Crossing Hong Kong Means Becoming the First Family

The pacing is pretty good and the entry point is good. Write your daily books slowly, and you will have to work hard in the middle and late stages. There are too few now. Also, if the emotional scenes are not well written, they should be arranged later. I looked at the early stage and saw that the author should be more immature when writing emotional scenes. Some people who have traveled through time have to be more open-minded. I am not asking you to be wild, but I don't know how to be too rigid. Although you are small, you can't write the thoughts of people who have traveled through time to be immature, otherwise you will look like aboriginals. The overall value is four points and five points for encouragement.

The choice of entry point is very good, especially the sports special enrollment. You can go directly to the best university, learn how to become a champion in the stock market, accumulate wealth and improve your social status. This kind of layout should be able to produce high-quality products. I am looking forward to it. Every step of improvement has a good foundation. This is close to the rhythm of life. It is indeed tomato food. In this impetuous modern era, it is like a ray of clear spring, which makes you feel hearty after reading it. It's just that we have already begun to make plans to harvest the Japanese stock index. Don't be so anxious to finish the book. No matter what, we have to get the position of deputy chief for the protagonist, and it seems that there is a little less son.

The author is full of sincerity, every chapter is a big chapter, and I haven't seen the licking attribute yet. If another tomato protagonist had won a medal, he would have scolded the cook while eating.

How can I put it, listening to this book is like a glass of mellow wine refreshing the mind. The most difficult thing is the clear logic. At first glance, it is a straightforward narrative, but upon closer inspection, it contains the great principles of life. Life is simple to the extreme, and being able to describe simplicity in a wonderful way is a skill. The author is good. Of course, this book also has shortcomings, that is, all the characters are original, which will give many people a headache and make them retreat. The author please persist. You can refer to Cao Xueqin's experience. Good things are not afraid of not being read by readers.

The protagonist's grandmother has a very good education method, allowing the children to practice martial arts from an early age: study medicine, do housework, cook, and study. A great education. Grandma's family is also very united

This is the first time I read a novel like this where the main character is an athlete.

It's quite good to watch. It doesn't focus too much on the plots and intrigues, and the protagonist doesn't evolve a lot all at once. The author is also making progress. Come on.

There are new ideas, very good

Not bad, very logical thinking

More interesting book

Overall very well written! Come on!

Come on come on come on come on

It's okay, but it's not as smooth as Shuangwen's.

The current content is very good, the character design is reasonable, and the writing is smooth.

Very beautiful, clear logic, good writing

Highly recommended It's written very sincerely, with a plan and a pattern. How come the rating is so low?

Scv is handsome and batch of people lose weight because their password is wrong.

At present, it is a very good Hong Kong novel. It is about a boss who obtains social status through sports and then achieves a career. Unfortunately, it was too short and it was deleted. What a pity.

Awesome, awesome, come on

Beautiful, so beautiful

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It feels good in the early stage

A very nice novel

An alternative way of writing about the sports department, very nice! The rating is too low!

Reasonable, logical, uneducated, single female protagonist, but not too pretentious to emphasize cleanliness and frequent sexual intercourse, she just made a simple and firm choice.