Doomsday Awakening: Contract-Based Superpowers

(Upper middle) Blue LV5+, 29.75/50 Points First impression 150%: Sense of substitution 3, Attractiveness 3 Basic settings 75%: Plug-ins 4⭐️, Settings 3 Content 125%: Writing style 3, Creativity 4⭐️ Structure 75%: Rhythm 2, Main line 2 Details 75%: Personality 2, Logic 3 Balance points deduction: None Highlights: Plug-ins Poison point: Building power Feelings: Your writing is too detailed, there is no plot, the process of establishing power is not that exciting, and you don't have enough experience to write it forcefully, which will be a disadvantage. It can be seen that the author is trying hard, but... Calculation process: 1.5×6+1.25×7+0.75×16=29.75 Points

Okay, it's really good, but the team is still rough. I'd like to make a few suggestions. 1. Teams can go towards giant companies. 2. People with superpowers who provide superpowers can get a share of the users' crystal cores (or receive distribution from the company). 3. The specific task allocation has not yet been unified, but talent capabilities can be subdivided later (scientific research, think tank, lawyer team to life services) 4. Vehicles with superpowers must be equipped with 1 to 2 backup personnel (of course, if they are team members). If they are bus drivers, they can only be equipped with one. I didn't expect it to be like an Autobot. Come on👏

There are no problems so far, it's worth watching

Okay, okay, it looks good

It's a hodgepodge, there are so many incredible powers 🤦

Awesome, keep it up