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Why can the protagonist with telekinesis + perfect intelligence still lie down to ordinary people? He can see the fine lines of insects, but can't he see the mite pores, cosmetic residues, etc. On people's faces? It's like a bunch of bugs 🐛 lying down with the protagonist [face covering]

To judge objectively, the protagonist's character is similar to that of the Great Love Immortal, who does whatever it takes to achieve his goals, but not as extreme as the Immortal. Then the early content is similar to Immortal Lord, with more dark psychology, which is not suitable for people with a quick temper or a virgin personality. The content in the middle and later stages is a bit like Dr. Chen, who uses science to study the power system of martial arts and immortals, but it is not as exaggerated as Dr. Chen, and is a low-end version of Dr. Chen. Then there is the question of whether there is a female protagonist. At present, there is no female protagonist, but it is not the kind that is not close to women. I'll give it a five-star overall rating, because I've written about some of my favorite points.

The previous one is really good, but when it comes to martial arts, it just doesn't work. Maybe it's because I've seen too many martial arts themes, or maybe it's just too pretentious and boring. I suggest the author write more urban fantasy time travel in the future. Courageous and resourceful

Update… When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

It's very interesting. I hope that in the next world, I will choose Yang Shen. The scriptures of the past, present, and future will create the master of the future. I will use faith as firewood to calculate the variables of the future of the world and choose the path that best suits me. Will God Demon Martial Arts tempers the will with thousands of laws, uses the martial arts soul to will, control, assimilate thousands of laws, rewrite the rules, go against the will of heaven, and have the possibility of transcendence. In the Yuanshen Immortal Way, Hongjun is the ancestor. It is the way of obeying the sky. It is easy to improve, but one cannot transcend except Hongjun. The way of faith was originally created by humanity for the human race, but its power was stolen by Hongjun Tiandao and turned into a list of gods, completely cutting off the future. The way of the Chaos Demon God is to practice one law alone, one law can suppress ten thousand laws, and one law can defeat all laws. The main character representatives are Pangu and Yangmei Ancestor.

It just depends on what you do for profit, and the subject matter is not bad, but you spend a little too long in each world.

The book is good, but I don't know why no one reads it. Maybe it's because the updates are unstable and not pushed.

Don't, don't, don't come over,

The protagonist is quite smart online. He showed a good IQ in the early world and made the protagonist fool around. But later on, it suddenly stopped being written. It's a pity that this is a book with great potential.

It's pretty good so far. It's good if you don't take anyone with you. One world, one cause and effect.

Very nice, my type. If it were me, I would go first. The super power is out of control, never-ending, and the telekinesis feels invincible in the early and mid-term.

When I write about martial arts, I feel like I'm being staged.

This is gone, not enough to watch [laughs]

Very good unlimited streaming

The only world I don't want to see. Because there are many authors writing on topics like this one, but there is nothing novel about the worlds that have come and gone, so I won't make any comments.

It meets my expectations for the quick travel story in the world. At least for now, the top development route will not take off as much as going to Superman Metropolis to get Superman's abilities.

It's a rare piece of traditional astronomy. Golden Finger is not a system. The protagonist is willing to use his brain, which is very good.

Not bad, let's see what happens next [smile]

Awesome, very awesome. The author is very good at writing stories. Didn't skip a word. I just listened to the end. I was very excited and just heard the key moment. It's gone. I'm so depressed. Author, can you update a few more chapters? It is also recommended for everyone to read. The score is obviously low. According to the author's writing style, it should start at least 93 points.

Not bad, not bad, tastes great 😎

It's my type

Come on, it looks great

Very nice unlimited streaming

I've read Chapter 8, I hope it will be the same in the following chapters

Information is key, that's what I mean.

If the universe is an illusion, you and I will both be called brilliant - Zhang Haochen

The bitterness will be gone and the sweetness will come. The bitterness will be gone and the sweetness will come. We must go all out for everything, including happiness.

Author, you let go and the photos are beautiful.

The flaws don't cover up the virtues, the feeling of refreshment is still there, it's just. . . . . .

It's very well written. Good luck to the author.