Cultivation of Immortality: Immortality Begins with Orion

Later it was ok. There are also several Taoist cultivators who join a foundation-building family. There is a golden finger, which can increase lifespan, and there is also an alchemy skill, which the protagonist can develop on his own after building a foundation. The author has a small request: don't write about family streams and sects, because there are too many ties between families and sects. You can have Taoist monks. You can have fellow Taoists, friends, etc. I hope to write a novel about Gou Dao's evergreen casual cultivators, in which the protagonist builds the foundation, forms the elixir, Yuanying, and transforms into a god, even to a higher level.

The story is arranged compactly and reasonably. The narrative is smooth, My mind is not blocked and I can read it happily.

Not bad, but my cultivation is a bit slow. I don't know when I will be able to embark on the real path of cultivation.

People in the plot are highly emotional and easy to understand

It looks good and non-toxic so far, I hope it will look as good in the future

The storyline is reasonable and interesting.

A very good book

The writing is good, but if you update one chapter every few days and a half, I might as well forget about it. In order to ensure the lowest quality, fine novels will also update one chapter a day. The final rating was three stars. It was cut or for some reason. Chapter 230 was built, and Chapter 240 ended hastily.

In fact, the story is really good, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch at the end.

There are plug-ins and you still need all kinds of resources like ordinary people.

The author greatly come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

Very good. It is not easy to find a book that is not erratic. It has logic and new ideas and does not repeat the same routine. Like it, five stars⭐

There are occasional typos, maybe because the writing is good and the readers read it too carefully and deeply [laughing]

I checked the bar account and tested it.

VG history is expressed naturally.

Come on, come on, come on

Very good! Well written!

It's still okay in the early stage.

Not bad, suits my style!

Great book! Just a little too bland This is the simplified version of the story of a mortal cultivating immortality

A little flawed, but okay?

, A book worth reading

Super pretty, pretty, pretty

The plot is fascinating and very good

Is it a compound fertilizer? Thank you, teachers, they are all within their capabilities here.

The birth of the star in Woliheng in the lower realm...

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good

It can only be said that if there is no strength, the role of the protagonist Golden Finger is very small at present. It seems that it can steadily improve the strength, but it will also expose some potential threats.

I see that the writing is pretty good so far, I'll keep it up in the future!

Great book, keep up the good work and keep up the good work.