After Traveling Through Comics, I Became Everyone's Bai Yueguang

I feel that the author's writing style is really comfortable. Each character is very detailed, with hidden little details and very poignant points. It is easy for people to remember. I feel that they are all very good children. I really like this kind of heartwarming plot. Although there are some nail clippers in it, the author seems to have said that the ending will be he. I like the villain brother and the male ghost brother, one is very arrogant and the other is very affectionate to get along with. I hope the gap between their two appearances will not be so big without affecting the outline. I feel that this kind of group portrait story unfolded from the perspective of the male protagonist is really attractive. It can be felt that although the protagonist says he doesn't want to get involved, he is very gentle to everyone. Even the male ghost brother can feel that the male protagonist hates his character, but he will not give up on him easily. The scene between the male protagonist and the male ghost brother is really interesting, a super plus point. You can also feel it, it's really difficult to write. Thanks to the author. I felt like I read it so fast, I finished it before I knew it. Although I really want to urge the author to update, the author should also pay attention to rest and put his own physical and mental health first. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot of the work. Come on, author. (By the way, this is the first time I have written such a long review, and I feel a little embarrassed...) I feel like the author could have changed the title of the book. Because this title will drive away a large number of book fans, with no desire to come in. I almost missed this treasure because of the title. I feel that the title, introduction and content of the book are completely three stories. When I read the title, I thought it was an old-fashioned rescue story, and when I read the introduction, I thought it was a somewhat sadistic Bai Yueguang rescue story. Open the content and take a look: What kind of gentle, reliable, beautiful, strong and miserable savior? What kind of mysophobic tsundere indulges the male mother and brother? What's so crazy about criticizing a dank male ghost who keeps pestering you? And our male protagonist who is super strong, has a chaotic attitude, and does whatever he wants (? He is gentle and capable of controlling the field, and he never takes advantage of others) ......... More characters to be unlocked. Who knew the food was so good before coming here? The title and introduction of the book didn't mention a word, so I almost missed a big treasure. Let me give you a suggestion. I think the title of the book can be whatever you want. Anyway, as long as it can attract more people to read it, I feel that the content of this novel can definitely retain people. I remember that during the book test, I seemed to be able to test several book titles at the same time. Remember to change the cover to a more beautiful one, I think the characters in the show are all very good. (Although I think the current cover is very nice, but it doesn't feel worthy of this novel) (This can only be regarded as a suggestion, the specific things will depend on the author's thoughts) I want to see the ending of this story, but I know that the process is equally important, so I will wait and wait for it to bloom... (Well, I feel a bit out of touch) In short, as an author, don't feel pressure, just show the world in front of us according to your own ideas. Three brushes so far.

It's very good-looking. To be honest, this kind of work that is not deliberately sensational and has not been written as a virgin is really shocking to me! Especially the tsundere mysophobic villain Little Spider Wuwuwu is really cool~ and the dank male ghost Zhuye Qing! Especially like an "observer", this kind of character is really touching! The protagonist's occasional high IQ and calm and aloof personality are also very touching~ The character design is particularly perfect, and you can also feel from the few words that Little Raven's parents are very good at raising their children. Little Raven is well-behaved by them. In the part about the little angel, I was really conquered by Little Raven's personal charm...

