Travel Through the World of God-Killing and Become the Administrator of the Sap Foundation

Brother, let me tell you the problem The plot goes too fast. I'll tell you from the reader's point of view. There is no emotion and it's hard to imagine the interaction between them. This is just a running account. When I read six or seven God-Zhan novels, Training Camp, there were more than ten or twenty chapters. They described the relationship between the protagonists and the more detailed interactions. It made people think about their own values ​​and three views. The character becomes more three-dimensional. Click to introduce the character of the protagonist. You can look at other descriptions. The most important thing is that Zhao Kongcheng's description content is too little. Even if you can add a few pictures in front to describe the character of the protagonist, I feel that the protagonist in your novel has no soul. I hope the author can read other fan fiction. I hope the author can become a great writer

Beautiful, really very beautiful

I don't understand the power of SCP, and I stopped updating it. People say I feel uncomfortable watching it.