The Primordial Land: Reordering the Leylines

Yes, very good. This kind of plot setting makes me feel very comfortable, and I want to keep reading. I have read many ancient novels, and the other ones are also very good, but they don't make people feel as bright as yours. Come on. A thousand people have a thousand opinions, and some people will definitely not like your way of writing. Maybe in the future I will have different opinions on this book because of other plots, but I hope you can keep writing. Come on, stars don't ask who travels, and time pays off. Come on.

Come on, please update! It's so good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. Every expectation of the protagonist makes people's hair stand on end. It is estimated that time, cause, and fate, Hongjun, they didn't expect that they were so evil, so Insidious, so sophisticated and calculating [smile][smile]🤔🤔💕💕💕💕💕💕👍👍👍👍👍

After reading it, I feel that the logic is relatively comfortable, and the novel plot concept is also good, but it is a bit strange and the span is a bit wide. As mentioned in the article, if the Mythical Da Luo is the realm of the Great Dao, then the protagonist's cultivation span is too fast, even faster than those who have a system to open cheats. He has not even reached the realm of the way of heaven, so he can directly prove that the Myth Da Luo is the realm of the Dao? And the realm does not need to be defined and subdivided according to other prehistoric novels, but let's write down some general realms. Is it impossible to say that it is from the immortals to Da Luo in the front, and after Da Luo, there is Da Luo, Dao Fruit, and then directly to the mythical Da Luo (the realm of the great road)? Another point is how can the protagonist achieve the great enlightenment with heel and foot that even Pangu couldn't do? Or does it mean that the mythical Daluo is a kind of method to achieve the great truth? Wouldn't it be a little far-fetched to use some of the protagonist's assumptions as a time traveler to prove the logic of the mythical Daluo (the realm of the great road)? Even these questions can be regarded as problems at the moment, but overall this book is eye-catching.

It's better than most of the prehistoric novels on the market, but it's not brilliant enough and I haven't realized my own things. Please try to write better.

Come on. The specific rating will depend on subsequent changes. I'm also curious, why is this a conspiracy theory novel? What are traditional conspiracy theories? That Taoist master is a bad guy. He must be a bad guy. Whatever he does is bad. Ah, what is the point of this novel? Based on available information. And judging from what is known in advance. What is Daozu going to do, and what are the benefits to Daozu? Why did Daozu do this? And as we learn more, the things we do and discuss change.

The writing is okay, but it has to be so imaginative to be interesting. If there are too many novels about being a camera, it will collapse in the later stage. Western fantasy plus Eastern fantasy, the magic reform is interesting, the abyss is quite interesting. I am afraid that their combat power is too high. You can sense the heavenly book through the earthly book or seize the origin of crape myrtle, get the list of gods, beat the divine whip, transform into the immortal pool, and measure the evil beasts in the calamity. The gods are inverse, Luohou, upside down, yin and yang, the five elements, etc. All the innate gods and demons are on the list. At that time, the heaven will directly choose Luo Daoguo (Hunyuan Golden Immortal) as the commander or official. Daluo Jinxian will be the general. Taiyi Golden Immortal is a heavenly soldier, Daluo Golden Immortal is a heavenly soldier, it's fine, but I'm afraid I won't be able to fight 😂 In the middle, you can build markets or cities in various places in the prehistoric times, where monks can exchange and buy elixirs, magic weapons, exercises, and acquired souls. There will be a teleportation array and a missionary monument in the market. Anyway, the money for the treasure is in Wuyi Mountain, so it is necessary to prevent theft. 🤔 Next to the teleportation array, we are building a world secret realm for monks to break through and give out rewards. Anyway, after the Dao Demon, the inheritance of Daluo Jinxian and above has been discontinued. Let's make a ranking. If you have a big imagination, you can play tricks in the secret realm and make it look like a game, but it will not match the title 🤦

This point of view is ancient, there is something, start updating, I will recommend it to you, the author, follow this pace, it will be strange if it is not popular [laughter]