(See Chapter 268) Then I read the comic description I marked 251 notes on this novel. I liked it a lot. I feel like I didn't read much, but I read it for a long time. : (No cp/savior/group favorite/group portrait enhancement) This novel is about the characters Everyone's characters and their respective plots are very rich. When it feels bitter, I shed tears together, but when it feels sweet, there is a faint feeling of discomfort. Obviously everyone is going in a good direction, but there is also a dull feeling. Everyone is a good baby. About Yazhou: The character design given by the author is really perfect. Whether it is personality or personality, he is a friend that people want to make. He is also very friendly to girls. He has been pampered since he was a child. The family is very harmonious. The one thing that I can't stand is that his knife becomes more and more obvious in the back. I started to panic. I couldn't stand it anymore. I went to watch other places to calm down, and then continued to see it now. I still gave up. He is really perfect, I have a few words to copy [This makes her look like the cheerful little girl she was before——] Zheng Guanqi's eyes under the veil were full of smiles. "Hmph, of course, I am the savior -" Zheng Guanqi said, "The world - I will save it." There are many more words, but when I wanted to make a good comment, I specially saved some words that I liked very much. Then, there is another one, the system. It is really a good system. Everything that is done is based on the safety of the host. When something is not good for the host, it feels like it is not necessary to do the task. It takes the person back first. Later, it also plans to run away with the host and whether to pay liquidated damages. Haha, it is very friendly and likable. Jin Shining jumped up and down in his ear: [You are not allowed to learn, I am tired of saying these four words. The injury hurts, don't mess around. Then about the group portrait The protagonist of the original comic, Lin Lanshan, would not change his identity or have a highlight moment because of Crow Zhou. Instead, he would show a more three-dimensional psychological trajectory and action. The perspective of comic readers has always been around Lin Lanshan. Then there are the other members. I feel that everyone has a very deep impression. I can't say them all because I watched them for a long time, but everyone really loves Ya Zhou, but it is not the kind of love that is unreasonable. They started to love after they got to know each other. I like this very much. Then there is the feeling at the beginning. I didn't add this kind of salvation novel to the back of my bookshelf because it was not finished yet. I was afraid of knives and resisted it because after the protagonist became the savior, he would definitely not dodge some knives. I have read two books where the protagonist died once. Although he came back later, I still felt bad. The author of this novel said it was a happy ending, but I was still afraid when I saw him uncomfortable in the plot of Sekino. So my comment ends here (there may be typos in my voice input) Crow Crow - Crow Crow (climb crawl), we like you And the author, I love you, your writing is really good [sending my heart] "To all the long-awaited reunions and new beginnings." Goodbye, boat. Hello, Crow Boat. Welcome home, Zheng Guanqi. Crow Boat——Dean of Wildfire Academy, leader of Wildfire, vice-captain of Watch, vice-president of the Freedom Alliance, equal-level president of the Guiyi Alliance, fourth-in-command of the Human Alliance, and the greatest savior They say: "Death will never be extinguished, and a spark will start a prairie fire." Zheng Guanqi dreamed that he turned into a raven. He flapped his wings and flew to the branch, startling the crying white bird. Her golden eyes were filled with tears. She spread her wings and wanted to fly away, but her feathers were cut off and she could not fly. He thought for a while, picked up a lily from the ground and placed it next to the white bird. He didn't ask, he just kept a social distance that made her feel safe and stayed with her quietly. The white bird asked: "Who are you?" He thought for a while and said: "I am the Raven King, a savior!" Because the more clues you get, the more powerless you can piece together the ending that may belong to you. It's like running water and cannot be grasped, just like going back to Zhoumu, everything is advancing in a tight and orderly manner. There is always someone on the chessboard of fate and the hands of the chess player being pushed in their own direction. "I won't die here," Zheng Guanqi sighed, "because someone is waiting for me." That's the place I have to go back to no matter what. Jin Shining was stunned and blurted out: [What? [Go home. My parents are still waiting for me at home. I'm not a homeless person. He smiled brightly, like a ghost. No one can catch the free and ethereal ghost. Moon said: "I love this world. I remind myself to love over and over again, but I am forgetting. One day I will forget that I love the world. I am afraid that I will become extreme, and I am afraid that I will hopelessly hate this imperfect world." Human confusion is a recurring decimal, starting over and over again, and people will grow in constant self-doubt and relief. "How about finding an anchor point, an anchor point that can wake you up. I think this rough world is not good. You have to fall in love with the concrete existence." The white-haired boy is like an emotionless angel. He doesn't care about the world, but he is surprisingly tolerant of this confused moon. The boy who calls himself "Xiaozhou" spent three days to make a fawn. The fawn is still sleeping with its eyes closed tightly. It is indeed a cute and innocent fawn. The beating heart of the deer resonates with the dreamland, and it becomes the shining star in the dreamland - the only star. You ask Xiaozhou? Compared to the stars and the moon, he is more like the sun that does not generate heat but only shines, a weird, bright sun. You don't even understand the world and you stumble when you walk, how can you carry the weight of the world? Mulanke doesn't know where he will go. He sincerely hopes that he can be happy. Will the snow melting here turn into pure gems in another world? Unexpectedly, this snow had a temper. It kept silent and worked hard to clear away the pollution in the dreamland, turning black and disappearing. The last moment he disappeared, Mei opened her purple eyes and descended into the dreamland. At the end of the story, he still doesn't understand the white bird. The snow melts, taking away winter and him. When they met again, Mulanke already understood a lot. Pollution crushed his soul, but he spelled out the appearance of the white bird from Pollution's intermittent murmurs. It's a pity that he doesn't have much time left. He only hopes that he can give the feelings and understanding he gained from walking alone for so long to the bird who is still walking around the world in confusion, so that he can at least not sacrifice everything for a strange world without knowing anything. This is his imperfect answer. The white bird flew back and turned black. He must have suffered a lot. Do you still want to embark on the road to salvation? Then I hope you get to know the world first. O stumbling child, O new snow, Go slow and see the world you want to save. Fall in love with it, accept it, and fall in love with yourself. Loving yourself is the beginning of all greatness. Farewell, an untimely yet timely snow. Bon Voyage. "Crows piece together the moon, death creates life" "The world is in tatters, and the crow boat is mending it." "I don't want the moon to fall, I want to chase the moon myself" These are my favorite words that I will copy into my notes later. It may be a bit messy, but I like it very much. I feel that I will be very happy when I read my comments in the future. Goodbye Yazhou, I love you very much [sending heart]

Super super like it. 1. No bad words and no bad words. The author uses words like (a swear word in the upper city area) (a swear word in the lower city area) instead, which gives a good impression. 2. Good writing style. The writing is gentle and delicate, very fairy tale and very romantic 3. The characters are three-dimensional. Including the protagonists, there are 13 people in total. They have different personalities and distinct images. There are many highlights, and the highlights of the protagonists are not diminished. The animal sculptures are very delicious. 4. The plot is interesting. The if line is very sharp. From the first dungeon, I couldn't stop crying. The comics and forums made up for this very well, making people relax and not so sad. Several copies, from one person's salvation to everyone's concerted efforts later, is the charm of the group portrait.

