[Eva] [Slow-burning article] [Early stage is more daily] [Single female protagonist] [Sunliu·Asuka·Langlei] [Neon Genesis Evangelion] [No system] [Starting with a pair of kaleidoscopes]
Shinji, who returned from the world of Naruto, is no longer the trembling boy huddled in the insertion plug. The fire of Uchiha's karma is burning in the depths of his pupils.
A huge glowing giant stands in the sky above New Tokyo City 3
"How could he have such terrifying power!" "Shinji Ikari, what on earth have you done!" "How can we fight against the apostles without EVA!"
"It's very simple. I just take action."
Shinji wiped away the bloody tears from the corners of his eyes: "This is the third power, Susanoo."
From the undead awakening on the bench in the scorching sun to the reversers of the third impact——
This time, he didn't run away anymore.
Reader comments
As we all know, EVA is a show with religious elements in its combat, and the characters are also very good-looking. The shortcoming is that the male protagonist is too cowardly.
This book is a dream come true and the main character is perfect. During the years of war, Naruto became tough, decisive and mature. The author is also very skillful and agrees with some of the concepts very much. For example, the protagonist's answer to the train problem (if you can't give up anything, you can't change anything) doesn't have the indecisiveness of a teenager, the tenacity and the readiness to face the consequences. But he is a bit mature among his peers, and has suffered psychological trauma from the years of war and the destruction of his own race (Uchiha). The author is overly good and can be regarded as redeeming each other when getting along with his partners.
In terms of story lines, there are a lot of story lines related to the protagonist of the plot. (In my opinion, it's okay). Maybe you like reading cool stories or you can't stand fighting. I suggest you give it a try. There are provocations from classmates, Asuka's irritable arrogance and other life twists and turns, but the protagonist is very mature, takes action when it's time, and is tolerant and tolerant. Under the charm of the protagonist, they resolve each other one by one and become friends with each other, resolving each other's psychological problems and gradually getting better. The protagonist also regains the sensibility and impulse of young people in the process, which can be regarded as mutual redemption. It was quite relaxing to read this book without any pain in the head. There was no shouting, killing, or killing people over a disagreement, and there was no unreasonable trouble. There is a reason. For example, the classmate's provocation was because the protagonist's fight affected the classmate's sister, who was hospitalized as a result. Asuka's arrogance and irritability stem from her childhood experiences. The author is very good at overdoing it, so I can accept it and tolerate it.
The description of the battle is also very good. The protagonist is so ruthless that he doesn't hesitate to cut off his hand to protect himself. The three concepts and views are correct.
I think it's okay. Those who gave low ratings are probably the kind of brainless cool people who have figured it out after reading too much. The protagonist is just an ordinary kaleidoscope, not the eternal kaleidoscope. Moreover, he is not Obito, nor Uchiha Madara, nor the reincarnation of Indra. He is just a person who went from the modern world view to the fire. An ordinary kaleidoscope is awakened in the shadow world, and the kaleidoscope has not been fully developed, so there is a slight difference in strength and the ninjutsu cannot be released because there is no chakra. This is very understandable for the kind of mindless gatekeeper who has seen too much. It is best not to watch this kind of thing because you can't understand it.
Those who read too many mindless cool articles and can't understand this kind of fan fiction with delicate writing style. If you have the guts, just write one yourself. Write it yourself. It makes you feel happy. You read it and rate it without thinking. It's just those Susana Susana ones who read it over and over again😅🖕
Anyway, the author should ignore people like this and just write carefully. If you can see this comment, I will be very happy😁👍🏻
Personally speaking, it's quite good. I've also read Neon Genesis Evangelion. Although I read it quickly and didn't read it in detail, I generally think the author wrote it well. In fact, I feel that no matter how good the writing is, the intention is definitely the most important. The male protagonist who came back from the world of Naruto is unexpectedly reliable, unlike the coward in the original work. A rare Tomato article about Neon Genesis Evangelion. Personal feelings. I think the proportion of the author is good, but the details of the work need to be polished. There are some undetailed places. I can write it in as much detail as possible, so that I can say that I have only watched Naruto. If you have not watched this, click in and take a look. Naruto's combat power is a bit low. You can adjust it appropriately. The emotion of the eyes is very important. It is best to express the emotion better, so that the eyes can be written better later.
The recommendation index is 4 stars, but I usually give five stars when giving reviews, and rarely give poor scores, so I give it five stars. By the way, if you lack business relations, remember to ask me to practice recommending books recently.
The writing is good, the characters are well portrayed in the later stages, and they all fit the personality, without any OOC.
There is no reason to force other characters to show off for the male protagonist. The protagonist's cheats are also very interesting, but they are vague.
Even if there are a few poisonous points in the early stage, the flaws will not be concealed in the later stage.
This book ranks highly among all EVA fandoms. I wonder who in this world can really understand Solu Asuka? The author has his own understanding.
