Another World: Beginning: Collecting Witch Wedding Photos

First of all, this is the first time I have written such a long book. No matter how it is written, I will give myself a 5-star encouragement. Then, I will talk about a few points that people complain about a lot. In fact, I really didn't think much about many details. I thought it was okay and I wrote it: 1. The most talked about thing is how the protagonist survived selling potions in the beginning. They all said that the sales were good and popular, so why didn't others come to kill the protagonist. Explanation: Because it was described in the article at the beginning, the protagonist traveled back in time for just one year, which meant that he lived a rough life selling potions for only a few months. Then the protagonist only sold potions once a month. The only merchant the protagonist cooperated with was Bart with a background. When businessmen without backgrounds go to other big cities to sell "Weige" potions, if they want a good result, they can only hide their identities and conduct auctions. If In the case of an auction, the auction house will be responsible for protecting the customer's privacy. If it takes a long time, it is indeed possible to find out the identity, but in fact the protagonist has not sold the medicine a few times at all. No matter how you check the identity, it will definitely take time. If you have unfavorable thoughts, you will also worry about whether the protagonist has a hidden background. When they already have vested interests, how many people will give up their interests and take huge risks to force the formula of the medicine? 2. In the initial town, the protagonist felt a little aggrieved to leave... He untied Yuexi's collar and looked like a saint without killing the residents. Explanation: The protagonist I think of is egoistic. On this basis, I only look at the other person's appearance (I helped Avila and Yue Xi at the beginning just to achieve system rewards and gain strength to better protect myself), but it is not completely dark. If others are good to him, he will be good to others (including the subsequent liking of Avila and Yue Xi because they both really want to help him). If others are provoked, they will be direct. The kind of counterattack (the premise is passable), I really didn't want to lean towards the Virgin, I just felt that the residents hated the witch because of their prejudices, but in fact they were just afraid and dared not accept it. You can't just kill everyone in the town just because they hate the witch and can't accept the witch. The protagonist here just completely distanced himself from the town. This is also an issue I wrote myself. My characterization skills are too poor, I'm sorry. 3. Gold coin design issues. I've tried my best to change this that can be changed, so forget about it. 4. Why does the protagonist let Ophelia watch the potion and distillation process directly? This is obviously the foundation of his career. The first is potions. What Ophelia is taught are the most basic potions. Even if they are copied, they are copied. The protagonist does not rely on this to make money. Then there is distillation. In fact, the protagonist only shows Ophelia after the favorability level has been calculated and reaches four stars. I roughly explained these issues. If you have any points that you think are worthy of improvement, you can tell me. I will reply as soon as I see it. Or, if there are any characters you want to guest-star, such as the adventure group, I am actually almost torn when I come up with the name. I will also consider how to change it based on everyone's opinions. Thank you again for your support, brothers.

It's a very nice book. The writing is fluent, a little green, but overall it's very organized, and the article doesn't make people feel uncomfortable reading. The plot is not procrastinating and is interspersed with some daily slapstick. Everyone in it is well-shaped, with distinct personalities, and everyone has an IQ. It's not like some articles where a few villains suddenly pop up to give experience packs to the protagonist, and then beat the small ones to the big ones. Fine

No brother, this book has a lot of promise, why did I give up? It is a super cool harem novel, with a novel setting, reasonable ability acquisition, and a lot of interactions with the heroine. It is quite good. I hope you can stick to it. I think it will definitely bring the dead back to life [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's pretty cool, but can't you find a place to develop on your own? You get along well with foreigners, strengthen the bond and contact, and it is not impossible to become a king. There are medicines, wine, and you can make money. You are blessed with nature, but you live a life of salted fish.

It's great and I love to read it quickly. If the author's level is not good enough, I hope that more different pictures of the heroines can be shown at the end of each chapter. Anyway, the AI ​​is not troublesome and can also increase the reading experience.

It's okay, the only drawback is that the number of words is so small [smile]

It looks great, why is the rating so low?

A book that is very satisfying to my appetite, more daily stories of witches sprinkling sweets, Onaigai, Watasi...

So what is the difference between a witch and a magician?

Nice, very comfortable rhythm.

A rare alternative world novel

Yes, four stars are worth it

Not bad, the content is well paced.

It's okay, but I discovered it too early. The number of words is small.

It's good to watch. Keep up the good work, author.

It's good-looking, very good-looking, quick to start, the relationship develops smoothly and not abruptly, and the process is very interesting. If you can write 800 chapters, it's another masterpiece [Love][Love]

A decent adventure group of hot-blooded archangels, it's a good watch for those who are suitable [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

Looks like a good meal

It's pretty good, come on

Come on, author, don't be a pigeon.

Personally I think it's pretty good

Hope to continue watching in the future

So far so good

I don't want new authors to be like those who came from next door and strive for 2 million or at least 1 million. Don't tell me that the author is short and weak and can't even get 1 million.

Overall, I think it's pretty good, with almost no poisonous points (personal opinion).

Full score, full score, must be full score, hold the car steady [stare][stare][stare]

It feels pretty good to look at it when fishing

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful. Come on, the author [blows a kiss], I hope you can make more.

It looks good, readers who have spent thousands of hours here will definitely

It looks good, I love watching it, give it more, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this [laughing evilly]