OK, next I will use the most upright, most straightforward, simplest, most understandable, most practical, most down-to-earth, least roundabout, least pretentious, least fancy, most to the point, most clean and neat, most frank and frank, most simple and simple, most close to daily life, least pretentious, and not packed with flowery words. It does not play with textual conventions, does not hide roundabout thoughts, does not make obscure embellishments, does not pretend to be profound, and does not add unnecessary and cumbersome foreshadowing. Every word is open and transparent, and every sentence is sincere and true. Hua's expression is clear and concise, with no pretentious foreshadowing, no ambiguous wording, no roundabout hints, and no pretentious embellishments. It is so straightforward that it can be understood at a glance, so simple that everyone can understand it, so practical that there is no empty words, so neat that there is no nonsense, so magnanimous that no reservations are hidden, and so popular. People of all ages can understand it. It is hard-core and frank without being tactful, refreshing and direct without procrastination. It is simple and sincere without being exaggerated. It is easy to understand without being profound. It goes straight to the point without foreshadowing. It tells the truth without covering up. It is straightforward and straightforward without being pretentious. It is plain and simple without being gorgeous. It is clear and clear without being vague. If it is frank and candid without going around in circles, I will tell you: it looks good👍

I have read so many books about supernatural comics, and to be honest, this one is definitely of high quality. Many of the words are beautiful and touching. It really makes people feel warm and heartwarming [crying]. The content is also very fascinating. The story of the rebirth of all members of the comic "Help Really" really attracted me! ! [Adoration] [Adoration] [Except for our Brother Ji, everyone seems to be isolated from Brother Ji (?)] Among them, I most like the interaction between the characters, and they are all made of animals! ! I really feel like my heart melted when I saw how everyone was trying to warm each other up due to the tragic experiences in the previous life. [Anjing. Ing] Although some places really hurt me (´⌒`｡) [quietly] But! Our Crow King can always save the field successfully at critical moments, interrupt the emo atmosphere and kick over the character's lunch box [cool] (Long live the Crow King!!) There are also a lot of foreshadowings in the article, and some have been dug out. The only thing we have to worry about now is our Crow King Crow Zhou (Zheng Guanqi). I really feel that he will use Crow Crow to stab us later (ᵕ̣̣̣̣̣ ͜ ᵕ̣̣̣̣̣ ˶ ) ps: There will be small knives (?) In this book but not big swords (they were all blocked by the crow boat. Then I think the plot is going to be 90% likely to kill the protagonist. After all, the buffs are almost full T^T) One last thing I want to say! In my opinion, the main characters of this book have no absolute villains in the second week! ! (If you don't believe in the Children's Day episode of Guiding the Way) The spots on my body have faded since I watched the Children's Day episode_(: D)∠)_So my current thoughts are: Brother Dashan, good for not abandoning his teammates! ! Male ghost brother helps save Qu Yinjiang (Children's Day extra), male ghost brother is good! ! ! Brother Ji is hard-spoken and soft-hearted, no matter what Brother Ji is! ! ! ! Crow Crow works hard to save everyone, Crow Crow is equally good! ! ! ! ! Everyone dotes on Crow Crow, loves Crow Crow, and cares about Crow Crow, and everyone is doing well! ! ! ! ! ! (Scream. Ing) (Updated to Chapter 99.) Male ghost brother, I misjudged you🙃 Even if you are really a good person, you are not much better🙃 Hehe, male ghost brother, just be a normal person🙃🙃One day you are killed by crownen by "accidental" I will only say one sentence🙃It's a shame to commit suicide like this🙃🙃🙃 （）┭┮┭┮ [][][][][][][]

What a favorite book, Crow Boat is really the best savior! It is the ark that finally saves the world in times of trouble. He has been closely linked to "Dungeon" from the beginning. Even if he is far away in other worlds, throughout the chess game, he still carries the people he loves to save the world he does not love. Responsibility - you must first accept the trust and expectations they give you, and then shoulder these responsibilities before going to save the world. If you don't accept people, how can you die for them. So don't shoulder everything silently alone. Playing with friends is not as simple as raising a tank of fish! The world belongs to everyone. People who love it will jointly carry the falling sky and earth. They will be dragged down from the high sky. If the sky falls, there will be tall people holding it up. Why are you a minor joining in the fun?)! *Xiao Zhou (?) + Crow Zhou = Zheng Guanqi You are you in every period of time. From if to now, watching everyone and now, no one leaves an absolute answer, they all love you. Xiaomei rolled her eyes: "Everyone... Loves you!" That's why they all like you. Xiaomei knows it all! ? Why are you and him completely separated? It's all you. The Watch, the Human Alliance, the Free Alliance, etc. Have gathered together because of you, and the sparks have exploded. Damn it, I wonder who dares to deny that Zheng Guanqi is the greatest savior! The author's writing style is very good, but if you write about a warm reunion, I would wonder if the next chapter is going to kill me. Anyway, I still like it very much, and I will always follow you, Teacher Jingyan! From comics to outside comics and novels, there are many, many people who like you, Zheng Guanqi. This is the first time I write a book review. I feel that my writing is not good. I feel bad. I won't listen. I won't listen. I won't listen.

It's so beautiful, I cried when I saw it alone at night, especially this O stumbling child, O new snow, Go slow and see the world you want to save. Fall in love with it, accept it, and fall in love with yourself. Loving yourself is the beginning of all greatness. Farewell, an untimely yet timely snow. Bon Voyage. The writing is so beautiful. When I read it later, I saw my mother and father together as the anchors of the protagonists and Jin Shining. I cried so hard that I cried desperately in the middle of the night. It was so beautiful and beautiful. This novel is simply a masterpiece in my mind! [Crying][crying][crying][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The protagonist is a fun-loving person with a high IQ. On the surface, he is cheerful and positive, but he is a bit negative. I feel that part of the funny atmosphere of talking to Jin Shining System is disguised. Occasionally, he will show his cold side, calculating others but hating other people's calculations. Compared to the sun, Guanqi is more like the moon. It cannot shine but reflects the sun's light, pretending to be able to shine and imitating the sun. Then illuminate the lost. "Then don't be the savior." The two looked at each other. The boy with black hair and red eyes stood quietly. Lines of words appeared on the screen, like a movie announcing the curtain: I am a witness, I have seen it, I have witnessed the birds spreading their wings, I have witnessed the returning people changing everything. If you are not sure what is real, look at me and I am real. Human beings never need a savior, they can save themselves, but if I have to choose one to be the savior - it should be me.

