(The rating is low because it just came out)
[No black original protagonist + multiple female protagonists + no system + clothing + the author is in good mental state + aura recovery + cool writing + sinister + relaxed, plot direction]
Introduction: Zhu Fansheng is the second-generation villain in the urban sadist novel, and he can poach all the female protagonists as long as he follows the plot. Looking at the increasingly cruel plot, he felt pity.
What he didn't know was that as the 4251st Zhu Fansheng, he was about to face the number one heroine who could read the script.
The No. 3 Heroine who digs out her eyes and replaces them with divine pupils can see the true nature.
The fourth heroine who can travel through time lines.
The original protagonist clicked on the panel to reset the points and was clicking furiously.
"It's so fun to follow the plot." Zhu Fansheng said to everyone after he wrote the script for the next issue and distributed it.
Reader comments
How to say it? Before I came in, I thought it was a Y Bar classic. After I came in, I found out that it was a work by Heba. My rating is 😡
The male protagonist's design is really good, and it's this core gameplay. . . . (Considering that this is half of the world of high martial arts...
A bit interesting
Although the previous article is confusing, I can still understand the general meaning.
Traveling to a world, the heroine knows that the script itself is also very strong, and then she has to choose a yellow-haired male protagonist (protagonist) that she is satisfied with, and then the protagonist defeats everyone on her own and starts the plot.
But I want to ask, what is the original work?
No, I thought this was an ordinary story about a time-traveling heroine, but after watching it for a while, you told me that the heroine can crush thousands of homomorphic male protagonists with malicious intentions. Then I am very satisfied with the male protagonist who has the plot, but the male protagonist does not follow the R18 route and play R18G. Is this right? [Smile]
It's okay, I just think the front part is a bit confusing, but the back part is okay. After that, I think I'll describe the plot in detail except foreshadowing, so that the plot can be more coherent, and I can also point out the numbers. The pace doesn't have to be fast. I can only say that if I change it faster, I'll have to use all kinds of stomach-ache plots.
All in all, it's pretty good-looking, but I was a bit confused when I saw it from the front, but after looking back, I actually understood what I said in front of it.
Enjoy reading, love reading, come on, author
The author should work hard
The writing is okay, but I'm a bit curious about the original work? Let me appreciate the original work
The book is pretty good, I like the character of the main character better.
In the early stage, I was a little confused and could barely understand it. In the middle stage, the writing was much better. In the later stage, the timeline was wrapped up and I was happy to read it. I must praise it.
Is Heba calling? Xdm Do you have any similar recommendations?
Not bad, author, come on
It's interesting, the logic can be self-consistent
I like this book [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Is someone trying to score such a low score? The female characters are very attractive and have ample benefits.
An unavoidable logical problem. The male protagonist is very good, but would such a good male protagonist engage in forced love for his own survival? I feel like he might rather die
It's interesting to read the author's second novel and then give this one a five-star review, haha
Sanctioned by Shen He
It's good to read. Good luck to the author.
I'm a bit crazy, I just love this smell.
Epilepsy is not just ordinary epilepsy, it's Class 2. [Cover face][cover face][cover face]
It's okay, except that the battle is a bit simple and normal, the battle is not the focus
It's a very abstract book [face covering] It's really a bit strange to read, but I actually finished it.
It's so beautiful. I finished reading it in one sitting. There's nothing bad about it. It's pretty good.
The setting is novel, multiple heroines are matched with spiritual recovery, and the plot becomes more and more interesting as you watch it. It's fun to watch.
Good book, good book. The writing style and content of this book are both good. Five stars.
The writing style is smooth and natural, and the refreshing feeling of the villain's perspective and the special abilities of the heroines are very touching~
The rhythm of the plot is excellent, the heroine is discovered through the plot + the character is specially set, there are new surprises in every chapter, I like it
Heba gameplay, exciting [Like][Like][Like]
love to watch
The logic of the characters is very reasonable, not bad
How to say it? Before I came in, I thought it was a Y Bar classic. After I came in, I found out that it was a work by Heba. My rating is 😡
The male protagonist's design is really good, and it's this core gameplay. . . . (Considering that this is half of the world of high martial arts...
A bit interesting Although the previous article is confusing, I can still understand the general meaning. Traveling to a world, the heroine knows that the script itself is also very strong, and then she has to choose a yellow-haired male protagonist (protagonist) that she is satisfied with, and then the protagonist defeats everyone on her own and starts the plot. But I want to ask, what is the original work?
No, I thought this was an ordinary story about a time-traveling heroine, but after watching it for a while, you told me that the heroine can crush thousands of homomorphic male protagonists with malicious intentions. Then I am very satisfied with the male protagonist who has the plot, but the male protagonist does not follow the R18 route and play R18G. Is this right? [Smile]
It's okay, I just think the front part is a bit confusing, but the back part is okay. After that, I think I'll describe the plot in detail except foreshadowing, so that the plot can be more coherent, and I can also point out the numbers. The pace doesn't have to be fast. I can only say that if I change it faster, I'll have to use all kinds of stomach-ache plots. All in all, it's pretty good-looking, but I was a bit confused when I saw it from the front, but after looking back, I actually understood what I said in front of it.
Enjoy reading, love reading, come on, author
The author should work hard
The writing is okay, but I'm a bit curious about the original work? Let me appreciate the original work
The book is pretty good, I like the character of the main character better.
In the early stage, I was a little confused and could barely understand it. In the middle stage, the writing was much better. In the later stage, the timeline was wrapped up and I was happy to read it. I must praise it.
Is Heba calling? Xdm Do you have any similar recommendations?
Not bad, author, come on
It's interesting, the logic can be self-consistent
I like this book [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Is someone trying to score such a low score? The female characters are very attractive and have ample benefits. An unavoidable logical problem. The male protagonist is very good, but would such a good male protagonist engage in forced love for his own survival? I feel like he might rather die
It's interesting to read the author's second novel and then give this one a five-star review, haha
Sanctioned by Shen He
It's good to read. Good luck to the author.
I'm a bit crazy, I just love this smell.
Epilepsy is not just ordinary epilepsy, it's Class 2. [Cover face][cover face][cover face]
It's okay, except that the battle is a bit simple and normal, the battle is not the focus
It's a very abstract book [face covering] It's really a bit strange to read, but I actually finished it.
It's so beautiful. I finished reading it in one sitting. There's nothing bad about it. It's pretty good.
The setting is novel, multiple heroines are matched with spiritual recovery, and the plot becomes more and more interesting as you watch it. It's fun to watch.
Good book, good book. The writing style and content of this book are both good. Five stars.
The writing style is smooth and natural, and the refreshing feeling of the villain's perspective and the special abilities of the heroines are very touching~
The rhythm of the plot is excellent, the heroine is discovered through the plot + the character is specially set, there are new surprises in every chapter, I like it
Heba gameplay, exciting [Like][Like][Like] love to watch
The logic of the characters is very reasonable, not bad