I Joined a Sect of Female Immortals, and This Fake Prodigy Can’t Hide Much Longer

It's a good book, but can the author improve the appearance of the protagonist? The male protagonist looks like a physical figure. Otherwise, he will become darker and darker and become an African black brother.

The writing is good and the characters are well described. It is a light novel that does not require pretentiousness or conflicts to make it comfortable to read. However, there are too many female characters who appear, some of them have overlapping faces and lack of distinctiveness. At present, it is definitely capable of making the list.

The author, please don't give up easily. Aren't your results gradually improving? And your fairy tale harem is pretty good, much better than those novels that only feature bad characters. Why don't you insist on it? Is it more profitable to write fan fiction? PS: If you really want to stop updating, can you answer a few of my questions? 1. Is the male protagonist's talent really fake? Why is it so difficult to practice and yet it can increase so quickly? 2. Are all the senior sisters who appear on the show female protagonists?

You can give it a try, it's innovative but in general it's still the same old routine (the classics will last forever). Let's see later how the author handles the relationship between the characters.

It's really well written.

[Laughs] It's surprisingly pretty. It's a pity that there are too few wives.

Beautiful! Come on come on

The story is novel and not trivial. I personally think it is worth reading. I hope the updates will not be discontinued.

It looks good, come on!

The plot is not cliche, the writing is exquisite, especially the details are described just right, and the sex is not obscene. I hope it won't be buried.