Crow Zhou... Crow Zhou... I love you😭 Our King Crow is the best. From the first moment I read it, I felt that this book was super interesting. There are funny jokes one after another. I always enjoyed reading it. As the plot develops, I feel more and more profound about the story behind it. One reason why I particularly like this book is that his group portraits are very well created. The savior should never be the mission of one person! ! ! In short, this is a very in-depth and well-written book. I highly recommend it.

Very good book The author's writing is very clever, his ideas are very innovative, and he brings a lot of settings that I like very much. It's been a long time since I felt like crying while reading a novel. After reading the first copy of the savior's monologue, I really felt a sour feeling. The author is very good at describing delicate emotions and interesting dialogues, and can incorporate jokes into the story without appearing obtrusive. The connection of various plots and the revelation of foreshadowing are also very exciting, and the group of friends is very passionate and cute. However, the character creation of the supporting characters will be a bit flat and homogeneous. There is also the problem of over-description, but overall it does not affect reading. The author's writing style is also online. He may be funny and naive when describing interactions, but when it comes to formal scenes, he is very beautiful and touching. The contrast is huge hahaha. I personally still hope that this book will be read, and I hope that Guanqi and everyone can have a brand new and happy ending. In fact, when I read this book, I thought about their bad endings again and again, which still made me feel distressed. It is all young children who have to bear this kind of mission, and then die even more miserably because of the passivity caused by failure in another cycle. T^T Off topic: Don't look at the comment section, there are a bunch of AI pictures and various gods writing about knives inexplicably. If you are mentally weak, try not to read it. It really gave me a heart attack. It's obviously a good ending, but there are a group of people writing about how they missed and died. I don't like this atmosphere very much. Although the tone of the article is indeed miserable, I prefer to see them happy and beautiful, because they have suffered so much. . . And the conflicting points about the savior are also very well established. The fate of the savior in the past was very tragic. When a group of teenagers desperately want to save the world with their own strength, they are heading towards the fate of death for themselves and their companions. When I first started reading, I didn't feel this kind of pain. As I continued reading, I realized that the "mission" undertaken by the savior is something that ordinary people cannot bear. "Good night, the person who should not be the savior" is the person who is forced to bear the mission in ignorance. Overall, this is a very touching book. I originally wanted to tie it up and comment again, but the words are too powerful, so the above.

What a great setting! Using some skills will stack negative effects (passive). When I saw this setting, I knew it was not simple. This thing will definitely be a big deal in the future, and the writing is also very good! I really like the setting of the protagonist, Hakuri Hakuri is so heartless on the surface, and his road-crazy attributes are so cute! Although I haven't read much yet, this article is very suitable to my taste, and I will definitely follow it to the end, so I will push for more now hehe Although I wanted to watch it and then review it, I couldn't help it after watching the first world! After reading it, I will change my account and come back to leave a review. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this world is too unreliable, world consciousness, get out of here! Can you please not bring trouble to us watching chess? I really don't want to see a happy idiot again, even if the superficially happy idiot later becomes taciturn, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh we don't have enough Yinjiang, how many more saviors do you want for us! Can't you check the strategy when choosing a savior? What is the difference between your behavior and giving a child an off-road vehicle and asking him to drive it three times around the country? Children are ignorant, are you ignorant? You even forced people inside! I think you were very eloquent the first time you spoke, didn't you think all your brains went into talking about it, but in the end you couldn't even say anything? Looking at the trend, I guess you restarted it many times, and ended up ruining your own family, but you deceived the intermediary system and kidnapped another savior from other places. You just caught the savior and wouldn't let him go, right? Why don't you give me some hints if you have such intelligence? Look at the hints you give people. What a mess. If you only ask people to save the world, they won't even give you a direction. If you give them a body, they will damage their own bodies. What's the use of your world consciousness! Uh, I couldn't control my emotions. I was just complaining. I wanted to scold the world for a long time while watching it. Fortunately, the author wrote a big he at the beginning, otherwise I would give up after reading this copy, because I think the ending is most likely to be. The little crow can absorb pollution and trigger the passive setting. At first glance, it is simply made for sadistic writing, but fortunately, I have already Now that I have experience, the last book that said all sugar and no knives in the introduction was Zheng Xun's book. The ending was not that I was strong enough to crawl out with my crying body. The author wrote with confidence. No matter what, I had to read it all, and I was bound to see my big ending!

It's a bit difficult to comment. I can only list all the characters (incompletely) to express my feelings. Yazhou, Fangzhou, Zheng Guanqi, Mulanke, Guanye, Wenrui, Lin Lanshan, Quyinjiang, Ji Yunming, Lipinghe, Liangjingjing, Jinshanshan, Wu Qu, Shi Junyu, Qi Daoping, Qi Xiuyuan, Fang Guannan, Wen Buyan, Wang Liuwen, Zhou Huanyu, Lin Li, Gu Xing, Xiaomei, Jiang Yanan, Dong Jinlin, Ma Liuer, Xu Yaozu, Li Ziyan, Xu Ningyu, Sheng Tongze, Feng Chunsheng, Xu Gui, Bai Qingzhi, Fang Zhixuan Overwatch, Unity, Wildfire, Human Alliance, Freedom Alliance, United Alliance, God Killing Squad Xiaozhou, everyone loves you It's so beautiful [crying][crying][crying] In short, the characters are rich and three-dimensional, the writing is needless to say, and the plot is solid.

