My name is Su Gan. I just traveled through the world of One Punch Man and awakened the Dragon Talisman in Jackie Chan's Adventures at the beginning. I thought this was the end, but what the hell are you, a rock-summoning vest? There's also a tiger in the vest and a black hole in the vest. How come you two are also S-class? Who on earth changed the punch! ! ! (PS: The heroine of this book is a tornado, a group portrait + imagination + a fusion of various elements. Good luck if you like it~)
Reader comments
How should I put it? Personally, I think it is a relatively good one-punch fan novel. It retains the writing style of a group portrait novel, and there is also a part of the protagonist's plot, but the protagonist sees the girl unable to walk. According to this, it is a harem novel.
This book is normally a three-star level. I personally added one star to express my encouragement. First of all, you can see the improvement of the author's writing. The main shortcoming of this book is the pacing problem. The author always writes the original content in too detail. However, 30% of the content of this book is the complete original plot (only in the early and middle stages, and less in the later period after the protagonist stops eating beef), and it is basically the same as reading fan fiction. I understand the plot of the original work to a certain extent, and it can be seen that the author wants to give the protagonist a developmental period of mentality in the early stage. As for why the Devil Fruit of One Punch Man appears in the world of One Punch Man, I am waiting to fill it in later. As for the newly added S-class heroes and the unlicensed captain, I personally think it is good. After all, fan fiction must be innovative (I hope that the unlicensed captain will be given a Kamen Rider No. 1 Belt later)
Come on, author! It must be updated to the end, no eunuchs, no unfinished work!
Not bad, but I think Mosquito Girl would be good as the heroine [laughing evilly]
It's a very good book. The author has his own ideas and has a good grasp of the originality and the original work. Why doesn't anyone read it?
I hope the author will slow down a bit, update hundreds more chapters, and then put all the beautiful characters in the book into the protagonist's harem. The plot will definitely be exciting!
I hope that the update pace will be slowed down a lot, and then there will be hundreds of more chapters, so that the protagonist can include all the beautiful characters in the book into the harem, so that reading the novel will be more enjoyable! !
There are no surprises, and the plot is okay
This is the book I'm looking for. It would be perfect if I could take Saitama to the Dragon Ball world when I reach the gods.
Come on, don't be eunuchs. Can the author not give up on mosquito girls? [Crying] At least two of them [laughing evilly]
I hope not to be a eunuch
? What the hell, it looks like the hero in it has the abilities of the protagonist?
If you want to watch Tatsumaki, I suggest you start reading it from Chapter 160. She has basically no role in the previous chapters. If you don't read the previous chapters, the impact should not be too big [thoughts]
It's a very good book. The writing is a little bit poor, but it does have good ideas in writing many original plots. And the characters in the book also have different story developments. Worth a look
How should I put it? Personally, I think it is a relatively good one-punch fan novel. It retains the writing style of a group portrait novel, and there is also a part of the protagonist's plot, but the protagonist sees the girl unable to walk. According to this, it is a harem novel.
This book is normally a three-star level. I personally added one star to express my encouragement. First of all, you can see the improvement of the author's writing. The main shortcoming of this book is the pacing problem. The author always writes the original content in too detail. However, 30% of the content of this book is the complete original plot (only in the early and middle stages, and less in the later period after the protagonist stops eating beef), and it is basically the same as reading fan fiction. I understand the plot of the original work to a certain extent, and it can be seen that the author wants to give the protagonist a developmental period of mentality in the early stage. As for why the Devil Fruit of One Punch Man appears in the world of One Punch Man, I am waiting to fill it in later. As for the newly added S-class heroes and the unlicensed captain, I personally think it is good. After all, fan fiction must be innovative (I hope that the unlicensed captain will be given a Kamen Rider No. 1 Belt later)
Come on, author! It must be updated to the end, no eunuchs, no unfinished work!
Not bad, but I think Mosquito Girl would be good as the heroine [laughing evilly]
It's a very good book. The author has his own ideas and has a good grasp of the originality and the original work. Why doesn't anyone read it?
I hope the author will slow down a bit, update hundreds more chapters, and then put all the beautiful characters in the book into the protagonist's harem. The plot will definitely be exciting! I hope that the update pace will be slowed down a lot, and then there will be hundreds of more chapters, so that the protagonist can include all the beautiful characters in the book into the harem, so that reading the novel will be more enjoyable! !
There are no surprises, and the plot is okay
This is the book I'm looking for. It would be perfect if I could take Saitama to the Dragon Ball world when I reach the gods.
Come on, don't be eunuchs. Can the author not give up on mosquito girls? [Crying] At least two of them [laughing evilly]
I hope not to be a eunuch
? What the hell, it looks like the hero in it has the abilities of the protagonist?
If you want to watch Tatsumaki, I suggest you start reading it from Chapter 160. She has basically no role in the previous chapters. If you don't read the previous chapters, the impact should not be too big [thoughts]
It's a very good book. The writing is a little bit poor, but it does have good ideas in writing many original plots. And the characters in the book also have different story developments. Worth a look