Travel Through the World of Furui and Raise the Evil Dragon That You Want to Defeat

Hmm, hmm... I feel like what I wrote may be... Maybe maybe... Probably probably... Okay. If there is anything wrong with the writing style or the general plot, please give me some advice.

The setting of Furui's world is very eye-catching! The orc element has its own cuteness, and the interaction between different races is lively and interesting, which outlines a novel and lively picture of a different world [Thinking]. The protagonist Xia Yu's "rebellious and stubborn" character is lovable. In response to the system instruction of "defeat the evil dragon", he insists on raising a dragon (being raised by a dragon [laughing evilly]). This sense of rebellion is very tense. The plot puts aside the routine of fighting monsters and upgrading, and focuses on the daily life of the protagonist in a different world. Healing is easy and effortless, and the pace is bright. It brings new ideas to the old story of time travel + system. Reading is like watching a relaxing fantasy sketch, which is very suitable for decompressing. The emotional lines of Xia Yu, Yuanyuan and Su Yi are also very sweet [blowing kisses]. Although Lao Jie is updated once a day, the content of each article is very interesting and interesting. Although Lao Jie is a man with a science major, his writing style has surpassed that of most Tomato authors. This is simply a masterpiece, highly recommended! ! ! (≧ｗ≦) We've reached chapter 247. The plot has developed ups and downs, but it's still interesting. I still highly recommend it [laughing]

It looks good, there are no particularly big swords, and the writing is good. The setting is quite interesting, and it doesn't mess up a bunch of settings. As for the author's XP... I wish Xia Yu good luck.

The writing is really beautiful! I was just a shotacon at first, reading Lao Chen Jian's other books, but after reading this book, I fell in love with Fu Rui! The updates are so stable (one update a day, an article is about 2,500 words), can it be updated ten times a day?

I've caught up with the latest chapter, so come over and give it a perfect score. However, I am not educated, so I can only say that this book is very well written. The biggest problem with the whole book is the update speed. (No, there isn't.) I have some suggestions: I feel that there are certain types of passages that easily pull me away from the immersion in the wonderful plot, such as long paragraphs of scene descriptions and environment descriptions. The article mentions the author from Xia Yu's perspective. And it feels weird to introduce it again every time "Mu Yu" is mentioned. I don't know if others feel the same way. If anyone sees this comment, please tell me, thank you.

Very beautiful (=^▽^=)[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]. However, please take my advice: Never read this novel in public; do not listen to this novel in public; do not listen to this novel with headphones in public; do not listen to this novel with Bluetooth headsets in public; and do not listen to this novel with hidden Bluetooth headsets in public. [Smile][Smile][Smile] You don't have the willpower to suppress that rebellious corner of your mouth. I don't know if the author will read it. It's a very good novel, but in my opinion, it doesn't look interesting. The plot is okay, the CP is okay, but there is an inexplicable uninterestingness. And call it knives, it's sweet everywhere. Call it sweet, but there are knives everywhere. Also, the way technology and magic are handled is a bit messy. Don't focus entirely on the protagonist's side. When the protagonist has technology, technology is effective when facing ordinary enemies. Technology has no big effect when facing more powerful enemies. Moreover, technology cannot be combined with magic on the protagonist's side. But when it comes to Zanfeng, technology and magic are well combined, and technology is very effective. Just, don't write this. Very good novel.

Unlike other time travel stories, the protagonist has to carefully cover up things about his original world. The protagonist of this book can be said to be blatant. However, I feel that the difference in combat power is too big. When the four pillars stand together, the king of the beast realm is so different from the Dragon Emperor, and the Dragon Emperor is not even a little bit different from the boss. But the boss is so powerful that he has to rule the world by slowly infiltrating. Putting aside the combat power, the setting and world view of this book are still very good. The characters are well created. Everyone in the protagonist group has their own characteristics. The plot is also a bit funny. It is worth watching, but don't be bee[cry][cry][cry]

