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I finished reading the first volume in one day, and overall I felt that it was a long-running story with relatively few conflicts and not many eye-catching plots. Friends like me who like to watch daily episodes will like it more [laughs] (the structure is a bit like "The Burial of Florian"?). I can feel the delicate emotional connection between different characters shown by the author, but the plot setting may be a little lengthy? (I think this may be why a 1 million-word novel has only so many ratings.) Will there be any improvement in the second volume? I'll comment after I get back from reading [Blow a kiss]

In fact, overall it is very good❤, and it is very suitable for this book to set controls for daily writing. . . . The design inside is what a traditional Western fantasy should have, but it has advantages and disadvantages. The heroine seems very dull. Although the introduction says that the heroine is very strong in social aspects, she may not want to care about it at all. 🤞But I think it's better for her to be more omniscient. Of course, this may be the author's setting, so this is my personal suggestion. Besides, the plot is not poisonous, but people with weak acceptance ability may not be able to accept why the heroine pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. This is actually a bit contradictory. Although she does not want to be famous, there is basically no one who can be qualified for such a professor position. Suddenly, a person comes and is a being similar to a natural elf. Won't others doubt it? You can explain it as the authority of the dean, or you can say that you are looking for talents. But I don't doubt it at all, it's still too strange, and I always feel that the people in this courtyard are like humans and machines. People with such strong strength have no desire to explore at all. These are my views Let me summarize the advantages. The author's character description is very detailed, and the description of personality is very novel. I can think of the character's background and story line, and the setting of magic is also very innovative. These are the most outstanding advantages of this book. Of course, there are other advantages, and I may not have mentioned the writing style. . . I'll give it 4 stars in the end and see if there is any improvement in the future [Petrochemical]

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The settings are quite detailed, but this is still a Japanese-style Western fantasy, with seeds of immortality and too many elements. According to orthodox Western fantasy, there should be only five types, namely fire, earth, water, wind, and above that, the spiritual element of the Philosopher's Stone, which is called spiritual power, or life force. According to orthodox Western fantasy, attributes like light should belong to the power of God, and this power is similar to the prayer system. I don't want to say too much. In short, the setting of this book has a mixture of ancient Chinese Western fantasy and Japanese Western fantasy.

The light novel is full of flavor. I like many of the settings in the book, such as the heroine's amnesia, curse, and the seven demon generals. I am full of expectations for the plot at the end of the book. I also ask the author to continue to work hard and look forward to the completion of the 1 million words of this book!

I found that I haven't read much, so I can't comment on the content yet. My personal impressions can be put in the same category as "Sophie's World" from the Department of Philosophy. 1: Unconsciously slow down my reading speed. Even though it is not profound, I read every word line by line and understand every sentence. Compared with the other novel I read that day, which is also 300 pages, the time is nearly three times longer. 2: To help you fall asleep at night, it is not a sleep-destroying thing like going to class, but it can soothe your inner irritability like a trickle of water flowing through it (for example, if you are a senior in high school and have to go back to school this afternoon for classes and other things that can't calm you down). In the light tranquility, you can naturally relax and feel sleepy in the gentle breeze. Three: The heartbeat slows down and the mood is peaceful. You can read it quietly when you pick it up. There is no ups and downs in your mood. You will not abandon the book in sudden irritation or sudden curiosity about the next chapter or ending. You can put it down quietly without any worries. I just discovered this book tonight. Within an hour or two, I gave up the usual urge to stay up late as a revenge before taking a vacation. I think I will finish this book, but the progress will be extremely slow. I hope the author will work hard and update it! Good night good night

I haven't watched it for a while, and I haven't rated it yet. I even spelled my name wrong. Won't the author beat me to death? (Hey, can we reconcile?) This book is really good, I like the slow narration of Western fantasy stories [Chigua]

Generally speaking, it is a little green, but it has been written in detail. It is great, great. I have read a lot of novels and have always wanted to find this type of subject matter, but basically it is either a character or a so-called female brat. I hope the author writes better and better, and I will also silently support you.

I read this book before using another account and it was very good. But there really weren't many people. When I read it for the first time, if I remember correctly, it was 500,000 words, and there was no rating yet… The magic system is very complete and has given me a lot of inspiration. I also embarked on the path of Western Fantasy, but... The quality is not as good as this one, but the data is similar to this one... I wonder if the author can communicate with me?

Don't be fooled by the ratings. This is the best Western fantasy book I've ever read on Tomato. It has no silly jokes, is clearly organized, has no inexplicable sensational plot, the protagonist is also quite interesting, and the world view is huge.

You can feel the author's seriousness. Whether it is the setting of the world view, especially magic, or the characterization of the characters, you can see that the author really put his heart into it.

This is the first time I have seen such a novel setting. The writing style is also very good. The plot development is reasonable and interesting. The only shortcoming is that it is not enough to watch. The author will update his words quickly.

I read it a long time ago, and recently read The Burial of Fulian. I thought of this book and went to the bookshelf to look for it.

It looks good, the setting is good, I hope it has some emotional lines, but there are really few people seeing it, and the comments are not lively

What's the rating?

The rating has gotten so low. The rating has gotten so low. I recognize the author's perseverance. 🙃

Come on, code, and complete this different world.

Although the protagonist is always in a state of residual health, it is enough

It's a no-brainer, there's no bloody plot, and it's very comfortable to watch.

Personally speaking, the plot of this book is quite unique, the details are OK, and the protagonist's emotions are relatively delicate. Overall, this book is good.

Love to watch, love to watch, like this kind of fantasy and beautiful magical world It's so awesome to watch. I can't stop watching it. It's just that there are so few people watching [Blow kiss]

Well, it's a very interesting book.

Tomato Western Fantasy Boutique!

It looks good, the commander-in-chief writes it very well [laughs evilly] [like]

Five points, no need to say more

There's one thing to say, it's really good

Looking forward to the next plot

A place of elegance

It's okay, just be more regular

Although, I really like this book