and turns. An overly detailed description of the characters will reduce the reader's sense of involvement. The gorgeous vocabulary also means that it is a bit difficult to understand. Alas, I have no energy to read after 50 chapters. People with delicate minds should find it quite interesting. Come on author.

Vodka's description of the girl's mood is as excellent as ever. As expected of you. Bb.

I've read half of it. The subject matter is novel (at least in my opinion) and the author's writing is good. However, the world view in the first 20 pictures is a bit long for today's world. If you don't understand the world view, it will make you confused and it is easier to persuade readers. Moreover, the protagonist's presence is not high before Chapter 20. If you don't mind this, it is still highly recommended (the above is only a personal opinion, and I have only read half of it. If you have different opinions, you can post them for your reference).

This book made me truly feel the healing power of words. Reading this book is like watching clouds, light and soft, pure and spiritual. The writing is beautiful, and the author's true feelings can be felt between the lines, and the author's extensive knowledge can be seen in the details. Personally, I feel that this book has some characteristics of poetic novels, and it has clear advantages and disadvantages. (The following comments are based on the chapter I am reading now) Advantages: The language is beautiful and the words are gorgeous. It does not use fast-paced and intense plot conflicts to create characters, but uses a soothing writing style to create characters and praise the beautiful qualities of the characters' humanity. It is pleasant and quiet to read. It is unique among similar novels in 🍅. Disadvantages: It is not very friendly to readers who like fast-paced and intense plot collisions, and there are some unreasonable aspects in the world view and plot settings, but this does not affect reading. Personally, I think it is a good book to read in your leisure time, which helps to relax your mind. I really like the large text, which has great visual tension. It would be better if it could be faster and let me read the masterpieces of my early years. [Blow a kiss] [Smile] I wish the author a prosperous literary career and a happy life [Sending my heart] Why can't it be sent?

Very interesting article, the writing style is very touching Oh, by the way, if you feel that you can't stand it at the beginning, you can look at the general setting and jump to the middle and later stages. The perception of this book in the middle and later stages increases linearly. Overall it's a good book, highly recommended

Narcissus, all female characters, and the style and language settings are quite distinctive. The prosperous language and rhythm in the front are a bit unclear. Who is the author of the novel to raise OC here? The stage setting can be considered to romanticize the setting of the witch. The overall appearance is relatively relaxed and gorgeous, which is why you died. Reading this review, the battle plot is still a bit too much, so the style change is too fast to handle.

The front part is a bit boring, so you can skip to read it. Branch Yui-chan's maid mini-game is really interesting, and the latest chapter's Shura Field is also good to watch. Now I'm curious about a question, is it a hundred queens or a hundred orders? It looks like Hyakudan Yui and Yui, but there are so many characters who have a good relationship with Yui, and they look like Hyakumo. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I haven't watched it for too long, but I can't help but complain about it. The setting of this novel is quite attractive to me, and the plot direction and plot arrangement are very, um, the flavor of early Japanese light novels. The author's writing style is still good, but there are too many complicated descriptions, which can easily delay the direction and rhythm of the plot, and make people unable to grasp the key points when reading, making the whole book very tiring to read. How should I say... A bit literary? A bit derogatory. If I had the patience to read it, it would be a good book to read, but now I have no patience and it is destined to be unsuitable for the general public. I will continue to read it without further ado, hoping that things will change in the next year. Observe the 4 stars first.

It's very good. The setting is relatively novel and interesting. Of course, the first 20 chapters or so made me a little tired, but it got a lot better in the later chapters. After reading part of the second volume, the overall feeling is still good. However, the story feels like it is still in the early stages, and the changes between the two protagonists are not obvious yet. Now my personal feeling is that Yui will do most of the work, including training, negotiation, fighting, and exams, while Yui will appear to be an outsider once she enters this kind of plot, either watching or thinking about love. Although Yui has a bit of a naive character, she can't keep thinking about it and then leave the battle to Yui. I really want to see Yui's stage performance. I don't know if there will be a growth line for Yui in the future. If she only has her own body, Yui will also have to grow up. Otherwise, it will be difficult to support her current identity as a student of the Lion Academy. We can even let Yui leave for a period of time, or sleep for a period of time. It feels like Yui's old father's mentality is difficult to change after being together all the time, and Yui will always rely on Yui. Overall, it is worth watching. After all, it feels like it has just begun. The story is still long. I look forward to the follow-up development.

It feels very much like a Japanese light novel. Both Yui and Yui are very lovable. The author is also very good at playing tricks. There are many developments that are quite unexpected. Even if there is a small flaw in the middle, it still cannot cover up its brilliance. The only problem is that the update is a bit slow.