The Arrival of the Original God, the Journey of Marvel

It was a pretty good book, but when I found out that in the Marvel comics, the descendant of Sun Wukong was a gangster with a rat tail, Yuanshi Tianzun had squinty eyes, and some other things, I knew that the Marvel comics worldview was full of prejudice against us, and then I also started to be full of prejudice against the Marvel IP, and I could always find faults in every aspect. [Cover face] I just discovered the typo now. The quality of this fanfic is still very good. I have no objection to this book. I just can't stand Marvel.

However, Lao Deng is great when he has full exploration. The setting is well written and has reasonable logic. It's rare. Very few people write good stories about settings like Marvel and Genshin Impact.

(Thanks to all the book friends for their comments, I would also like to share my general thoughts on this novel. I'm really not very good at characterization. This is mainly due to my ability, because I didn't feel like I could completely replicate the personalities and images of the characters in Genshin Impact from the beginning, so the setting of this article is Ying (Element/Abyss) wearing the skin of the character. When I started this novel, I thought that the character of Genshin Impact would play the image in screen memory in front of the main characters of Marvel to gain recognition. But because this is only Ying's role after all, when there is no Marvel audience, the essence of the character is Ying, so there will definitely be some OOC. This is also the name of this novel, and Ying's character has collapsed. (Of course, this setting was originally designed to ensure that there was an excuse when the early portrayal did not match the actual role of Genshin Impact.) The bright line of this book is the plot of the Marvel movie. I really didn't describe the characters very much outside of the plot. This is indeed because I have a problem with the rhythm. Because I have no experience, I am basically digging holes outside the bright line. So it is completely written from the perspective of Dark Line Ying. Based on my comments, some people should be able to guess that Dark Line is the erosion of the world by the abyss. In the end, we can probably see the first-level Abyss Ying vs. The second-level Abyss Sora. (It's hard to tell which one is the villain for a while) Xingqiu's performance is more inclined to the martial arts. Firstly, because of my skill level, I don't have much portrayal of Xingqiu's image. Secondly, because the scenes that can have a profound impact on Marvel characters are basically battles. In my setting of Xingqiu, when he appears, he basically encounters scenes that require fighting. In daily life, Xingqiu is directly on the background board (reading during the day and maintaining law and order at night). Yaoyao's scheming is purely because the purpose of the subcutaneous hookup is to gain recognition and establish contact, and has nothing to do with Yaoyao's own intentions. However, no matter how hard I try to hide it, this book does not portray the character of Genshin Impact too little. This is a problem of my personal ability. I can only see how I can adjust it in the future. I probably plan to add more scenes of the character of Genshin Impact and use more plots to portray the character. Finally, everyone is welcome to leave comments. I will try to correct any shortcomings based on the feedback. (Originally I didn't plan to post it in the book review section, but it turns out that some people don't know how to read it, so I'll copy it here.) I originally planned to put this passage in this chapter, but it is far beyond the 300-word limit. I feel that no one may read the main text, so I will put it here. Above, thank you all book friends again for your comments. I will continue to work hard to bring you a better reading experience. )

A pretty good book, one of the best among Marvel and Genshin Impact fan fiction. The deductible item is that the author is the author and I like to fill in some settings. This will lead to a lot of redundant parts in the article, as if the author just wrote down whatever settings he thought of. Although this can supplement the storyline, it is not necessary. I suggest improving it [Thinking]

It expresses the author's homesickness and at the same time expresses the author's nostalgia for his hometown. It makes the argument more concrete and comprehensive and makes the argument more convincing. It uses metaphors, personification, parallelism and other rhetorical techniques to express emotions through scenes. It uses the past to satirize the present. It uses the past to describe the present. It can be seen from the example that y is equal to 2x. When the voltage is constant, the greater the resistance, the smaller the current. So sodium bicarbonate reacts with hydrochloric acid to produce sodium chloride, water and carbon dioxide.

Super pretty! It's just that I told the author that I gave him a five-star review but didn't comment on it. He said that he and I were playing word games [crying]˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚It's really loveless. Please give me a reply from the author. [Cry]

I like this kind of daily writing style. Some people say it is hydrology, but I think it is quite warm. The traveler has another wonderful trip, making up for regrets, establishing bonds, realizing wishes, and having a happy ending. I thought Abyss Ying would have a better ending. After all, when Brother Abyss swallowed the Nibelungs, didn't I see the apologetic look in Brother Abyss's eyes, but I can also understand that Abyss Ying came across the wheel of life and has no relatives in this world. ꒦ິ^꒦ິ.

Very good, thoughtful, well-written, with a score of 7.1 And a score of 9 or above! Don't push it blindly, my friend, if you read it for more than 4 hours. Except that the heat is a bit low (Poet Yang Persimmon), everything else is fine! ! ! Continuous updates, no hydrology, and the most important thing is there! Create! New! , And it's not embarrassing! ! ! Very interesting! ! !

I like this book. It's not like other authors who always kill people for trivial matters [Love]

I heard that five stars are not awarded points, but I don't know if that's true, so I'll give it four stars just to be on the safe side. If anyone confirms the five-star rating, remember to give me a kick below and I will change the rating back. For now, the plot doesn't advance much, but the pace is pretty good and doesn't feel like it's dragging. I hope the author can continue to maintain this quality and insist on writing a complete ending. There's nothing wrong with it, it's a good read.

Very interesting development

The writing is very good, why is the rating not high [I understand][I understand][I understand]

No, is this right? Why do I feel that you are suppressing your fighting strength? [Almost crying]

Just because there are few themes and it doesn't collapse. I haven't rated it after watching it for so long. [Cover face]

You may not be very good at encouraging others, but you will still use other people's words of hope. The revolution has not yet succeeded, comrades still need to work hard

It's gold in the sea, I hope it won't end if you don't give it up

It's indeed pretty good-looking. In a fanfic, if you're interested in someone, you should think it's good-looking. If you don't belittle Tony and others, it shouldn't be considered derogatory, right? I can't feel it, but after other elements entered Marvel, Tony became begging for everything, very humble, and uncertain. This is a very magical feeling. Facing strong people, you should be humble and ask for help. But I see some Marvel fan fiction, which really feels like it is belittling Tony (//∇//)

The subject matter and concept are good, but the control of the rhythm is not very good.

It can only be said that it is good and don't pursue the game settings too much. According to the settings of the Genshin Impact game, Qiqi, Barbara, and Walnut all have resurrection mechanisms, but once the game settings are brought into the plot settings, it will appear to be a failure. If they also have this resurrection ability in the plot, then what do the rulers of death do? All I can say is don't pursue the game settings too much. It is indeed not the original Ying, a bit like the second-generation Ying but with a more serious personality.

I feel like the setting of this novel is very reasonable.

It's good to read a good book I don't understand how the writing is pretty good. Why is the rating so low because no one has read it?

It's okay, at least it's more innovative than other MJA articles.

The author cuts out a fragment of the Marvel Universe to guide travelers on a new journey. A very good novel, no poisonous points. Worth recommending. The rating is too low.

The plot concept is good, and the writing is one of the few in Tomato that made me endure to read it. Finally, I have a novel that I can read. I give it five stars. Thank you to the author (*σ´∀`)σ

A very reasonable and nice book

It's well written and quite innovative. I'm personally very curious about whether [Captain] will appear if the soul comes. Come on, author!

It's 300,000 words. Let me give you a rating. The idea is okay.

Author, you write well!

Very good, keep up the good work Keep up the good work😀😀

Urgent, emergency, emergency, don't be in a hurry, let me hurry first