It's quite satisfactory, but it's much better than those Martian novels. The only drawback is that the ability to add a Hokage is not as good as not adding it. It feels useless and the effect is not reflected much. Don't think that when I mention this plug-in, I will say that I have read too many cool novels. . . Everyone came in because of this title, so I can give it a 4 points now because it doesn't have a bad look and feel without using a plug-in, otherwise it wouldn't even have a 4 point rating.
Did I come to see you play love games?
Eyes will turn red when using abilities. I know, this is the performer of Mekakushi City (confirmed)
Help Xiangxiang Lili, everyone can do anything
It's very good. Even people like me who have only read part of the original work and haven't completely followed it can still understand it. As long as Naruto and Eva have read part of it, they can fully understand it. And the writing style is not bad compared to other Tomato novels. There is really a lot of hydrology in Tomato. This one is already considered a masterpiece 😋😋😋😋😋
No, author, you don't look like it😨. I suddenly found out that you had updated. I thought I was dazzled.
It looks good, I like EVA, this is the best EVA fanfic I have ever seen
It looks good, I won't say much more about this aspect.
I just want to say that what I like to watch the most is the passionate battle where the protagonist drives EVA, and then the little ambiguities and screen-full warmth in daily life.
Last but not least, I am Li Dang
... The soul returns...
𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌
The soul returns... Drives the long whip and sets up the six bridles...
𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫
The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back...
𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠
The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory...
𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥
The soul is back... The soul is back...
𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋
This is the first time I read Eva's article. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch.
Although it is very interesting to watch, so far the author has only created a Shinji who is more combat-effective than the original work, and the other plots have not changed.
Very nice, cheers author
Very abstract setting
Where is the author? Don't die, it's hard to find someone who is interested. There are not many people who write EVA.
Alas, I pushed several posts on Shuhuang Square, I hope they are useful.
Blessed are those who like both Naruto and Eva
Book title adjustment
The text is very authentic
Don't be a eunuch
It's very beautiful. At least compared to most new Tomato writers, the characters are delicately carved and the plot logic is reasonable.
Come on, author, I really want to see how the author looks at the finished book he wrote in the future.
Shinji is calm, rational and not lacking in humaneness [Like] [Like] But my favorite is Asuka in this book
Rare. Although the combination of Naruto and EVA is a bit rare and abrupt, it feels very EVA. The score is low. I hope to continue to work hard.
The dragon flavor is mixed with EVA, and the jokes that pop up from time to time make people smile. All in all, worth a look
Author, please stop being cool, Susanata Unit-00 has not been written yet [crying]
Although the title is relatively abstract, the content is surprisingly good
The author is really talented. In fact, I have imagined the scene of Susan and Maki beating the apostles with Senju for a long time (funny)
Author, the May Day holiday is over, please update quickly, they can do anything [almost crying]
The title of the book is abstract, but the content is very good. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch.
The emotional details, plot logic, and plot direction in the book are handled very well. Although the author is a newbie, the EVA fan fiction written is very good. It is just that two more chapters will be needed during the new book's release period [Learned]
The two worlds have very different styles and are very difficult to sew together. Please give me five stars for encouragement.
As we all know, EVA is a show with religious elements in its combat, and the characters are also very good-looking. The shortcoming is that the male protagonist is too cowardly. This book is a dream come true and the main character is perfect. During the years of war, Naruto became tough, decisive and mature. The author is also very skillful and agrees with some of the concepts very much. For example, the protagonist's answer to the train problem (if you can't give up anything, you can't change anything) doesn't have the indecisiveness of a teenager, the tenacity and the readiness to face the consequences. But he is a bit mature among his peers, and has suffered psychological trauma from the years of war and the destruction of his own race (Uchiha). The author is overly good and can be regarded as redeeming each other when getting along with his partners. In terms of story lines, there are a lot of story lines related to the protagonist of the plot. (In my opinion, it's okay). Maybe you like reading cool stories or you can't stand fighting. I suggest you give it a try. There are provocations from classmates, Asuka's irritable arrogance and other life twists and turns, but the protagonist is very mature, takes action when it's time, and is tolerant and tolerant. Under the charm of the protagonist, they resolve each other one by one and become friends with each other, resolving each other's psychological problems and gradually getting better. The protagonist also regains the sensibility and impulse of young people in the process, which can be regarded as mutual redemption. It was quite relaxing to read this book without any pain in the head. There was no shouting, killing, or killing people over a disagreement, and there was no unreasonable trouble. There is a reason. For example, the classmate's provocation was because the protagonist's fight affected the classmate's sister, who was hospitalized as a result. Asuka's arrogance and irritability stem from her childhood experiences. The author is very good at overdoing it, so I can accept it and tolerate it. The description of the battle is also very good. The protagonist is so ruthless that he doesn't hesitate to cut off his hand to protect himself. The three concepts and views are correct.
