[No CP+Sand Sculpture+Cultivation]
In order to treat his sister's illness, Lu Nan went up the mountain with others to collect medicine. After being pushed off a cliff by his companion, he was even more unlucky to meet an evil cultivator.
After that, Karma embarked on the road of cultivating immortality...
"Sir, have you practiced seriously today?"
"No, he is reading the latest version of "If you fail me, you will die!"
"Did Senior Brother break through to becoming a god today?"
"No, he was having trouble with Fourth Junior Sister and her backup Taoist companion at close range."
Reader comments
As a book reader for more than 20 years, let me comment. The writing style is fresh, the story is unconventional, the plot is interesting, and the characters are vividly drawn. Oh, in short, it was easy to read, I liked it very much, and I am willing to follow it. Recommend. Update soon~
It's very beautiful. I don't know why I marked it as finished.
After reading the first few chapters, I thought it would be a long story.
Author, don't be anxious, you can take your time, after all, slow work pays off, the early writing is still very good, but in the later stage, it is a bit rushed, the plot is too hasty, resulting in insufficiently fleshed out characters, and the description is a bit stiff, but overall, the flaws are not concealed, the author, come on!
To be honest, the further back I go, the more melancholy I feel.
The plot is short and the framework is good
Maybe it's because I read too many books, so I didn't have any big mood swings. I can guess the routines in many places, so it's okay as a short story for entertainment.
It's okay, I hope it will be the same later
I hope to see a follow-up, but I don't want to! After all, no matter how prosperous the sect is, it will also..., Which is good!
It's okay for a novice author, there's nothing wrong with it, the only issue is whether the protagonist author is male or female.
Oke Oke, I just listened to the first few chapters, and I feel that it is very smooth and a novel worth reading [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]
It's worth watching, it's funny but also sad, and the writing is smooth.
It's quite good-looking, the logic is ok, and the writing is smooth. It feels like a male protagonist written by a female author. It feels very comfortable to read😊
As a book reader for more than 20 years, let me comment. The writing style is fresh, the story is unconventional, the plot is interesting, and the characters are vividly drawn. Oh, in short, it was easy to read, I liked it very much, and I am willing to follow it. Recommend. Update soon~
It's very beautiful. I don't know why I marked it as finished. After reading the first few chapters, I thought it would be a long story.
Author, don't be anxious, you can take your time, after all, slow work pays off, the early writing is still very good, but in the later stage, it is a bit rushed, the plot is too hasty, resulting in insufficiently fleshed out characters, and the description is a bit stiff, but overall, the flaws are not concealed, the author, come on!
To be honest, the further back I go, the more melancholy I feel.
The plot is short and the framework is good Maybe it's because I read too many books, so I didn't have any big mood swings. I can guess the routines in many places, so it's okay as a short story for entertainment.
It's okay, I hope it will be the same later
I hope to see a follow-up, but I don't want to! After all, no matter how prosperous the sect is, it will also..., Which is good!
It's okay for a novice author, there's nothing wrong with it, the only issue is whether the protagonist author is male or female.
Oke Oke, I just listened to the first few chapters, and I feel that it is very smooth and a novel worth reading [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]
It's worth watching, it's funny but also sad, and the writing is smooth.
It's quite good-looking, the logic is ok, and the writing is smooth. It feels like a male protagonist written by a female author. It feels very comfortable to read😊
So far, it is a novel masterpiece!
Good book, unique plot, what a pity