The author uses delicate writing to highlight the character's personality traits in the plot to make the character more three-dimensional. Each character has its own personality traits to make the character more agile. Yazhou (Zheng Guanqi) always solves problems in seemingly unintentional actions. For example, in Chapters 54 and 55, Brother Dashan (Lin Lanshan) was in trouble because of the tragic situation of Heiwu and his teammates in the previous game. Yazhou used, uh... A clever method to first get Brother Dashan out of negative emotions, and assured him that everything was real, so that Brother Dashan's mood returned to normal. I also like Mulan Ke very much. Who can refuse a gentle and tolerant parent? The description of the male and female ghost team is also superb. The article is particularly good at stimulating the reader's emotional transformation. For example, in Chapter 98, I was still confused and in pain when Mulanke chose to be the savior, but he firmly told Xiaozhou (Ya Zhou | Zheng Guanqi) not to hate, but to love the world. Xiaozhou was Mulanke's anchor and burst into tears, but next time The part where Ye Xiaozhou pinched the plum blossom and named it made me happy again. The whole process of this paragraph of text is extremely smooth. The words in the book are like delicate brushes, sketching out vivid pictures, which makes people feel like they are in it. They suddenly wake up when they read the latest chapter, and the lingering sound makes people unable to get back to their senses for a long time. In the end, Crow Zhou (Zheng Guanqi), Jin Shanshan, Mulanke, Xiaomei, Lin Lanshan, Ji Yunming, Quyinjiang, Wu Qu, Shi Junyu, Zhou Zhou: Quyinjiang, Mei, Mulanke... Are all good babies, I hope they all have a happy ending Great author, I will pursue your books for the rest of my life The author does not often spend a lot of writing to describe the appearance of the characters, but the image of each character is very three-dimensional. If you close your eyes, they will appear in your mind. You can feel that the author loves his children. Every character is a good baby (except for pollution). I like it very much. The plot is also very interesting. This is my favorite book. I recommend this book to everyone I know, whether it is teachers, classmates or parents! It is very gentle and this book makes me feel. The author's foreshadowing is also required! ! ! This book was so good that I logged into Tomato! A complete list of must-read contents for getting electronic products! I like Mulanke. Every time he speaks, he makes me shed tears. The moon always accompanies you gently, not like the sun that is too warm. He will wait for you quietly and watch you make choices. Turn your head when you have negative emotions. He is right behind you, looking at you gently and opening his arms. Mulanke is a very reliable and gentle person. He is really gentle to the core. He is the psychological committee member of the protagonist group! I like Yazhou (Xiaozhou, Zheng Guanqi). Yazhou is a super good person, a soft-hearted child (a child who stumbles on the road to salvation), and an inclusive savior. I feel like he is a perfectionist who can strive for a perfect ending. The kind who sacrifices himself for the game, but when relatives and friends want to bring him back, he is willing to give them a chance to try. He is loved, no matter where he is. Super good Crow Boat, be happy and safe! I don't want to see the speaker become mute [cry][cry][cry] Love the glitter! What a super responsible system! I love my sister very much, and I also like my shiny golden sister. I like if Mulanke, Fang Guannan, Mei, Evil Cow Cat, Xiaomei, Wen Rui, Ji Yunming... I like all the characters except Pollution. I hope all the characters are safe, happy, and have a happy ending (except for pollution) I hope that the author will not feel too much pressure, and be happy and safe every day! (By the way, the author is great, can the characters in this book be cosplayed?) Swallow, I will follow your book for the rest of my life! ! ! Super super super super super super super (multiplied by infinity) looks great! ! !

I admire how the author has read so many philosophical books. Every application is just right, every summary hits the heart, and every copy is thought-provoking. Is God still God if he has feelings? Are people still human without their memories? When I first read this book, I mainly read it because of the heartthrob. I thought I could see many CPs, but I found out that the heartthrob can also be Cb. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. The plot is compact, fast and logical, and the writing is beautiful and lyrical and deeply rooted in people's hearts. The writing is mixed with plot, and the logic is mixed with affection. It turns out that every word of the author is not nonsense, the author's plot logic is also perfect, and every hole is filled in very well. The description of the characters is really exciting. At first I thought it was a mindless novel, but halfway through it I thought it was a crazy novel with passionate images. By the end, I realized that it actually caused deep thoughts and thoughts about life. Each character has a different perspective on life. It turns out that NPCs are not just NPCs. Everyone is the protagonist of their own lives. Saving the world is not just about the savior, it requires everyone to work together! ! ! ! There is a sentence in it that shocked me: It is crazy to put the responsibility of saving the world on one person.

