Lian Na************

Big boost to the author, it's really good-looking, and it's brought in from a new perspective, which is very different from the Ao Guang's Yang Jian's Nezha I've seen before. Instead, the demon clan was chosen as the main perspective, and the concept was exquisite. The plot is very well controlled, retaining the places in the movie, and adding my own conjectures. All in all, it is really good to watch, and what I am most looking forward to right now is the plot where he goes to the East China Sea to meet Ao Run. But when will Nezha and Ao Bing develop? It's crazy to want to see the main character. Five-star praise sent.

How should I put it? Generally speaking, it is a novel with a fairly good logic and an interesting plot, but it is not suitable for people who like to keep things fresh. First of all, the increase in cultivation level is a bit overdone. I understand that the author wants readers to see the growth process of the protagonist, but showing it once or twice is enough. It is better to just write the result and omit it. The fast food era pays more attention to the result, and it is a bit boring to talk slowly. Then try not to add emotional lines, 🌚Really, nowadays, if you write an original novel about stallion style, you will be scolded to death🥲 Your second creation is even more terrible. Even women who have a harem are easy to be fooled, and the rational audience will really decrease, unless the author wants to attract this aspect🌚 (referring to stallion style lovers) Finally, I want to talk about whether Ao Run is a bit too abrupt. Although there is a lot of foreshadowing in the whole process, it is very inconsistent and very different from the overall chapter. •ᴗ•💧Overall, it doesn't look good Finally, come on, author, I can see that there is still room for growth. I am optimistic about you and come on.

The main character is okay so far. At once. Can there be less future love lines and the like.

It's nice, super nice, I personally think so, and it updates quickly. I think, author, this book has unlimited future! ! How long has it been? There are already so many more, and they are very beautiful\(//∇//)\Anyway, I like them very much! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It seems okay so far, but I personally don't like CP. I hope the author can reduce the emotional lines.

I am a farmer and this is beet! ! !

It's okay, come on

Very beautiful, very beautiful😊😊

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, although I haven't beaten the evil peach yet.

Deer Boy! You are a man among men, a male among males!

Can you say goodbye to sister? Can you call me sister? It gives me a very strange feeling. Single girl or multiple girls?

The author's writing is good. I hope it won't be interrupted or unfinished. Be careful when I send you a razor blade.

The author's writing is so good

It looks good, I love reading it, cheers for the author

Very beautiful, this book

The great god Lutong is the most handsome

Super super pretty

It's very good-looking, I feel very comfortable watching it, and the whole process is logical. It doesn't overly vilify a certain image, nor does it carry strong emotions, making it very comfortable to watch.

Aside from the occasional male fantasy, the basic storyline is pretty good and quite funny in places.

It's so good~ I finally got an article about the Demon Slayer Team. I am the author's dog! I want to eat (☆∀☆)

Not bad, not bad. Big boost, author! ! !

It's too short, it's completely enough to watch

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Looks good, come on!

The world has changed, Master

The number of words is too few

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad, very pretty

Very beautiful, recommended

Not bad, pretty good. Come on.