The Scholar Stripped of His Official Rank Is the Best in the World

In fact, the structure can be given five stars, and the writing is not bad~ It's just that the author is slightly inexperienced, and there are a few bad design points. The ideas are clear and layered, or it may be absolutely awkward for readers with obsessive-compulsive disorder~~ The article is a little aggrieved, but from the perspective of the protagonist, it is actually reasonable!

Leave a review. I usually comment before I finish reading, either to urge for updates or to complain. To complain is to give up. Highlights 1. 80% Of readers who have a system like to read it, not to mention that this is martial arts + immortality + system 2. In fact, I have good writing skills and good structural design. It is not impossible to establish realm first and then develop skills. It is not impossible to enter the Tao through martial arts, enter the worldly officialdom, and start with family members. After all, it is necessary for the family to cultivate immortality, and it is very likely to cultivate immortality in the secular world. 3. Occasionally intersperse witty humor (there are flaws here, I will talk about them later) 4.…(Unexpected, others will add) Disadvantage 1. Interspersed humor is sometimes not humorous and short-circuited. The emotional foreshadowing was in place, but it suddenly jumped out, which was very jarring. Excellent works allow readers to immerse themselves in the situation and feel and experience it in the first person, rather than being able to shuttle between different emotional worlds at will. 2. Most readers who give low scores will feel frustrated and give up, and I am no exception. The squatting in the early stage is to stand up better later, but if you have to surrender to the ground, it will only make people despair. Because you didn't let people see the light! At least I have seen the third floor of the foundation building. There are still patches of darkness in front of me. I have not yet seen a few words about "light". The only thing I can feel is the silence of the middle-aged man in the first two or three pictures. Silence, silence, silence again, and then what? It's not bad if it can mobilize readers to read the explanation, but it's just that if it can't make readers continue to explain. Online novels have been developed for 25+ years, and there has always been no shortage of excellent novels. Only those who can grasp the details and see them from the reader's perspective can produce excellent novels. Good works need to be carefully crafted, and people will follow them even if they are updated every day. Come on [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript]

I didn't pay attention to the latest chapter. I saw that the score was only 6.9. It's exactly the same as the "Gangs Not Allowed" plot. Haha, the background setting of this chapter is first-rate, the writing is smooth, and the plot is often unexpected and reasonable. It has depth, which is great.

The characters are full-bodied and the plot is natural. The early plot is relatively depressing. The hardship and helplessness of the people at the bottom and the current social situation are clearly explained. The foreshadowing is very good. I hope it can be written better and better in the future. After getting over the initial depression, I became more and more excited as I wrote, so my rating is a bit low! Now I am fighting against injustice alone. I hope I can transform into a leader in the future.

The more you go to the back, the more exciting it becomes, but you can't imagine how it will develop later, and the world is too dark, from the cabinet to the bottom soldiers. The protagonist, Justice, has few teammates, and it is difficult to move forward~

The author uses vivid writing to describe a decadent, dark and absurd world. The protagonist is not the perfect protagonist in some books. He has some shortcomings, but it is these shortcomings that make him seem flesh and blood, making him more relevant to ordinary people like us. What is different from ordinary people is that the protagonist has a little power and can settle grudges and punish evil and promote good. This is exactly in line with some of the occasional fantasies of us ordinary people. It is really "full of nonsense and a handful of bitter tears." As long as readers can understand it, they will find that this is a good book!

I actually wanted to complain a lot, so I thought about it and let it go. I can't help but complain. It's the latest chapter now. It has some points but no points. It's obvious that it can be invincible, but it has to suppress its strength. It was the same before. I suspect that there will be 20 chapters for Jindan's promotion to Yuanying, maybe 30, maybe 50.

Well, it is a vivid description of the darkness of a world completely controlled by aristocratic families and dominated by emperors. Everyone here is responsible for ending such an excellent work early. After all, the whole book is only 7.1 Points 🤔

The beginning of this book is exciting and fascinating. Chapter 200 or so opened up my imagination and made me laugh! It's logical, imaginative, plot-y, exciting, and engaging. I stayed up all night to read it. I haven't read a novel like this in many years!

It is a rare good book on Tomato. The normal rating should be above 9.4. The author must persist.