Honkai Impact, Quan Scared Me at the Beginning

Yes, many people say that the male protagonist is too ordinary, but in my opinion, the ordinaryness of the male protagonist is the shining point of this book. Some cool stories are so cool that people can't relate to them. After all, are there so many great people in reality?

Let me start with the conclusion: There are currently more than 50 of them. As long as they are not under supervision, the future is promising and they can be regarded as a source of food. Let's put aside some typos. The protagonist's early image as a slightly fat ordinary person is easy to dissuade. Really, he is an ordinary person in both appearance and personality. But then I slowly got into my own rhythm and felt quite comfortable. But there are a few things to note. For example, the mysterious man sitting outside the window makes it look like the protagonist has been arranged, and there is also the issue of the origin of the protagonist's system. If these things are not done well, it is easy to forcefully insert a lot of original things into the already logically closed world view, which can easily cause discomfort to readers.

It feels like the protagonist is about to die. After returning from the outside, he seems to be reunited with everyone, but in fact he is already raising a child. Think about how pitiful the girls in this world are. Your Bai Yueguang has become a husband [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

It's so beautiful, come on, author! !

The writing and intensity are relatively tame, and the main character doesn't shine too much. Not a cool article.

Don't let yourself get involved completely, think more and ponder carefully. Some things cannot be rushed. I have dismantled many books before, and some of the biggest problems are flaws in thinking and logic. The protagonist's brain is not working, but work hard and write well. Don't be anxious. Being anxious will only make things worse.

I really like the invincible and adorable Ah Quan, the most powerful TM in the universe.

It's very beautiful and the author is quite active, so can I update it 6 times a day?

It's obviously pretty good, but I don't understand why no one is watching it. It feels very immersive. The current situation is that as long as the author does not randomly add villains, we can live a relaxed daily life. I hope the author will not mess with it. I hope the author will handle the suspected future protagonist carefully, otherwise it will become a poisonous point. (Actually, I hope there will be no time-traveling jokes. Some regrets can be revived.) Remember what you wrote before. Those who can persist in reading are those who like to read and are used to this style. , Don't suddenly change the style, especially the one with too much contrast. For example, what you wrote before was about relaxed daily life, and then the protagonist directly turned into a person who has gone through ups and downs and suffered all kinds of pain just to save everything. This kind of contrast is absolutely not necessary (I said so much mainly because I was stressed by the person who is suspected of being the future protagonist). When will the normal update resume or when the protagonist returns to the original world, come back and read it. This book will be put on the bookshelf first (update me soon)

A five-star review

It's so pretty, don't let it go.

The first few chapters were a bit boring, but the rest is pretty good.

I remember there was a cat like you. Did the author over there come here?

New book, pretty good [like]

Good writing, cheers author

It might be a bit uncomfortable to watch in the early stage, but it's okay in the later stage. The only question is if the author can stop updating [I'm about to cry]

It's good-looking. It's considered good-looking among the new Honkai Impact films.

Good looking, good luck to the author

Ordinary, not bad, not bad

Very real and beautiful Very interesting, my favorite among all the fanfics (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)

Well, okay, good, okay

Watching, excellent, eye-opening

Very good, come on.

Give me a five-star support [laughs] I gave it to you every day for love. I hope this book will get better.

Alas, give it a five-star review.

Change the girl's he to the girl's character.

Yes, I feel uncomfortable if I don't watch it for a day.

Very good, I quite like watching it.

It's fun, I love playing, keep updating, I think it's quite fun [laughing]

The first few chapters are a bit confusing, but the later chapters are good and the writing is better.