Current progress: Chapter 80 Now I personally feel that the novel is quite well written. Maybe I will continue to comment, but let me talk about it first. Because the current plot is very short, I don't see many or big problems. If I insist on talking about one problem, it is too slow. I recommend updating it twice a day. However, the plot is okay. The portrayal of the characters and the arrangement of the plot are very orderly, and the main line has been fully demonstrated so far, so I am now looking forward to the follow-up plot of this book. Just a quick mention: I admire Qianye Yuan and Su Yi One more thing: Can you write me into the protagonist group? Awa, I may be suitable for the words "epileptic" or "awakening" (because my setting is a bit similar) As for why I gave it four stars, it's because I'm afraid you'll be proud of giving me one more star xwx

It turns out that comment was a bit offensive, so I deleted it and posted it again. Overall, this book is very well written, especially the description of the environment and the classical Chinese are very literary, and the writing is particularly touching. The plot is also very exciting, a bit subversive and quite funny. Then let's comment on the combat power. I always feel that the combat power of this book is very strange. There are tens of thousands and hundreds of millions at every turn. The gap is too big. I feel that the author fills in the numbers with his feet, but the issue of combat power is not obvious. One obvious problem is the emotional line of this book... Three men, one 1, two 0, two couples were created out of nowhere. This relationship is really novel and how to write it. Moreover, the character of Su Yi is a bit broken. It gives me the feeling... How can I describe it... I feel like the man in Shu Likou's Oh Hua Ai. The author should take care of himself.

Every time, I get killed by Xia Yuyuan and Su Yitian (I want to be Su Yi's dog!), But I was really anxious when I saw my favorite Su Yi had his memory wiped out (Old vinegar comes out to die, I want to send you a blade!), I didn't sleep well that night... The overall feeling is very good, this is also the first novel that I think is the best (I want n, bad vinegar, don't kill me 555) Hold high the banner of Su Yi! I am Su Yi's dog! Su Yi is the most handsome and cutest! (No one should be able to see it, Khan)

I love it so much. The author should hurry up. It's not enough. _∧＿∧_ ((∀｀/ ) /⌒／ /(__ノ＼_ノ (_ノ ||| Awesome~~Like~~~ ∧＿∧∧＿∧ (( ∀ ))∀) ) `＼ ∧ /｜/｜ (＿ノ＿)_ノL＿)

The book is very good and has no shortcomings, but unfortunately it is not completely suitable for me. At the beginning of the novel, I was immersed in the world built by the author. I would not be involved in it, but I could feel the emotions of the characters in the novel very well, experience their deep friendship, and enjoy the down-to-earth atmosphere of the book. I remember when I first started reading this novel. At that time, I was attracted by the title and introduction of the book, which was rare, and I wanted to give it a try. Later, I actually saw every detail between the protagonist and the orange puppy, and that kind of pure emotion made me yearn for it. But not long after, the little evil dragon appeared. I was confused at first as to why such a character should be added to destroy the originally good world of two people. But soon, the little evil dragon almost perfectly integrated into it, evolving the two-person world into an iron triangle. This was a surprise to me. As for what happened next, I don't remember much about it. All in all, this is a good novel, but multiple male protagonists are not suitable for me. I prefer a smaller circle. Four points support, one point regret; The writing is average (my review), I still hope Haihan.

A very interesting novel with an interesting plot. The interaction between characters is also very good.

The content is interesting, the character description is vivid, and the author has a rich imaginationദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧ Can the author update 30 chapters a day? 2 Chapters are really not enough_(:з∠)_

Well, it looks good. The five countries among them may refer to the five permanent members in reality, and the Fuli people may refer to the peacekeeping forces in the county. It should be quite similar. I will analyze it for a while and send out the corresponding countries in each region [eating melon] It looks good, but there is some foreshadowing. Let's see what the author writes later [Chigua] And I can be sure that the Nine-tailed Fox Ancestor should correspond to me and my motherland, the wolf should correspond to Sukka, the cat should correspond to England or France, and the dog should correspond to England or France. I am not sure about the two above. I will read the plot again.

