Comprehensive Comics************

Come on, new author, to be honest, if you remove that cultivation, you will become a normal and gentle male protagonist. At least he will not be criticized, because it feels like you have been cultivating for more than 500 years just to give the male protagonist a reasonable blow. Come on!

Who are these at the beginning? I don't know any of them [face covering] Is this really a comprehensive comic?

Except for the main character who is dull in writing, the rest is pretty good. What world is the author planning to go to?

Yes, it's a straightforward story. Although the progress is slow, it still feels slow. It's good that there is progress all the time. It's quite interesting. I hope it can stabilize the rhythm.

Are the protagonists of the world gone?

It's very beautiful and not too poisonous. You can take a look at it [laughing evilly]

The author's writing style is very good, 🐮

Come on, come on, come on

It's dull and has nothing to do to pass the time.

The writing is good, the story line is good, the emotional drama is okay, and the depiction of immortality is refreshing. I think the author is very suitable for novels such as Immortal Rebellion or Mortals' Journey to Immortality.