Online Games: Transform into a Flowing Firefly and Become the White Moonlight of the Entire Network

It's well written and makes me feel like watching The Super Mechanic It doesn't work well later on. The plot is heavily watered down, which somewhat affects the viewing experience.

The role of Beng Tie, the self-created combat system, and the mask as the trump card. It blends the three together very well. It is an excellent fanfic, especially for Knight Chef, and it seems that there is a lot to write about, so I am looking forward to it. The most important thing is that the first knight unlocked is my favorite ace in Knight W, and then my favorite form, Fang! I feel so good about his baby! I feel that the author can add some allotropes... No, the setting of isotropes, like Mu Xinghan's book, feels more exciting and can also satisfy other cooks. Of course, it depends on what the author thinks. PS: Brother Xiao Ming and Xing Bao will definitely make guest appearances, right? Please author!

I have to say that this book is absolutely excellent on Tomato. There is absolutely nothing wrong with the character of the protagonist. If I really want to say that I felt uncomfortable reading it, it is just that the protagonist compares his current equipment with the equipment he saw in his previous life from time to time. It is a bit frequent and feels a bit uncomfortable. There are also rewards sometimes, and it is a bit slow to open one or two. Others are fine. I feel like this book should be rated around 9. Why does it only start with 7? Well, to be honest, I have kept a few hundred of them, and today I saw about 100 and almost 200 of them, and the overall feeling is that, well, to be honest, I feel that the writing is not as good as before. Probably starting from the second copy, I feel that the water injection is particularly serious. I'm not talking about those panels or the repeatedly emphasized bonuses, but the overall description of the plot. It feels like a running account, and when the second dungeon is about to end, there is a feeling. When the dungeon is released and the legendary bosses are defending the city, the feeling is more obvious. It is forced to be sensational. , On the contrary, it makes me a little embarrassed, and I feel that the content is not right now. When I first saw the combination of Ryuu Hotaru and Kamen Rider, I actually thought this combination was quite good. However, after more than 100 pictures, and almost 200 pictures, Kamen Rider is still a bit tired. After all, I am attracted to the character Ryuu Hotaru. For those who have been here, Kamen Rider is somewhat off topic, and while reading the comments, I suddenly saw that the author added a star-making clone in the first chapter. When the heroine and Liuying formed a CP, I felt a little uncomfortable. Although I originally read this book as a non-CP novel, I actually have no objection to the CP, but Even if you randomly pick a woman in this world who has a relationship with the protagonist, I don't think there is any problem. Suddenly, a star appears. The author originally set the protagonist not to be the original Liu Ying. At this time, the CP of these two people is also very abrupt. Alas, and to sum up, whether it is an online game or the character Liu Ying, the author has not grasped the theme. The third evaluation comes after reading the fourth volume. It is uncomfortable, extremely uncomfortable, and physically uncomfortable. I heard them say that I had no idea before. It was not until the star actually appeared that I realized how difficult the author's writing was. I thought it was somewhat touching. Love line, co-authors really only have feelings based on their identities. Because Xing is a star, even if Liu Ying is not the original version, she still has an unusually high degree of affection for her when she first sees her (if she is taken away, let's just say it). It feels like she appears just to take advantage of her. Light, and then let Liu Ying fall in love with her, and I still had hope, so what I said was quite tactful. I thought the author asked Liu Ying to form a cocoon in order to make Sam's mecha appear. Then the author told me that he formed a cocoon just like a cocoon. The ability has been improved, but she still uses Kamen Rider. Even though Liuying is already Queen Grammo, she still uses Kamen Rider. Combined with the previous scenes where the old devil and Wang Xiaoming appeared, and the current appearance of Xing, I really wonder if the author wrote it where he thought? Alas, now I can only take back all the good comments I made the first time. Now there are even problems with the character. I fell in love with Xing for no reason and felt like I was being controlled. Now I want to come again. It's strange, why does it still have a rating of 9.1? I feel like 30 is the most difficult book to break among all the books I have read with a score of 9 or above.

It looks good, and there is no big problem. As for the water, I don't have any feelings about it. Isn't it something that is more suitable for the character and setting? You can emphasize it a little, it is free anyway, and it would be better to change the "average value of normal men" to "the evaluation value of normal players". It can be done without writing, so that there will not be too much tearing when reading the book.

Overall, it's okay. It's still very good. When I first saw this book, I thought it would be very embarrassing, so I chose to avoid it. However, after seeing this book on the recommendation list several times in a row, I also read it a little bit yesterday. I didn't expect that I couldn't stop. From 11 o'clock last night to now, in less than 24 hours, I have finished reading this book. What I personally feel is not good is the appearance of Xing. Although the author said it was foreshadowed, I still think Xing's appearance to save the scene is a bit abrupt and feels a bit disconnected.

