Survival in the Divine Sea: None of My Magic Works Right

There is currently a cycle of seven days, and every time there is a disaster, like teaming up to break through the level, the advantage is this, the subject matter is novel, and the Cthulhu style is pure. It is a good work that I like in the national time travel article. It contains content about national navigation and island construction. The above are the advantages of this book😎 Next, let's say but. However, 1 word with too many words and too few words does not make sense, and I don't think this is a way to show that sanity is on the verge of madness. I can understand the stems and sentences, but the missing words and many words have nothing to do with the stems and it still makes me uncomfortable. It's okay once in a while😄😄 (full-time writers please take your work seriously) 2 In my opinion~my perspective and senses! (Don't make trouble, I know I'm in the minority, I'm just telling you my opinion. This is a book review, not a praise for the paradise) Isn't the protagonist playing with fire and not peeing on the bed? I hope that the protagonist will jump out of fire and turn to other magics (fire magic and fire elements are easy to write but are a bit cliche. I read a lot of magic and fantasy novels where the protagonists play with fire, and some of them vomit. If I can write brilliantly while sitting, then just think of me as farting). The current spider magic is very good; but I am greedy and want to see flesh and blood magic, starry sky magic, fantasy magic and other messy things. 3. (Update and update items) The author has a lot of information in each article and relatively little progress in the main line. It is recommended to write more close-ups and capital letters! I have a question to ask, is there a female protagonist? No heroine? Single heroine? Or a harem?

The first few pictures at the beginning are relatively good, but I don't like the Japanese ones very much. But I still finished reading them because of the affirmation of the author. I hope that the rest will get better and better 👍 👍 👍 It's just my personal opinion, please don't comment.

It is novel and quite different from other universal stories. The overall rhythm is very fast. It saves some of the characteristics of Cthulhu in terms of capabilities and settings, but also reduces the distortion and desperate depression of Cthulhu. The content is different from the traditional slap-in-the-face, Gou Dao, and Invincible stories. It has a relatively in-depth strength growth, but there is no clear division of realms (there is no harm in it so far). The world setting is not too harsh, and the story is pretty good.

I quite like it. There is one thing. Although this kind of writing style cannot be said to be very popular here in Hongguo, it is not to this extent? Is it because some reckless hero gave a thumbs up, or is it because the good officials don't like it? [What][What][What]

The writing is quite good, not too toxic for the time being.

So far it looks pretty good and attractive.

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

It's good to read. Please rate my books more.

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Looks good, pretty good