After Sleeping with the Wrong Boss, What Should I Do If He Begs for Responsibility?

The overall story is very good, but there are too many descriptions of eyes in the first chapter. It can be seen that their eyes are very firm and reluctant. It gets better later and the plot is quite smooth. It just feels that the male protagonist is a bit old, 30, and the female protagonist is only 18, but the female protagonist is cultivating immortality. After staying in the world for a few years, there is not much difference. The heroine should be a lucky one. She was sent to the world of immortality by the heaven in the modern world. Will the brothers and sisters come to the modern world to find the heroine? I hope they can meet again, otherwise I will always feel that there is something wrong with it.

The beginning is novel and funny, the subject matter is okay, but some transitions feel a bit stiff. The author can work harder and strive to write better.

It's a subject I like, and the writing is okay. I hope I can continue to work hard and write better, and give it a five-star review. Come on! ! ! !

I like the subject matter, but there's nothing ridiculous about it yet. Please write it well and don't be ridiculous.

It's a pretty good book, keep up the good work

I read half of it, the subject matter is good, but I was put off by the numerical chapter titles after opening the table of contents. I personally don't like novels without chapter titles [face covering]