Machine! ****

As of the latest chapter 48, conclusion, is it a pretty good war article? It's said to be about mecha, but actually it doesn't have much to do with mecha? After all, the whole text only contains descriptions of the protagonist's ability to control mechas. In other words, even if you try to hide the world's armor and combine it, it is still possible. It is essentially a war story, but the protagonist is a king of war. There is no explanation as to why the protagonist is so awesome, but the new book may explain it step by step later. What is a bit difficult is that there is currently no problem of insufficient energy in the mecha [face covering]. In terms of the current strength and expressiveness of the mecha, the energy consumption cannot be simple The word "big" is used to describe it, and there are also issues with the material. Let's just say that the saber is a bit ridiculously awesome [face covering]. No matter what the reason is, such an awesome saber must need maintenance. It is even impossible to use it to cut so many mechas continuously and still maintain its original performance. However, the above are just settings that I personally think are a bit difficult to stretch, and they are not problems. The main reason is that there are often long discussions about values ​​​​in the text. This is a relatively big problem. The shaping of a character's thoughts should be subtle and reflected in small details, rather than a large number of narrations that often pop up. This will lead to a large dilution of the density of the plot, which is the so-called hydrology. Even writing about daily interactions is not hydrology [face covering]. There is also the setting of the female protagonist commander, but because the male protagonist is too awesome, her "necessity" cannot be highlighted at all. After all, it is just easier to have her, and it will not affect the male protagonist's completion of the mission, at least the current plot is like this [face covering] Generally speaking, if you are interested or bored, you can read it. Objectively speaking, this book is unlikely to be a big hit [face covering], and it does not conform to the mainstream tone of Tomato.

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