Doomsday Contract, Signed Right After Birth

(Top middle) Blue LV5+, 29.75/50 Points First impression 150%: sense of substitution 3, attraction 3 Basic setting 75%: plug-in 4⭐️, setting 3 Content 125%: Writing 3, Creativity 4⭐️ Structure 75%: Rhythm 2, Main Line 2 Details 75%: Character 2, Logic 3 Balance Penalty: None Highlight: plug-in Poison Point: Building Power Feelings: Your writing is too detailed, there is no plot, the process of establishing power is not that exciting, and you don't have enough experience to write it forcefully, which will be a disadvantage. It can be seen that the author is trying his best, but... Calculation process: 1.5×6+1.25×7+0.75×16=29.75 Points

Okay, it's really good, but the team is still rough. Let me make a few suggestions. 1. The team can go in the direction of giant companies 2. Those with superpowers who provide superpowers can obtain a share of the user's crystal core harvest (or receive it and be distributed by the company) 3. The specific task allocation has not been unified yet, but talent capabilities can be subdivided later (scientific research, think tank, lawyer team to life services) 4. Vehicles with special abilities must be equipped with 1 to 2 backup personnel (of course, if they are team members). If they are bus drivers, they can only be equipped with one. I didn't expect them to be like car drivers. Come on👏

There are no problems so far, it's worth watching

Okay, okay, it looks good

It's a hodgepodge, there are so many incredible powers [face covering]

Awesome, keep it up