(The following comments may contain spoilers, please proceed with caution) Beautiful! A particularly good book. I used to like to read novels in which the protagonist saves the world alone, but I always feel a little sad. I can only roughly feel the attitude of other characters towards the so-called savior who bears everything and the things that prevent him from saving the world alone. But this novel allows me to see what true two-way redemption is. It describes the emotional logic of this aspect in particularly detail. The process of this salvation is not only the salvation of the world, but also the process of Yazhou growing into a mature person. He learns about life and death. The meaning of learning, learning how to get along with the world, learning to understand others, learning pain, learning all the feelings of living (the characters in this book are really human) (except for the male ghost brother). He redeemed the boss in pain, and was taught again and again. In terms of the meaning of life, what moved me the most was Sekiye's education to Xiao Zhou in the Heart of Flesh chapter. "When you hesitate between saving the world and preserving yourself, then you truly have the right to choose." Ahhhhhhh, this is the education of life and death! People must learn to value themselves for themselves, and learn to value and care about themselves for those who care about and value themselves. This is the correct value teaching! (Cries from normal college students) Moreover, the protagonists all have a strong sense of boundaries. Do you know how rare this is? A group of normal people who respect the wishes of others. Even if they are unwilling to accept their own salvation, Crow Zhou will not be stubborn and resist alone. Brother Buffalo does not directly ask him to give up, but allows him to learn to understand pain, understand what he will lose, and understand what he has done. The meaning of choosing options, and then making your own choices. The bison who respects other people's ideas makes my grandma (cross out). Although Brother Dashan is always angry, he has always supported Yazhou and did not continue to stop him (actually, I feel that Brother Dashan is a bit hopeless). Mother Mu is a loving mother and a loser (bu shi) The three Mu mothers are all very nice, and I feel very much like an INFJ (Purely personal, don't comment). Mu gives me a very gentle feeling. Later I found out that he was from Xiacheng District, which was quite shocking. Mu's values ​​give me a feeling that God loves the world, but In fact, what he did was different. He gave me a slightly less human feeling. He was too divine, like a holy father (a compliment). Bai Yueguang stereotyped the notes. I feel that if I didn't read books in this world, I could only remember these few notes based on my memory. It's very good and not easy to forget.

Ah, actually the plot is pretty good and worth looking forward to, but the author Wen Qing's illness is so frequent that he can't handle it. Too many gorgeous words will only make that part of the story look awkward. Also, in order to express the protagonist's misery, the author used the value of the pollution pile. I personally am relatively slow to pick up the game, and the author's behavior of piling up values ​​​​went too early, so my current feeling about the plot that seems to be cruel is a bit distorted. (So currently I can't relate to the emotions when reading the story, so the comments are really a bit baffling) As for the eldest brother of the protagonist, let alone the second brother, you guys are a bit disobedient. Ah↑But I really like the stories of the saviors in those dungeons. They are all exciting, and every if-line savior is very charming... There are a lot of foreshadowings buried in the story, and I hope the author will take them back one by one. Those funny plots are also worth reading☝️🤓It can be seen that the author's Internet speed is very fast, and the use of memes is also very interesting, I like it very much~ Currently I am very interested in Mulanke and Fang Guannan and decided to continue observing🧐 President--Master President--! 😭Praise to the President——Hehehe🤤🤤🤤 Ahem... Well, thank you teacher, my wife is very hot and I like it very much. I give Fang Guannan a five-star rating directly for this character. I will come back to continue tasting it after the update of Legacy of Evolution is completed😋

The chuunibyou Crow Crow is cute, and the interactions are cute and funny. Unexpected heartthrob trend? (Not) Eh! Keep a record to see how long I watched. (6.02/Two hours) Take another look (12.26) 1.23 2026.3.13

The special back is particularly beautiful, and everyone is a cute and good boy, except for the male ghost brother (I'm sorry, my filter for the male ghost brother is too serious), but please don't BE! I always feel that the author's HE is just a trap to trick us into killing us. After all, if we all die together, isn't it a kind of HE?

It's a book I like very much, very comfortable to read. The daily life tends to be lighthearted and funny, and everyone's personalities and interactions are very interesting. There are few books that can make me laugh so hard that I forget about it. . The daily interactions and big scenes are well described, and the stories and growth of many small characters are also inserted into the thread, which is very thought-provoking. The author's writing style is very delicate, and the overall writing style is relatively soft. It is one of the most iconic online books I have read so far. Many of the descriptions that tend to be stream-of-consciousness are also very appropriate, and you can clearly know what they are expressing. I really like the author's lyrical descriptions, which are meticulous and touching. The current story as a whole gives me a feeling of moving from an individual to a group. If the prelude is the passionate heroism of young people, then the main theme is the united collectivism of all the people. I am looking forward to the subsequent development of the story and some undisclosed hidden content. In addition, Jingyan should pay more attention to himself and not put too much pressure on himself. It is normal to have flaws. At least in my opinion, the many advantages of this book are enough to slightly cover up some shortcomings. The problems can be corrected slowly. I will keep reading. Five-star review here! つ♡⊂

This book is really beautiful. Whether it is the protagonist comforting Lin Fenglan, or the protagonist group comforting the little crow, it is so heartwarming. I rarely see this kind of book. It was also great to have mom and dad in the back comforting the little crow. It completely expressed what I was thinking, just like what the book says: Everyone loves you, but you keep your head down and don't see it. Don't be sad about the past, what you want to welcome is a brand new future. (I'm not trusting you, I'm not trusting you, I'm really not trusting you. This book is really beautiful. I cried when I read the last paragraph. This is the first time I have given such a sincere review of this book. It's really beautiful. Author, don't be tired or rest [crying])

It's very beautiful, every character is well-rounded, and the story is interesting. Of course, it would be nice if the author could use less knives. (Well, sometimes, regret is also a kind of beauty, and it makes the story more real and colorful. In other words, sometimes, a knife is necessary. Alas, even if I have a glassy heart, I can't eat a knife.໒꒰ ྀི ′̥̥̥ ᵔ ‵̥̥̥ ꒱ྀིა ) If Mu's story is the most touching to me, tears wet my pillow (╥_╥) (Send a razor blade to the author). I hope that in the end, cheers for the author. (If the ending of our cute little crow boat is be, you know the author, we readers will not let you go!!!)

