Two Souls in One Body Storm the Cultivation World

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Haha, overall it's really good to watch. The protagonist's relationship progresses very smoothly and naturally, and the plot is also very interesting. And I like the hard-working protagonists. They all continue to work hard in their respective fields and finally succeed in defeating the bad guys. The ending is also good. The only thing is that the author could describe some plots in detail, but he just brushes it off. Although it is a little less interesting, the plot develops quickly and is very interesting.

I want to ask if Mu's soul comes back and leaves the body of the original protagonist Shou later? [What]

The writing style was a bit rusty at first, but in the later stages the pace was very fast and it looked pretty good. There might be some problems with the twenty or so pictures at the beginning, but the rest are very good looking (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤ Protagonist: Tan Li Protagonist: Hibiscus The plot is not very sharp and is suitable for people who like to read short sweet stories. The anchor is also very good at reading it. Except for the foreshadowing in the first few chapters, which is a bit abrupt and easy to make people laugh, there are no major flaws. I hope the author will open a new book. Anyway, I am a local dog and I love this style (◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*❤ There are some spoilers below: It's the two souls that are one body. They stayed with the original protagonist Shou for a while at the beginning. When they were in the back, they stayed with the current protagonist Gong, but I don't think the parasite time was very long. Moreover, the Lord God is the father of the protagonist Gong, and I don't know what the system is. If you don't understand anything, you can ask me (´∩｡• ᵕ •｡∩`). I look forward to the author's new article (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, but why is the author's new article unfinished? Wow wow wow, I can only watch something else (••)♡

It's pretty good, mainly because I haven't read many articles like this before. In the early stage, I guessed the plot of the later stage, that is, other CPs, their story descriptions were a little less.

Although the writing style is a bit naive, overall, the process of reading this book is relatively easy, there is no frustrating plot, and everyone has a good ending. Good luck, author! (Next time, there can be less foreshadowing in the article, or it can be more subtle. A straightforward foreshadowing will affect the reading sense a bit)

It's good-looking [laughing], although it's not the genre I like to watch, but it's still very good-looking. I prefer to read articles about the entertainment industry where the director has no way to deal with the guests.

Good review, except for being a bit verbose

Beautiful, highly recommended!!

This must be the author's first time writing. The writing style needs to be improved. There are many areas that could be improved. However, the overall rhythm is good and the emotional description is more natural. It's quite good.