I think it's okay. Those who gave low ratings are probably the kind of brainless cool people who have figured it out after reading too much. The protagonist is just an ordinary kaleidoscope, not the eternal kaleidoscope. Moreover, he is not Obito, nor Uchiha Madara, nor the reincarnation of Indra. He is just a person who went from the modern world view to the fire. An ordinary kaleidoscope is awakened in the shadow world, and the kaleidoscope has not been fully developed, so there is a slight difference in strength and the ninjutsu cannot be released because there is no chakra. This is very understandable for the kind of mindless gatekeeper who has seen too much. It is best not to watch this kind of thing because you can't understand it. Those who read too many mindless cool articles and can't understand this kind of fan fiction with delicate writing style. If you have the guts, just write one yourself. Write it yourself. It makes you feel happy. You read it and rate it without thinking. It's just those Susana Susana ones who read it over and over again😅🖕 Anyway, the author should ignore people like this and just write carefully. If you can see this comment, I will be very happy😁👍🏻
Personally speaking, it's quite good. I've also read Neon Genesis Evangelion. Although I read it quickly and didn't read it in detail, I generally think the author wrote it well. In fact, I feel that no matter how good the writing is, the intention is definitely the most important. The male protagonist who came back from the world of Naruto is unexpectedly reliable, unlike the coward in the original work. A rare Tomato article about Neon Genesis Evangelion. Personal feelings. I think the proportion of the author is good, but the details of the work need to be polished. There are some undetailed places. I can write it in as much detail as possible, so that I can say that I have only watched Naruto. If you have not watched this, click in and take a look. Naruto's combat power is a bit low. You can adjust it appropriately. The emotion of the eyes is very important. It is best to express the emotion better, so that the eyes can be written better later. The recommendation index is 4 stars, but I usually give five stars when giving reviews, and rarely give poor scores, so I give it five stars. By the way, if you lack business relations, remember to ask me to practice recommending books recently.
The writing is good, the characters are well portrayed in the later stages, and they all fit the personality, without any OOC. There is no reason to force other characters to show off for the male protagonist. The protagonist's cheats are also very interesting, but they are vague. Even if there are a few poisonous points in the early stage, the flaws will not be concealed in the later stage. This book ranks highly among all EVA fandoms. I wonder who in this world can really understand Solu Asuka? The author has his own understanding.
It's quite satisfactory, but it's much better than those Martian novels. The only drawback is that the ability to add a Hokage is not as good as not adding it. It feels useless and the effect is not reflected much. Don't think that when I mention this plug-in, I will say that I have read too many cool novels. . . Everyone came in because of this title, so I can give it a 4 points now because it doesn't have a bad look and feel without using a plug-in, otherwise it wouldn't even have a 4 point rating.
Did I come to see you play love games?
Eyes will turn red when using abilities. I know, this is the performer of Mekakushi City (confirmed)
Help Xiangxiang Lili, everyone can do anything
It's very good. Even people like me who have only read part of the original work and haven't completely followed it can still understand it. As long as Naruto and Eva have read part of it, they can fully understand it. And the writing style is not bad compared to other Tomato novels. There is really a lot of hydrology in Tomato. This one is already considered a masterpiece 😋😋😋😋😋 No, author, you don't look like it😨. I suddenly found out that you had updated. I thought I was dazzled.
It looks good, I like EVA, this is the best EVA fanfic I have ever seen It looks good, I won't say much more about this aspect. I just want to say that what I like to watch the most is the passionate battle where the protagonist drives EVA, and then the little ambiguities and screen-full warmth in daily life. Last but not least, I am Li Dang
... The soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Drives the long whip and sets up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋
This is the first time I read Eva's article. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch.
Although it is very interesting to watch, so far the author has only created a Shinji who is more combat-effective than the original work, and the other plots have not changed.
Very nice, cheers author
Very abstract setting
Where is the author? Don't die, it's hard to find someone who is interested. There are not many people who write EVA.
Alas, I pushed several posts on Shuhuang Square, I hope they are useful.
Blessed are those who like both Naruto and Eva
Book title adjustment The text is very authentic Don't be a eunuch
It's very beautiful. At least compared to most new Tomato writers, the characters are delicately carved and the plot logic is reasonable. Come on, author, I really want to see how the author looks at the finished book he wrote in the future.
Shinji is calm, rational and not lacking in humaneness [Like] [Like] But my favorite is Asuka in this book
Rare. Although the combination of Naruto and EVA is a bit rare and abrupt, it feels very EVA. The score is low. I hope to continue to work hard.
The dragon flavor is mixed with EVA, and the jokes that pop up from time to time make people smile. All in all, worth a look
Author, please stop being cool, Susanata Unit-00 has not been written yet [crying]
Although the title is relatively abstract, the content is surprisingly good
The author is really talented. In fact, I have imagined the scene of Susan and Maki beating the apostles with Senju for a long time (funny)
Author, the May Day holiday is over, please update quickly, they can do anything [almost crying]
The title of the book is abstract, but the content is very good. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch.
The emotional details, plot logic, and plot direction in the book are handled very well. Although the author is a newbie, the EVA fan fiction written is very good. It is just that two more chapters will be needed during the new book's release period [Learned]
The two worlds have very different styles and are very difficult to sew together. Please give me five stars for encouragement.