Really, very beautiful! ! I watched it out of curiosity at first, but then I was laughed at by Crow Boat's sand sculpture, and then. . We have arrived at the dream-weaving world of the if world. I didn't expect that the knife would come so quickly. I was so confused that I couldn't breathe and even felt dizzy while crying on the bed. Then I cried many times in many subsequent if line worlds, including Gemini's, Guanye's, Li Pinghe's, and Lin Lanshan's. Author, have you seen it? I kept crying. . . . The author's foreshadowing is very good, and the character creation is also very successful. Everyone has his own characteristics, everyone has his own position, and they are all trying their best to live for the new world they want. No one is right or wrong, and none of us are wrong. I really cried. I almost thought I was going to die. Fortunately, the author tried his best to turn the tide and bring me back. Shining Mom is awesome! Jingyan is awesome! (This person tagged an author) I have been reluctant to tie it for a long time, but I finally can't help but tie it today. It is really painful and happy. It is really the book I have crossed out the most. The discussions about human destiny, soul and spirit, love and self, etc. Are also very meaningful in my opinion. I am really happy to see such a great work. I may read it again and again in the future. I really like this book. Thank you so much to the author. (Bow) So, Crow Boat, let's meet in the new world!

It's very interesting, the author's writing is very delicate, and the plot is well drawn, so even when I realized that the content of this book was far from what I thought it would be when I read the introduction, I still chose to continue reading. I think this book is about suffering rather than torture, like a sky that never clears up and a drizzle that never stops falling. Only when the pollution that threatens the world is completely eradicated and the victory is achieved, will the real sunny day come. This also shows that the author writes well! But it's really hard. . I need to relax a bit before continuing...

Nice! One of the few that made me want to rate it even before it was finished! I like Crow~ I like every character, everyone is good... Although the male ghost brother is very weird, I feel that he is not bad, everyone is living in their own way...

It looks great [like] Everyone's image is full and vivid, and everyone is unique The overall feeling of this book is like a light rain falling on a cold winter day, gentle, delicate, and continuous, but it hits the body with a real cold and dense tingling sensation. The emotion in the article is rich and delicate, it is a very gentle and gentle feeling. The fine knife is hidden under the soft shell, and the hand is cut accidentally. At the beginning, I tended to prefer refreshing stories. Crow Crow has strong abilities and interesting personality, but you can still see a hint of bitterness in the story. Later, the emotions become more delicate. From the beginning, Crow Crow gives the impression that he is outside the world (after all, he is not from the comic book world). He always saves the world in a way that causes the least loss to others, but ignores the harm such behavior causes to himself (other people's perspective). You can see the change when you get to If Mu. The author's emotional handling of each character is quite good. Personally, I don't feel that the number of words is too high when writing about forums, etc. It is well connected and there is no strong sense of fragmentation when reading. Overall, this book is a good book to read when you have free time. It is warm and healing (it is actually a bit scary), but some parts may seem a bit confusing and difficult to understand. If you are an old book lover who pays great attention to logic, it may not be suitable. It mainly depends on the individual, but I think the author wrote it very well [blowing kiss] By the way, crow, puppies and kittens are really cute! Those who read it will feel warm in their hearts. [Sending Hearts] The author's writing style is also very good. Our crow is the best baby! ! ! It's really cute, and the conversation with Shan's mother is also adorable. Everyone is such a good baby! ! ! Our cb is the most invincible [like] The author will update soon! ! !

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Five-star praise^ω^ To be honest, this is the first time I have seen such a well-written book on Tomato. Both the characterization and the plot are very rich. It is like a god coming. I found that Yanzi particularly likes to depict big scenes, and he depicts them very well. Among them, the Hezhong Conference is A typical special case, this one is completely divine, and in the story there is not only justice (if they don't want to die, if the world must have death to save the world, then the dead person can be me) but also human touch (Wen Rui faked his death, and the newspapers reported one after another) Having said this, I have to praise the author himself. I feel that Yanzi has read many, many books, and there are often a lot of truths and philosophies in the words he writes. Moreover, it can be seen from your writing that you are a very delicate person! The emotions and tension are all perfectly portrayed! If you don't suggest it, I will be promoted to Yan Ziquan for sure, and you are not allowed to scold her! Finally, thank you, thank you for writing such a story, thank you for making me realize them Thank you for your words, which make me feel the throbbing in my heart. You are a great creator! Sorry QvQ, it's my first time writing a book review, so maybe it's not very good. Okay, I originally wanted to post it in the comment area, but I found out that the number of characters is limited! ! ! Let's talk about the characters again Speaking of characters, this issue is the best among gods. Walking in here is like entering a wonderful paradise. In fact, my favorite character among the characters is Mulanke (boy's mother… hehe… boy's mother). This man's portrayal is absolutely wonderful. When I first recognized the character of Mulanke, I thought he was another flat, monotonous and gentle character. At the critical moment, as the protagonist's knowledge, My close friend came over to persuade me, and it wasn't until the introduction of the plot that I began to get to know him gradually (PS: The interaction with our Crow King was completely adorable). I remember what he said: "This feeling makes people very helpless, but from books I can always find people who are related to me and others. I can understand people like others by reading the people in the book. I choose my world view, values and outlook on life from the book..." This sentence made me feel his true core. His core is love, and it is love that drives him to walk in the painful world. , For Yazhou (Dream Weaver, 9th World), it was Mulanke who taught him love and made him fall in love with a world because of a person (or maybe he realized that he loved this world). In the first world, why didn't Mulanke fall in love with this world because of Fang Zhou? In addition, there are many outstanding characters: Wen Rui (she showed me what a tough person is like, and her clips are also super shocking) Dr. Zhou (what a doctor who helps the world by hanging a pot, he is obviously from the medical Zhou family, but he volunteered to go to Xiacheng District to treat these people, do you still want to compete with Zhou's explosive bombs?) Gemini (the stars and twins of the universe), the former protagonist (turned into a wet and heavy man!) And so on are almost countless. Swallow, I will fall in love with you! Can you marry me? (Oh no, my loose English!) And I want to say that you are not hypocritical in your words at all. I want to say that in your words, I see each character growing flesh and blood crazily because of love and becoming a real person. I like the characters you write, but at the same time, as I read, I gradually fell in love with the person who wrote these words. I hope this book will be the feathers that fill your wings, rather than the shackles that bind you. There are typos because of the voice input ꒦ິ^꒦ິ (everyone who understood it cried) I wish you happiness and beauty in your present life.

