She Came from Yin Ruins

The early stage seems to be pretty well written, the foreshadowing of life experience is very graphic, and the trajectory of the war is also innovative. But in the official plot later At present, the plot with Confucius and his entourage does not have a very clear main line feeling. It is a bit of a problem-solving and shopping atmosphere. It is in contrast to the chilling and tense atmosphere at the beginning. I originally thought that such a fierce resistance at the beginning would bring about a big change in the protagonist, but it seems that the author is more willing to foreshadow the story later in the story. This is also a method, but the tone of the previous story is much less. I hope the author can compress the course of events and focus on the main events. Try to show the protagonist's growth path or major events in the world to promote the story. The writing is good, and some settings are logical, but more attention should be paid to details and the specific plot. [Like][Like]

The text seems to build a huge world view for us, making me feel like I have really returned to the Battle of Makino and seen the Emperor of Humanity. Although the author does not have much content now, it can be seen that the writing style is very good, and many descriptions of the environment can be directly used in examination compositions.

There is nothing wrong at the moment

I feel the writing is very good, interesting and not stiff [blowing kiss]

Put aside the history for a moment and just read the novel itself. It is indeed very interesting.

Up will update it again, it's really interesting, but the writing about Confucius traveling around the world is too lengthy, but the subject matter is really good [crying]

Good writing Xu's method

It's very interesting. The author must keep updating [crying][crying][crying]

It's so well written. It's so beautiful.

It looks good, but the logic is a bit confusing. Overall, it feels good. To be honest, the label is not clear at present, so there are not many people. It is recommended to add a label. It seems to be 100 at the moment. Anyway, just don't change your marriage.