The Fourth Calamity is a masterpiece. It is one of the best books I have read after reading The Super Mechanic. I felt that the first dungeon was a bit long, and then the subsequent plot developed a bit too fast, and the player's sense of presence was a bit low. Don't end it so quickly

It's a good book, but I think the most interesting part of this kind of book is to pick up the players' wool. At present, I feel that the plot is a bit too slow. I don't know when players will enter the game, and there is nothing else. The main reason is that the previous copy is too long, and that copy has nothing to do with the main story. It is just to increase the strength and make a copy that is too long, which is a bit slow, especially for readers who are following the update. (If the identity of the later copy is useful, it is foreshadowing, but I didn't tell you, I hope you won't be caught by the Space-Time Police) All in all, this is a good time-travel game article. I look forward to how it will benefit players in the future.

They all came for Liu Ying, but the transformation was full mask, and there were no lines. The armor will probably have to wait for a long time. I was disappointed that the new core did not break out of the ground. Players, there were too few interactive scenes, and the dungeon took too long. If you like this type of book, please give me a consolation point. Forget it, let's give it five stars. Who told me I'm a good person?

I read it all in one go. It's very interesting. The author has written about Liu Ying's strength and softness, and there is no conflict or OOC. The exciting parts are very exciting, and the characters in it are also very good. After reading this, I feel that I don't want to read other books. The author will continue to work hard.

It's an excellent subject matter, and the protagonist is Liu Ying, whom I like.

There are relatively good stories about Ryūhotari and Kamen Rider. I can watch Hontetsu alone and Kamen Rider alone. I haven't read both of them. I can also read them as NPC stories. Here are some suggestions. 1. There are hydrological issues in the first few panels. Although it is not subjective to the author, it will undoubtedly dissuade some readers from writing negative reviews here within thirty minutes. 2. As a book with Ryuu Hotaru in the title, many people came here because watching Ryuu Hotaru ignited their hearts. However, the content of the first hundred chapters did not contain many Bentetsu elements. Many people were dissuaded and suggested that the book title should be changed, such as "Transforming into Ryuuho, but as a Kamen Rider", "As a Kamen Rider, it is normal for me to be Ryuuho", "Hengtetsu: I can only transform into a Kamen Rider and I became the favorite of the players" and so on. 3. Many people write bad reviews because of anentropy syndrome. You can put out the lower bracket (when full, there will be a special transformation) (the protagonist will not suppress the combat power) when the anentropy syndrome appears for the first time. 4. The content of the copy is too long. Readers are not here to read League of Legends. Besides, there is a conflict between Mijia and League of Legends. Why write such controversial copy content? It is easy to attract blackmail. Some book reviews say that the content of the copy can only be 30 copies at most and it is not unlimited. I think it is right. A long copy may make readers lose patience with the book. As a pioneer, the copy of Kamen Rider League of Legends did not appeal to me, so I skipped it. My suggestion is that books can be used to write some movies. Resident Evil, The Wandering Earth, Pacific Rim, and Three-Body Problem, but this style of writing veers toward infinite science fiction, so it's better to write less! I wish this book will get better and better [laughing] I also hope the author is in good health and will read more [blowing kisses]( ﹡ˆoˆ﹡ ) It's just five stars. Help the author to increase the reviews. 9.1 Is still a bit low. It should be at the level of 9.4 [Blow kiss]

This is a very good fanfic. I personally feel it is very good. It uses Liu Ying as the template, the Kamen Rider transformer as the main combat power, the special combat system and the world view of the online game. It is a very good novel.