Yes, yes, I appreciate it very much, but I feel that the pace is a bit slow, and some details are really unnecessary. Similarly, the human race has not come out yet (the Western fantasy elves will come out when they get it, and it will be funny if the human race becomes the western human race, so here is a bit of a rant), but overall it is good, come on! However, I personally feel that there is no need for the abyss. It is better to have other worlds. The creation Qinglian here should be Nuwa who has transformed into a disciple and accepted it. It can be said that I did not skip chapters in this book, which is rare, but for some, like the plot of the Hundred Thousand Mountains later, I personally feel that there is no need to be too detailed. Sometimes I feel that the flow of time is a bit slow. Now the Longhan catastrophe has become a confrontation with the abyss, which can be regarded as a confrontation between the prehistoric and the abyss. In this way, the future catastrophe will become a confrontation between the prehistoric and the abyss, and the pace can be accelerated. The focus is on the road. And the dialogue between the protagonist and the author is a bit too dramatic [laughter] Of course. I'm just going to talk about the author's own ideas. I also got new ideas from reading the novel. The new ideas here are different views on one thing. Views that I haven't thought of. But the variables in today's prehistoric times are too great and they are different. This is beneficial. There are also disadvantages. Those elven creatures in Western mythology should be based on the ideas of Western mythology. It does not mean that they are the same, but they have become their own things. They just use the same ideas. Overall, it is good. I give four stars because it leaves some room for improvement for the author [laughter] The upgrade pace is a bit fast, there is a lot of redundant self-talk, and some places are not very good. Reasonable, but generally good, and the writing style still has room for improvement. (I also want to say something to some readers: this book does not have a certain depth and you will not be able to understand it. You don't have to read it, because the audience is not you. The book also has shortcomings, but it is still acceptable to us.) Disadvantage one: the pace is too slow, and some things are unnecessary to write. Disadvantage two: God Hua Da Luo and Hunyuan Da Luo Jinxian are two concepts. You have to understand the difference and essence between other worlds and the prehistoric world. Disadvantage three: unnecessary talking to oneself too much. Many things can be said in general, too detailed. Disadvantage four: the feeling that the birth of the human race is truncated, and there are too few scenes from other races (the original prehistoric races, such as humans, demons clan, witch clan, dragon, phoenix and unicorn) Brother, you are not writing a Western fantasy. Those who don't know think you are going to write a Western fantasy. Guess why many ancient spiritual treasures do not have the feeling of weapon spirits 🤦 That is not allowed. You also create elemental elves and create other races. The birth of the human race has been abruptly cut off by you. The human race has not been born. Does the Great Dao allow other births? If you don't talk about Dao, just talk about Pangu, will you allow it? You have to know that the innate body is the key. Guess why no one created a race before Nuwa? Is it because I don't know how to do it, because I don't want to, or because I don't understand or don't know?

It's still very interesting. It would be perfect if I changed the paragraph about the witch ancestor's oath in Chapter 115. Change it like this: "My Emperor Jiang, thanks to the grace of Father God, Inheriting the laws of space, you should evolve into the god of the prehistoric space and maintain the stability of the prehistoric space. " "I Zhu Jiuyin, thanks to the grace of Father God, Inheriting the law of time, evolve into the god of time and maintain the development of time. " "I harvest, Jumang, Zhurong, Gonggong, Houtu, Thanks to the grace of God the Father and the law of the Five Elements, we should evolve into the Divine Palace of the Five Elements, maintain the operation of the Five Elements, and sort out the origin of the Five Elements of heaven and earth. " "I am as rich as a corpse, thanks to the grace of Father God, Inheriting the laws of weather and poison, he should evolve into the god of prehistoric weather, protect the prehistoric celestial phenomena, and regulate the prehistoric environment. " "I Qiangliang, Tianwu, Xizi, Xuanming, thanks to the grace of Father God, can inherit the laws of (Wind and Cloud) (Rain and Snow) (Thunder and Lightning) (Ice and Cold), When it evolves into the God of prehistoric wind and clouds/rain and snow/thunder and lightning/ice, In charge of the prehistoric wind and cloud/rain and snow/thunder and lightning/ice, Consolidate the origins of ancient times and promote the development of ancient times! " Anyway, it is the back door left by Pangu to the 12 Witch Ancestors. Because it is a back door, it does not conflict with the future God's Mansion. Besides, the future God's Mansion will definitely reach the place it should be. It's just a matter of good or bad, so there is no need to consider them at all. 🤭🤭🤭

If you continue to guess like this, Qinglian should be from the Wu clan. It is impossible for Nuwa Fuxi to obtain the Green Lotus of Good Fortune. The 12 Ancestral Witches should be conceived by Pangu's heart + the Green Lotus of Good Fortune. I don't know why Bu Zhoushan didn't send it over.