The text is interesting and lively, with appropriate jokes, and it's very satisfying. It's a pretty good novel [smile] Five stars ψ(｀∇´)ψ

It's really good-looking, with wits and battles. The relationship between Xia Xia and Mr. Yuanyuan Su is super sweet. There are very few knives. There is only one at the moment. The daily life between a group of little guys is very warm, even though it is just three couple dogs and a few light bulbs.

This is the only furry novel that can make me feel comfortable. I must stick to it [crying]

I like it very much, the three of them are so close to each other [shy] I hope the third child can live a good life [sending heartfelt wishes]

I am not interested in Fu Rui, but I accidentally clicked on this book and found it to be quite good. What surprised me was that the author is a high school student and his writing style beat 99% of people on Tomato. I have never understood the relationship between the three little ones in the protagonist group, is this true: Xia Yu←Su Yi→ Xia Yu←Su Yi→Qianye Yuan→Xia Yu

Advantages: The writing is very good, the updates are regular, and you can feel that the author has a clear outline in mind; the funny scenes are very enjoyable Neutral: Some characters have distinct personalities, but when there are more characters, the roles assigned to each person are diluted; the motivations of some villains are a bit blunt Disadvantages: The plot is a bit messy and the main line lacks motivation.

First of all, the story is very interesting, and secondly, this book is written interspersed with daily life and combat, which is my preferred style.

Finally a book that writes about beasts well＼(ω＼)SAN value! (／ω)／ピンチ!

It's very good. For example, the negative effects are all written. In some novels, it is possible not to write about negative effects, but to integrate various things into one novel. The emotions and actions are all written very well. The more you listen to it, the more interesting it becomes.

Since reading this book, I haven't read any other books, just waiting for updates. The plot is very interesting and mixed with many Internet memes, which I find very interesting. There are also some popular science sentences, which I think are also valuable for learning. The most important thing is the three little special cutes. Seeing them become a love triangle, my smile is relieved.

It's so great. It makes me so happy to see it.

I finished reading it in one day, so cool! Su Yi, my Su Yi [cry][cry][cry] Su Yi: Xia Yu is my belief, Xia Yu is my answer! 😫 No! ... Xia Yu is different... Only Xia Yu is different——! 😡 Xia Yu... Is different from anyone else. 😌 Because Xia Yu's name... Sounds very nice. Just thinking about it makes me feel safe. That's the most holy melody in the world... I don't want to omit it. 🤗 Xia Yu is the true god of the beast realm. He chose this world, ignited the fire buried deep in the ground, and the desolate planet had a dancing heart. 🥰 He guards life and civilization. He loves us with all his heart, and truly rejoices in all that He protects. 🥵 He is the most beautiful god in the vast universe. Time can never wither Him. You must remember His existence with me and never forget His name. 😄 Xia Yu is the true god of the beast realm. He engraved truth and humility into the soul, so the ignorant life awakened from chaos, and the sound of blessings resounded in the world. 😍 He protects the past and tolerates hesitation. He loves us with all his heart, protects the right path of life with noble sacrifices, and gives you and me His greatest promise. 😘 He is the gentlest god in the vast universe. The world rewards Him with eternal prosperity. You must remember His existence with me and never forget His name. 😫 Flowers and leaves are luxuriant, creatures are crowded, and the land under our feet is endlessly alive - Xia Yu, this is the treasure you want to protect, this is the gift you left for me. You said that our footprints are all over the beast's land. When I continue to set foot on this road, I will see you again when I see the lush flowers and trees, the clouds in the sky, and those smiling faces filled with happiness. 😫 Yes, there is your shadow everywhere here, of course I can see it. But what I long for has never been these...☹️ I want Xia Yu, who shares the same scenery with me in the vast sea of stars and has been with me day and night for a long time; I want to go back to every day that I can touch and truly spend with you. 😢 Xia Yu... If I said at that time, please don't leave me, would you be willing to stay for me? 😭 "Xia Yu is the best"

Because I'm a Free Controller, I think this looks good.

Very nice, lots of R-rated jokes [smile][smile][smile]

The plot is quite interesting, keep it up!