What a divine book! This is a masterpiece that has never been seen before in the world. It is a wonderful chapter that is hard to find in literature! Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin's writing power, indebted to Lao Zhuang Xuanzhe, Li Du Huazhang, Sansu's heroic spirit, Jiaxuan's tragic spirit and spirit, far chasing the majesty of Qin Emperor and Han Dynasty, the great strategy of Tang Zong and Song Zu, Genghis Khan His divine power, bypasses Sakyamuni's Zen mind, Plato's philosophy, Copernicus' insights, Aristotle's wisdom, all the sages, sages, great writers, emperors, sages, and sages throughout the ages. When you open the scroll and read it, everyone will be dumbfounded, shocked, prostrated, and worship! The beauty of his words, the exquisiteness of his composition, the majestic charm, and the far-reaching artistic conception, inherit the austere character of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, enhance the graceful charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties, integrate the majestic atmosphere of the Han and Tang Dynasties, and combine the skillful writing skills of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. Every word is like thunder piercing the ears, every sentence is like a rainbow penetrating the sky, and the strokes of the pen can shake mountains. The mountain can move rivers, lead to the underworld, reach the sky, penetrate the wood with three-dimensional force and penetrate the back of the paper, and describe all the phenomena of the common people, describe the prehistoric times of the universe, the cycle of creation, and describe the vicissitudes of eternity. To be able to see the true face of this work in this life is really a blessing accumulated in three lives and a hundred generations of good fortune! However, I cover the scrolls with regret, and shed tears of sadness. The sadness cannot be cut off from it: it is like reaching the sage, surpassing the past and present, shaking the heaven and earth and weeping ghosts and gods. It is difficult to see this masterpiece in the world in the years to come, and it is difficult to find it and encounter it again. Even if you enjoy glory and wealth, and read all over the world, this life is boring, leaving only empty regrets, and your heart has nothing to rely on and no soul to send! Fortunately! When I was in a hurry, I made an immediate decision, treasured it and hid it on the bookshelves, worshiped it like a guide, and respected it like a god. Only then did my restless spirit finally calm down, and my turbulent and unstable heart finally calmed down. What a pity, what a hatred, what a sigh of pain! Just as the essence of the sun and moon is nurtured in this land, literary stars come to the world, and divine craftsmen weep their blood to create rare treasures, sacred jade in the literary world, and treasures of literature and art. If for a long time the pearls have been dusted in the secular world, and the jade is hidden in the abyss, the brilliance is not revealed, and the reputation is not known, so that all the people in the world will not be able to see it. Book friends are not allowed to see its elegance, appreciate its essence, appreciate its true flavor, and realize its great truth. Wouldn't it be a waste of natural resources, a blasphemy of sacred texts, a waste of rare treasures, and a waste of the author's painstaking efforts, burning ointment to follow the sundial, pouring out his liver and guts, and weeping with blood? Between the Fangcun Lingtai, in the depths of my soul, I have gone through countless struggles and tangles, battles between heaven and man, and my mind has been shaken. I finally made a decisive decision, and I was cruel and cruel. I gave up my small self, which is like a fly and a dog, and became a big self that can be enjoyed by friends all over the world. I put aside my selfishness, abandoned my selfish thoughts, and abandoned my selfish desires. I gave this heartfelt comment to the world, and dedicated it to the world, spread it throughout the world, and spread it throughout Kyushu! People who share the same path, people who share the same hobbies, and people who know the sound of the music, like the likes of Ai Wen, look up to them again and again, reaching to the top of the clouds, the top of the sky, beyond the stars, and in the grand mist, causing the nine heavens to shake, the sun and the moon to shine for it, the color of the universe to change, and to be passed down through the ages! Looking up at the sky and the stars as evidence, overlooking the earth and the five mountains as evidence, looking at the ancient and modern times as a guide: This book is refreshing, soul-stirring, soul-stirring, thrilling and thrilling? Galloping through the eight wasteland rivers and lakes is the evidence, crossing the four seas and rivers is the evidence, and the Nine Heavens Immortal Tower standing tall is the sound: this book is so satisfying It is so vivid that my mind is so moved that my heart is so fascinated that I can't stop. Even though there are thousands of chapters and thousands of words and thoughts, there is still a regret that lingers in my heart and lingers endlessly. One chapter is not enough, one hundred chapters is not enough, not enough, ten thousand Chapters are not enough! One qi is not enough, hundreds of qi are not enough, dry qi is not enough, ten thousand qi are not enough! Pleasure is not enough, heartiness is not enough, majesty is not enough, mystery is not enough, ups and downs are not enough, magnificence is not enough, depth is not enough, magic is not enough, enlightenment is not enough, enjoyment is not enough! Everything is empty, everything is empty, I only seek one update, I only hope for quick updates, I only hope for crazy updates, I only pray for continuous updates When you look at this place, read this sentence, feel this emotion, and are moved by this idea, why don't you all raise your arms and shout wildly, with the same voice that resounds throughout the heaven and earth, and reaches the sky? Now that the divine book has been published, who can compete with it? Now that the divine pen has been written, it will be immortalized forever! Update it quickly! To comfort the common people! Seeing this, I didn't rush to update it, I was as hasty as the law!

