I'm Just a Little Transparent, Not Your Wife

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing fighting scenes that make you feel like you are actually there, and the character descriptions are also spot-on!

I'll deduct one point for being a two-parter. I will continue to watch it. The heroine's revenge on the scumbag is one of the highlights of this similar genre. One bad thing (personal opinion) is that there is no problem with Shuang Jie's forced love. The heroine is not Shuang Jie coming to persecute her Bai Yueguang (Bai Ning). I think it is better to write about the advantages and charm of the heroine better, and to tell the truth about the past life, so that Bai Ning can fall in love with the heroine little by little, instead of forcing her to like her. (Just a personal suggestion), I will wait and see how I write it later [Learned]

Let's talk about the double cleansing issue. I wanted to write about Shuang Jie But when I was making the settings, I didn't expect that this setting would be so easily misunderstood. So to explain, the heroine has never been touched by a man.

The text is okay, but there is really no need to be so entangled about whether a couple is a couple or not. You are not here to choose a concubine when reading this kind of novel. You are here to read the posts. If you insist on becoming the emperor of the Internet, then I can only say that you have it in your life. One more thing, write It's pretty good, at least at the upper-middle level. It's quite rare to see time traveler + reborn + system writing. It would be nice if the author didn't repeat some of Chu Yanli's past obedience. After all, it kind of affects the perception. There are no other big problems. Keep up the good work! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

Wonderful, really wonderful. The author's writing style is very good and the content is also very creative. I personally think this is definitely a good book. (Ps: If you have read the book 🍊🍑, then this one is written from the perspective of 🍑. Of course, this is just an analogy. There are still big differences between the two works) Come on, author, I hope to have the opportunity to see the completion of this work. I also wish the author good health, academic success, and happiness every day. I love you♬︎*(๑ºั╰︎╯︎ºั๑)♡︎

Overall, it's quite interesting [OK], and the subject matter and plot are pretty good. [I learned it] The protagonist turned into a little fox girl after traveling through time, and was abducted by the school beauty. [Sending my heart] Unexpectedly, the school beauty is still...

I have read Chapter 47 so far. Overall, I haven't read much. I think there are still problems. I don't really care about Shuangjie, but I do care about the interaction between the other system and the host. I don't particularly understand why a lot of people in the comment area are criticizing the system as human-machine. It may be a bit off in the first place, but in hindsight the system is very rational. Its goal is not to allow the protagonist to stay in this world, but to get the protagonist out of the original fate of destruction and return to the original world. So it keeps controlling the favorability. Why is this? Why does it have to be controlled at 80? Because it doesn't want the protagonist to be too attached to this world. The protagonist has his own world. This is the purpose of the system. And it's said that Bai Yueguang cultivated it, so that's my understanding and does not include other people's understanding. Bai Yueguang should be the first love that lives in other people's impressions. That's how I understand it anyway The system's approach is correct. It doesn't want the protagonist to fall too deep, because if it does, the protagonist has to replace the male protagonist. There are too many determining factors and the system doesn't dare to gamble. If you bet, what if you lose? The system will disappear, and the protagonist will remain in this world, because the soul that does not belong to this world will also cause the protagonist to wander on the edge of life and death and die accidentally. You may say that the heroine is a reborn person, and we all see her thoughts. But the system doesn't know that. Although it doesn't have many emotions, it does want to do its job well and stay alive. I think this is a fair evaluation. If there are any misunderstandings, please tell me. From what I've seen so far, I think it's better to gradually fade out the system, otherwise it will affect the look and feel too much.

Emmm, let me say here that the starting point of the system is correct. I have read too many Lily novels and most of them hope that their hosts can stay. I also know that you like forced love and yandere love, but the starting point of the system is not wrong. It just wants its host to choose for one more day. It is also for the sake of the safety of the host's life. The love of yandere is very heavy-bearing. If it is not done well in the novel, this book may not be from he The novel has a be ending, and the author can only control the pen in his hand to make this book have a perfect ending. This novel is very good to me. I usually rarely comment on it. I hope the author will continue to work hard~ [Sending Hearts] I really don't understand how some people are saying that this system is being sabotaged.

For someone who only reads Lily, there is no big problem with this book. The pace is neither too fast nor too slow. Although the main plot is somewhat similar to Chengtao, it also has many of its own characteristics [Like] [Got it] Come on , I just saw the part about turning into a yandere, and it really made me feel weak. I originally liked Bai Ning's soft and dull character, but suddenly the awakening memory suddenly filled in the hole and explained the original owner and reincarnation. Bai Ning's character has completely changed, but it is very stiff. It's strange that Bai Ning accepted this information without any waves. It feels like reading another book.

It's a relatively good article, but because some questions are not rated very high, few people read it. One is that it is updated slowly. But overall not bad. If you like FreeControl, you can check it out. Yandere is okay too. [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

Looks good! I'll keep it on my bookshelf, and I'll come back to read it when dozens of pictures are updated! [Top post][top post][top post]

Haokang, I feel so hot when I write it down, it's different from those who treat Bianbai as a female video You must keep it sweet👿

It's okay, but I'll deduct one point for being a double-cleaner. I probably won't read this book [laughing] I wish this book will get better and better, and the people who read it will become more beautiful (handsome) Goodbye everyone [laughing] Looking at the author's evaluation is a matter of subjective factors on my part. I was a little preconceived and left a bad impression on the author. [Pouts] So I changed my review (you can regret it if it's less than three days old? [Awkward laugh])

Nice looking, nice looking, clear structure. The logic is clear. It is truly one of the most beautiful of Xiaotian's articles. There are also many heartwarming moments in daily life. The description of the protagonist's psychological actions is gentle and delicate. Recommend.

This book is so good, especially when it is written that Lu Bu fought 300 rounds against Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but he was still unable to defeat Jia Baoyu holding an M416. In order to save Lin Daiyu, Zhu Bajie teamed up with Liangshan's 100,000 heavenly soldiers and generals to fight (the above is purely made up)

Although, the first few chapters don't look like Shuangjie [what] [what] [what]

It's amazing. This is the first time I heard that the White Moonlight system is actually afraid of people with too high favorability. If the favorability is too high, it has nothing to do with you. It's not like you can't run away. Your job is to fill up the favorability and let the host leave. What are you doing? [Smile]

The whole novel is very beautiful. The character description is very good. Both of them are yandere and love each other. A reborn person, a person who has been reincarnated countless times. Both of them are actors. Looking forward to how this novel will be written.

I'm here to enjoy, not to sin [face covering]

Overall, it is a good book. The plot is not procrastinating and the writing is very sweet. However, it can be seen that this is the first time for the author to write this kind of article, and some places are slightly poorly handled. All in all, it's worth a read and I hope the author will continue to work hard!

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Yes, it has a lot of sugar, the plot is quite novel, and it's very readable.

Author~Ten million tonic knife for me [crying]

It feels like the legendary anti-stress king, which is pretty good [laughs evilly]

Nice! Pretty good

Paper comment section series, what was the label of this book at the beginning, and who was it promoted to?

I'll give you 5 stars first, I'll see if I can take them back later.

Yes, I hope I can stick to it (*^▽^*)

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I think it's okay, don't mind too much, I hope it can be completed normally, it would be better if it could be updated faster It's finished, and it's still very good. Although sometimes I thought it was going to stop, it's very good-looking, not too much, and the whole process is quite sweet.