The Scholar Who Was Deprived of His Fame Is the Best in the World

In fact, the structure can be given five stars, and the writing is not bad~ It's just that the author is slightly inexperienced, and there are a few bad design points. The ideas are clear and layered, or it may be absolutely awkward for readers with obsessive-compulsive disorder~~ The article is a little aggrieved, but from the perspective of the protagonist, it is actually reasonable!

Leave a review. I usually comment before I finish reading, either to urge for updates or to complain. To complain is to give up. Highlights 1. 80% Of readers who have a system like to read it, not to mention that this is martial arts + immortality + system 2. In fact, I have good writing skills and good structural design. It is not impossible to establish realm first and then develop skills. It is not impossible to enter the Tao through martial arts, enter the worldly officialdom, and start with family members. After all, it is necessary for the family to cultivate immortality, and it is very likely to cultivate immortality in the secular world. 3. Occasionally intersperse witty humor (there are flaws here, I will talk about them later) 4.……(Unexpected, others will add) Disadvantage 1. Interspersed humor is sometimes not humorous and short-circuited. The emotional foreshadowing was in place, but it suddenly jumped out, which was very jarring. Excellent works allow readers to immerse themselves in the situation and feel and experience it in the first person, rather than being able to shuttle between different emotional worlds at will. 2. Most readers who give low scores will feel frustrated and give up, and I am no exception. The squatting in the early stage is to stand up better later, but if you have to surrender to the ground, it will only make people despair. Because you didn't let people see the light! At least I have seen the third floor of the foundation building. There are still patches of darkness in front of me. I have not yet seen a few words about "light". The only thing I can feel is the silence of the middle-aged man in the first two or three pictures. Silence, silence, silence again, and then what? It's not bad if it can mobilize readers to read the explanation, but it's just that if it can't make readers continue to explain. Online novels have been developed for 25+ years, and there has always been no shortage of excellent novels. Only those who can grasp the details and see them from the reader's perspective can produce excellent novels. Good works need to be carefully crafted, and people will follow them even if they are updated every day. Come on [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript]

I didn't pay attention to the latest chapter. I saw that the score was only 6.9. It's exactly the same as the "Gangs Not Allowed" plot. Haha, the background setting of this chapter is first-rate, the writing is smooth, and the plot is often unexpected and reasonable. It has depth, which is great.

The characters are full-bodied and the plot is natural. The early plot is relatively depressing. The hardship and helplessness of the people at the bottom and the current social situation are clearly explained. The foreshadowing is very good. I hope it can be written better and better in the future. After getting over the initial depression, I became more and more excited as I wrote, so my rating is a bit low! Now I am fighting against injustice alone. I hope I can transform into a leader in the future.

The more you go to the back, the more exciting it becomes, but you can't imagine how it will develop later, and the world is too dark, from the cabinet to the bottom soldiers. The protagonist, Justice, has few teammates, and it is difficult to move forward~

I actually wanted to complain a lot, so I thought about it and let it go. I can't help but complain. It's the latest chapter now. It has some points but no points. It's obvious that it can be invincible, but it has to suppress its strength. It was the same before. I suspect that there will be 20 chapters for Jindan's promotion to Yuanying, maybe 30, maybe 50.

The author uses vivid writing to describe a decadent, dark and absurd world. The protagonist is not the perfect protagonist in some books. He has some shortcomings, but it is these shortcomings that make him seem flesh and blood, making him more relevant to ordinary people like us. What is different from ordinary people is that the protagonist has a little power and can settle grudges and punish evil and promote good. This is exactly in line with some of the occasional fantasies of us ordinary people. It is really "full of nonsense and a handful of bitter tears." As long as readers can understand it, they will find that this is a good book!

It is a rare good book on Tomato. The normal rating should be above 9.4. The author must persist.

Well, it is a vivid description of the darkness of a world completely controlled by aristocratic families and dominated by emperors. Everyone here is responsible for ending such an excellent work early. After all, the whole book is only 7.1 Points [Thinking]

The beginning of this book is exciting and fascinating. Chapter 200 or so opened up my imagination and made me laugh! It's logical, imaginative, plot-y, exciting, and engaging. I stayed up all night to read it. I haven't read a novel like this in many years!

It can be said to be a masterpiece of fairy tales. It is compassionate and has a chivalrous spirit. It is not the kind of novel that just knows how to be happy without a name.

From what I've read so far, I can only say it's a good book. It's very interesting. It's not the same old book. I don't understand why the score is so low. There are definitely flaws, but the plot is novel and not cliche, so it deserves 5 stars.

Good book recommendation, really good, worthy of praise

It's been many years since I've encountered a book like this that I can read with patience. Personally, I feel that the writing is very strong, the atmosphere is created superbly, and the emotional changes are delicate. Please come on, the author, and bring a more exciting experience to book lovers [Like]

If there weren't so many scenes involving women, I could give it five stars. At least there aren't so many inappropriate and mindless language routines that are disgusting, such as cold, deep, beautiful, silent, etc. The length of the article is also good, and I don't want to speculate on the map. The score of 7.1 Is too low. It is better than many writings with scores above 9.

This book is seriously underrated and has depth, so keep up the good work from the author!

Reasonable and well-founded, the plot has ups and downs, grievances and hatreds, and the details are very well grasped.

The plot is compact and not procrastinating, making it a rare masterpiece! Super pretty. I kept watching it for several days and why did it end? What is the scoring system of Tomato now? It's only 7 points, 9.5 Points is only objective.

Let's start with five points of motivation, and then let's talk about the poison: 1. In fact, you can leave the county during the foundation building period. 2. There are so many big things going on, but the family members are not transferred. That's all for now, keep up the good work

It's a very good book. I can't say it's poisonous until I read it. The author writes about the society in the late Ming and Qing Dynasties. How many rulers really regarded the common people as human beings?

The writing is very good (✪▽✪) very beautiful! Chasing books!

It's very interesting, but I think the protagonist is too timid and wastes a lot of justice. But despite all the flaws, it's super pretty.

There is a refreshing plot and realistic writing that makes people feel more at home. If you don't realize it, either you are too naive or you have not been severely beaten by society.

Definitely an underrated book. The characterizations are vivid and vivid, the plot twists and turns are logical, the writing is capable and not watery, it's a lot of fun, it's a good book

It looks good, but we still need justice in this world.

I am unemployed at the age of 43, but unfortunately I am not as skilled as I am.

This novel is very good, I don't know why it is rated so low

I think it's good, but there are too many gold coins in this small place.

The writing is very interesting, I recommend it.

The beginning is gradual and interesting, and the follow-up is compact and the ending is not lonely [note]