You Ask What Kind of Magic This Is? Science!

How can I put it? The protagonist is so unlucky. There are always people targeting the protagonist. What's going on with the infection? What's going on when your body moves on its own? It's really not good to wear the soul. Anyway, the son born after wearing it is his own, not the owner of the original body of the soul.

Still good

It's not bad and looks good. There are just a few minor problems in the emotional part, but they are still negligible. Now it's mainly the frame-up part of the latest chapter. If this is not handled well, it will be poisonous.