"Three points of introduction without reading" I really wanted to slap me. What I am very interested in in this book is: the subsequent plot development (^∇^*). The reason is that the subsequent plot attracts me greatly. I like this kind of person. If the early development is boring and the subsequent plot cannot be seen, then there is a high probability that I will not read it. (Of course, the content also plays a part) I haven't felt this way for a long time. I couldn't sleep while lying in bed thinking about the follow-up development [smile] Of course, everyone has different tastes. I hope this book can be updated stably (￣￣) Hahahahahaha, who knows that you should read this novel before going to bed, and you should also read this novel when you wake up in the morning [smile] (distorted crawling) (crawling and discovering that it is gone)

This book is very good, but the author would say that the plot is a bit long in some places. The author avoids most of the poisonous points that I may think of when reading, or reminds me in advance so that I can be mentally prepared. I like this very much.

I can only say that those who like the original world view, like Firefly, and watch Kamen Rider are in luck.

Personally, what I want to see more is the interaction with the players. I think most people should be like this. A dungeon just to enhance strength. I feel that it doesn't actually need to be that long. I have read so many 2.0 Versions and there is still no one. I want to wait for 2.0 To see the interaction, but I am afraid that I will miss some plots and the reading experience will be worse. Overall, the writing is actually good. Also, I feel like there are a lot of descriptions of some skills. I feel like half of a chapter is usually devoted to describing skills.

Beautiful, love watching. The first copy gave me an Earth Defense Force feel. Just like this tone.

This article is amazing. [Adoration] Where is God? [What] Behind the original, of course. [Laughing] Then it's all over the floor! [Laughing awkwardly] Where is the pull? [Exploration] Of course it is the front of the Three Kingdoms Killing. [Making faces] Have fun. [You taste carefully] Oh, hurry up. [Smile] Dian [make a face] collapsed [full] Ma [staring] All in all, all in all. If there is no update, then I can only give Three Kingdoms a good review [please update] Yes! [Sending Hearts]

When will Sam Mecha appear? Looking forward to it [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's okay, but the plot is a bit slow. I personally think it can be summed up in one go, and the author can write a few scenes, but after reading it, you will find that it is okay, and you can watch it as a super god mecha master. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

It's very interesting. Among the many novels of the same type that I have read, this book undoubtedly has a place in my heart [laughs][laughs][laughs] The powerful, not-brainless Liu Ying, and the interesting background design are all very popular, but I think it will travel through the world. The integration of that element is the biggest highlight of this book. After all, you never know which world will be next. When the time comes, I will give you a dream linkage and you can tell me whether you are excited or not. ! ! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It feels like it was written based on the template of "Super Mechanic", but it looks very good and I like it very much.

Super God Mechanic, Infinite Flow, and Flowing Firefly Among similar articles, he is considered very capable [laughter] [Like][Like][Like]

I feel like the stars that appeared later were a bit abrupt, maybe because I didn't see the foreshadowing ahead. But overall it's still very exciting [like]

I've read Volume 6 so far, and overall it's a pretty good time-travel game article. It seemed that I quite enjoyed reading it in the early stages, but after the author stopped updating, I felt that it was a bit inferior to what he had written before when he came back to continue writing. There are not many poisonous points in this article, but I personally feel that some parts are a bit too watery. For example, in the Magic Martial Arts Conference part of Volume 5, Maple Falling Leaves is repeatedly emphasized as the number one, which is really a bit tiring to listen to. I personally feel that the author's emotional descriptions are not good enough and feel a bit stiff. Maybe the author is trying this aspect. There are also some large copies that are a bit long and take up many chapters, but the content of the copies after the author comes back and updates them is much shorter. Liuying's firefly armor did not appear in the early stages of this book. It seems that it appeared in volume 5, but I don't remember clearly. At present, the knight armor is used as the main combat power of Liuying. Knight props are obtained through the dungeon system, etc., And knight props are given to players at the same time. This is quite new and more suitable for readers who are tokusatsu fans. However, Liu Ying's own Fire Fire Armor has fewer opportunities to appear. I hope to see more Fire Fire Armor appear in the future. I hope the author will continue to update and the quality will get better and better [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

What stood out to me was that the protagonist can use Kamen Rider abilities But what made me catch up with this book was Dawn Battlefield Forget it, I won't say much more and I won't spoil it. This is a very good book

The content is good, the plot is reasonable, and there are no poisonous points; perhaps due to the resurgence of moisture, there is a lot of moisture between the lines, and it is better to read it if it is dried in the sun.

Good health. The scene described is very grand, the world view is great 👍🏻, and the stickers are high

The props, skills, and attribute panels take up a lot of space and are scattered, diluting the main text and dividing the story in terms of look and feel. The combination of the settings of the Firefly and the Knight system, and the interaction between the Firefly and the players are both interesting and look forward to. The story itself has nothing outstanding for the time being, nor any obvious poisonous points. Summary: For readers who come here for the IP of Firefly & Mask, this is a worthy fanfic.