I like this book very much. This is the first savior-themed novel I have read. There are currently no red herrings. (There are spoilers, so run if you haven't read the text yet) If you think it's not good-looking, don't scold the author or me. I'm not afraid. Good-looking is my personal opinion, and bad-looking is also your personal opinion. I love you =• ֊ •= The little crow is very cute, the little raven is also very cute, and equally handsome The protagonist Ya Zhou is a cute fun-loving person, Brother Dashan is a serious "teaching director", Qu Yinjiang is a cute and free little bird, and Ji Yunming is a duplicitous mysophobic brother. And Mulanke, to be honest, I wanted to write a book review because of a song I heard in music class today. The song was "Wishful". The first person I thought of when listening to this song was Mulanke. I like Mulanke's character very much, very gentle. In the second world, when I knew he was the boss, I didn't actually have much thought. I just thought he was a very gentle and kind person. In the second world, I didn't think much of him. In the final stage of the world, I saw the story of the boss Mulanke, and I saw a sentence: "At least, a person who doesn't know much about the world - a child who can't even walk steadily should be allowed to save the world." This is the first self-created savior novel I have read. When I saw this sentence, I already had tears in my eyes, and they burst out. Fortunately, I stayed up late to read it. My view of the world has made me feel that the world is boring, but Teacher Mulanke's words made me think that maybe my understanding of the world is still too shallow. Teacher Mulanke's gentleness is what I want most. I like this novel very much, I like the characters in it very much, I like Crow Boat very much, I like Teacher Mulanke very much, thank you to the author for letting me see such a good work I was reading this book one after another, but it was actually because I was stuck in Heart of Flesh. When I didn't understand this copy, I chose to read the previous one again, over and over again (I should have started reading it from Dream Weaver Jingshi). It was not until the Autocratic Era that I continued to understand it and continued reading. Of course, there was also the reason why I had to go to school for the high school entrance examination. Hhhhhhhh At that time, I was watching Lu Renyi (Lu Renyi), and I felt that this kind of subject was rarely seen (maybe because I didn't have much exposure myself). I saw it on the recommendation, so I was very curious and read it. When I read Mulan Ke, I really cried, but I asked why? I don't remember it, I just remember that it was sad. I still feel sad when I watch it again, and it's even sadder after watching the ending. In fact, this comment will only appear mediocre when put together with other comments, but I still hope that more people can see him, love him, accompany him, and never leave him. I will always love Little Crow/Little Raven Everyone should be well, Quyinjiang (angel), Mulanke (forever teacher), Lin Lanshan (brave, knight), Ji Yunming (the best half-brother in the world), Qi Daoping (brother-in-law), Qi Xiuyuan (Brother Wenhua), Wen Rui (Voice of Justice), Guanye (Bison that can drive), Li Pinghe (Female Ghost Sister, the best chairman), Shi Junyu (the best magician), Wu Qu (the best archer), Fang Guannan (male ghost brother, nameless brother, brother), Zheng Guanqi/Yazhou/Angzhou (the best savior, the most powerful little crow/raven, the most handsome person, the coolest person, the source of security, the cutest person, the most loved person, the person who loves others the most...) There is no ranking order, no distinction between before and after, and no discrimination. Nicknames are all personal preferences. I love everyone, but there are too many people. Everyone should be happy! ! ! !

Sometimes the scene transitions may not be written so clearly, and sometimes they may be a bit confusing. But this is my favorite article I have read recently. It is not just funny and funny, but everyone's image is full. I feel like a group portrait article. Everyone has their own tenderness and persistence, and maybe confused, but there will always be an anchor around them, maybe a relative or a friend, pulling them forward, and everyone is working hard to save the world. The warm scenes actually reveal a touch of sadness from time to time (the pain caused by repeated failed rescues in the past). In fact, I think this is not just about saving the world, it is actually teaching everyone to love, love yourself, love the world, accept love [love], listen carefully, and bear it together. We are never alone. Behind us are relatives, friends, and lovers. We are not alone in [love]. I haven't tied it yet. I only watched part of it, but I feel deeply about it. I hope it will be filled with tonics in the future! Really like it! It was the knife and the stalk that kept making my body hot and cold. (A lot of foreshadowing) Attachment (whispering in a low voice): We are all good babies (that world consciousness that doesn't do good things is to be determined, and that smelly black mist pollution that is not a good person at all, go away)! I like Mu Ma so much! It's really gentle! Great! Actually I like them all! Ouch! [Love][love][love] (Wait for me to continue watching👀 and then come back to comment [full])